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Complaint Letter
A Complaint Letter
                                                            Parangtritis Beach Hotel
                                                               December 30th, 2011

Dear Sir,
            I am one of your customers staying in your hotel. I am planning to
stay for a week from December 30th, 2011 to January 5th, 2012. So, today is my
first day here. I stay in room no. 217. As I stay here, I don’t find any
convenience as stated in your brochure. It is said that all rooms face to the
beautiful view of Parangtritis. On the other hand, I get a room which views to the
dumping area. It smells bad and very terrible.
            I have always wanted to be your customer in my visit to Yogyakarta
and I want to keep it forever if I get a good service from you. Otherwise, I would
have to look for another hotel which gives good service.
            I hope to hear from you very soon.
                                                                      Yours faithfully,

                                                                    Yulia Mufarichah
Reply to Complaint Letter
                                          Parangtritis Beach Hotel
                                             December 31st, 2011

Dear madam,

         Thank you for your letter of December 30th, 2011. we
are pleased to hear that you have planned to stay for a week in
Yogyakarta, but we must apologize for the inconvenience of
your condition here.
         We are promised to fix the condition. Our officers will
be willing to help you in moving all of your stuffs.
         Once again, please accept our apologies for this
condition.
                                                   Yours faithfully,

                                                       Eko Supriyadi
How to write a complaint letter
There are five components that we can
see in Letters of complaint. They are B,
P, S, W, C. Here is the detail:
1. Background
2. Problem - cause and effect
3. Solution
4. Warning (optional)
5. Closing
1. Background
In this section, the writer describes the situation he/ she has; e.g.

•   I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered last week
    from your company have not been supplied correctly.
•   I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction with the food and
    drinks at the 'Suka Mampir Restaurant' on Wednesday, 12
    February 2011 at 04. 00 p.m.
•   I would like to inform you that something is being worst to my
    new TV which I just have bought it in your store.
•   I would like to inform you that something is being worst to my
    mobile phone.

(You can write it by your own statement)
2. Problem –Cause and Effect
In this section, the writer may tell about the cause and effect to
the matters which is faced by writer. Look at the following
example of statements

Cause:
Now look at the following statements!
• On 10 February 2011 we placed an order with your firm for
  100 electric vouchers for mobile phone. The consignment
  arrived yesterday but contained only 90 electric vouchers for
  mobile phone.
• I stay in room no 217. As I stay here, I don’t find any
  convenience as stated in your brochure. It is said that all
  rooms face to the beautiful view of Parangtritis
Effect:
• This incident put our shop in a difficult position, as
  we had to make some emergency purchases to fulfill
  our commitments to all our customers. This caused
  us considerable inconvenience.
• After spending several wasted hours trying to
  register in this way, the computer would not accept
  my application.
• This large number of errors is unacceptable to our
  customers, and we are therefore unable to sell
  these books.
3. Solution
In this section, the writer suggests or gives the solution to
what problem he/ she gets; e.g.
• I am writing to ask you to please make up the shortfall
   immediately and to ensure that such errors do not
   happen again.
• Could I please ask you to look into these matters.
• Please send us a corrected invoice for $ 100
• I enclose a copy of the book with the errors highlighted.
   Please re-print the book and send it to us by next Friday.
• Please service your customer well
4. Warning (Optional)
In this section, the writer may warn to the person or institution he/
she complains. This section is not always appeared on the
complaint letter. It means that the writer may write it or not
(optional). E.g.:
• Otherwise, we may have to look elsewhere for our supplies.
• I'm afraid that if these conditions are not met, we may be forced
   to take legal action.
• If the outstanding fees are not paid by Friday, 20 February 2011,
   you will incur a 10% late payment fee.
• I will never buy it again in your shop.
5. Closing
In the last section, the writer state thankfulness and his/
her hope.. E.g.

• I look forward to receiving your explanation of these
  matters.

• I look forward to receiving your payment.

• I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
Notes!
• The heading of the complaint letter consists of the writer real and
  complete address and the date when the complaint letter is
  written.
• Don’t forget to fill “Inside address”. E.g. : The Director of Firman
  Company, The Owner of MAKMUR Electronic Shop, The
  Headmaster of SMA 1, etc.
• Use salutation; “Dear Sir, Dear Sir and Madam, Dear Mr.
  Amri, etc.”
• Use Closing salutation; “Yours faithfully, Your Customer, Your
  Students, etc.”
• Don’t forget to sign your signature and mention your real name!
Task!
Make a letter of complaint and the reply to your complaint based on one of the situations below!



                               1.   You bought a digital camera from the internet. It costs very high.
                                    But when you want to use it, it is unable to take picture.




