My first draft of a crime thriller

1. Passageway (working title)
By
Finn Wheater
An Original screenplay
c/o Fine arts College 2017 02075860312

2. 1 DISTRIBUTOR IDENT 1
Global Films
2 PRODUCTION IDENT 2
Finish Films
3 PRODUCTION IDENT 3
Get that Productions
4 TITLE 4
White titles over black
Font: Trajan
Global films in association with
Finish Films Presents
A Get That Production
Sound Bridge:
We hear the sound of draws CREAKING whilst being opened
and closed, paper being shuffled and items being lifted
and put down.
5 INT.BEDROOM.DAY 5
A close up of a pair of hands wearing black gloves
reaching into a draw and pulling items of clothing out.
Draws of a desk are being opened and closed frantically.
The hands then slow down and pause over a small box.
We see a medium shot of the guys top half of his body,
from the perspective of the box. He’s wearing a pinstripe
suit and a black balaclava, his eyes are wide and fixed on
the box.
We then go back to the perspective of the man, he grabs
the box and walks away fast.
6 INT.CORRIDOR.DAY 6
The man walks hastily through the corridor, tripping up on
a pair of slippers, he looks at them for a moment, and
then carry’s on.
7 INT.STAIRCASE.DAY 7
He then starts to walk down the stairs, until, he hears
the jangling of keys at the bottom of the staircase. The
masked man then pauses, until walking backwards up the
stairs, very quietly and stealthily, with his eyes fixed
on the corner at the bottom of the stairs.

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8 INT.CORRIDOR.DAY 8
The masked man creeps through the corridor, trying not to
make the floor boards creek, until he opens the door to
another room slowly and quietly.
Meanwhile the audience hears the person downstairs closing
the front door, putting keys down, walking around and
boiling the kettle.
9 INT.CUPBOARD.DAY 9
The masked intruder creeps into the room, and hides behind
the door. He listens to the person downstairs with his ear
pressed to the door. The intruder accidentally makes the
floor he’s standing on creak whilst moving and freezes in
shock.
10 INT.DOWNSTAIRS.DAY 10
The man downstairs hears the creak of the floor above him
and stops what he is doing.
11 INT.CUPBOARD.DAY 11