5. • Lack of complex topical background knowledge
• Unfamiliarity with conventional essay structure
• Difficulty building connections between texts
• Referencing issues cause plagiarism
• Inadequate use of evidence
• Rigid use of taught strategies
• Boring, but necessary evil
.obstacles.
6. • Reduce topical complexity / personalise
• Spread into scaffolded steps
• Incorporate digital tools
• Work alongside students and model actions
• Give timely personalised feedback
• Learn through doing
.solution.
13. • How many condos are under construction in
Toronto right now?
• What percentage of Torontonians live in condos
compared to houses?
• Are there any condo-related issues that occur
with certain developers?
• What benefits and detriments are created for the
city through further condo development?
What could I learn about?
Condos
15. .step 3.
Accessing & evaluating information
Instructions
for students
Mimicking of
the writing
process
Checks and
balances
16. .step 4.
Outlining & annotating
Instructions
for students
Mimicking of
the writing
process
Checks and
balances
Real-time feedback
http://bit.ly/1xdjcqU
Google docs
- Suggesting function
- Commenting function
18. .step 5.
Drafting & revising
Instructions
for students
Mimicking of
the writing
process
Checks and
balances
Linking in final product
http://fourc.ca/toronto1/
Drafting & modeling in
Google Docs & Vocaroo
http://bit.ly/1xdhcis
Explanation
http://fourc.ca/toronto2/
19. .step 5. Drafting & revising
Drafting & modeling in
Google Docs & Vocaroo
http://bit.ly/1xdhcis
22. A digital
writing
assignment
for EAP
students
Tyson Seburn
about.me/
seburnt
Model blog
essay
fourc.ca/
toronto1
My reflection
on this model
essay purpose
fourc.ca/
toronto2/
Sample Step 4
bit.ly/1xdjcqU
Sample Step 5
Vocaroo
vocaroo.com
Assignment
documents
bit.ly/
nyosawa
bit.ly/1xdhcis