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25 Tips for  Clearer  Writing From “The Magic and Craft of Media Writing,” by Carl Sessions Stepp
1. Stress substance over process. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
2. Install the main message in the main subject and main verb of a sentence. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
3. Choose concrete words and images. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
4. Go easy on the numbers. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
5. Shorten sentences. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
6. Limit the number of verbs per sentence. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
7. Keep subjects close to their verbs. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
8. Limit the number of clauses and prepositional phrases per sentence. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
9. Avoid multiple layers of modifiers. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
10. Avoid stacked modifiers.  ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
11. Use active voice to stress the main actor or action. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
12. Use passive voice to spotlight the recipient of action. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
13. Limit  to be  verbs. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
14. Zap weak verb constructions. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
15. Root out nominalizations. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
16. Cut down on jargon. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
17. Purge tag-along words. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
18. Curtail cliches. ,[object Object],[object Object]
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19. Banish euphemisms. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
20. Clarify ordinary words used in overgeneralized ways. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
21. Provide direction before detail. ,[object Object],[object Object]
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22. Establish a thought before modifying it. ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object],23. Slow down.
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24. Think ahead. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
25. Use comparisons. ,[object Object],[object Object]

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