      2.   You went to the mall to buy a dress. After paying it you went out
           of the mall, but suddenly the alarm went out. Apparently the
           cashier forgot to replace the alarm device attached to the dress.
           You were ashamed and wanted to tell the management of the
           mall about the carelessness of the worker.
THANK YOU
GOOD LUCK!

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Writing Complaint Letter

  • 2. A Complaint Letter Parangtritis Beach Hotel December 30th, 2011 Dear Sir, I am one of your customers staying in your hotel. I am planning to stay for a week from December 30th, 2011 to January 5th, 2012. So, today is my first day here. I stay in room no. 217. As I stay here, I don’t find any convenience as stated in your brochure. It is said that all rooms face to the beautiful view of Parangtritis. On the other hand, I get a room which views to the dumping area. It smells bad and very terrible. I have always wanted to be your customer in my visit to Yogyakarta and I want to keep it forever if I get a good service from you. Otherwise, I would have to look for another hotel which gives good service. I hope to hear from you very soon. Yours faithfully, Yulia Mufarichah
  • 3. Reply to Complaint Letter Parangtritis Beach Hotel December 31st, 2011 Dear madam, Thank you for your letter of December 30th, 2011. we are pleased to hear that you have planned to stay for a week in Yogyakarta, but we must apologize for the inconvenience of your condition here. We are promised to fix the condition. Our officers will be willing to help you in moving all of your stuffs. Once again, please accept our apologies for this condition. Yours faithfully, Eko Supriyadi
  • 4. How to write a complaint letter There are five components that we can see in Letters of complaint. They are B, P, S, W, C. Here is the detail: 1. Background 2. Problem - cause and effect 3. Solution 4. Warning (optional) 5. Closing
  • 5. 1. Background In this section, the writer describes the situation he/ she has; e.g. • I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered last week from your company have not been supplied correctly. • I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction with the food and drinks at the 'Suka Mampir Restaurant' on Wednesday, 12 February 2011 at 04. 00 p.m. • I would like to inform you that something is being worst to my new TV which I just have bought it in your store. • I would like to inform you that something is being worst to my mobile phone. (You can write it by your own statement)
  • 6. 2. Problem –Cause and Effect In this section, the writer may tell about the cause and effect to the matters which is faced by writer. Look at the following example of statements Cause: Now look at the following statements! • On 10 February 2011 we placed an order with your firm for 100 electric vouchers for mobile phone. The consignment arrived yesterday but contained only 90 electric vouchers for mobile phone. • I stay in room no 217. As I stay here, I don’t find any convenience as stated in your brochure. It is said that all rooms face to the beautiful view of Parangtritis
  • 7. Effect: • This incident put our shop in a difficult position, as we had to make some emergency purchases to fulfill our commitments to all our customers. This caused us considerable inconvenience. • After spending several wasted hours trying to register in this way, the computer would not accept my application. • This large number of errors is unacceptable to our customers, and we are therefore unable to sell these books.
  • 8. 3. Solution In this section, the writer suggests or gives the solution to what problem he/ she gets; e.g. • I am writing to ask you to please make up the shortfall immediately and to ensure that such errors do not happen again. • Could I please ask you to look into these matters. • Please send us a corrected invoice for $ 100 • I enclose a copy of the book with the errors highlighted. Please re-print the book and send it to us by next Friday. • Please service your customer well
  • 9. 4. Warning (Optional) In this section, the writer may warn to the person or institution he/ she complains. This section is not always appeared on the complaint letter. It means that the writer may write it or not (optional). E.g.: • Otherwise, we may have to look elsewhere for our supplies. • I'm afraid that if these conditions are not met, we may be forced to take legal action. • If the outstanding fees are not paid by Friday, 20 February 2011, you will incur a 10% late payment fee. • I will never buy it again in your shop.
  • 10. 5. Closing In the last section, the writer state thankfulness and his/ her hope.. E.g. • I look forward to receiving your explanation of these matters. • I look forward to receiving your payment. • I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
  • 11. Notes! • The heading of the complaint letter consists of the writer real and complete address and the date when the complaint letter is written. • Don’t forget to fill “Inside address”. E.g. : The Director of Firman Company, The Owner of MAKMUR Electronic Shop, The Headmaster of SMA 1, etc. • Use salutation; “Dear Sir, Dear Sir and Madam, Dear Mr. Amri, etc.” • Use Closing salutation; “Yours faithfully, Your Customer, Your Students, etc.” • Don’t forget to sign your signature and mention your real name!
  • 12. Task! Make a letter of complaint and the reply to your complaint based on one of the situations below! 1. You bought a digital camera from the internet. It costs very high. But when you want to use it, it is unable to take picture. 2. You went to the mall to buy a dress. After paying it you went out of the mall, but suddenly the alarm went out. Apparently the cashier forgot to replace the alarm device attached to the dress. You were ashamed and wanted to tell the management of the mall about the carelessness of the worker.