2. No speech in this particular
part, setting the scene.
Still no speech in
this part, getting
more into the
lives of Cinderella,
wicked stepsisters and stepmother.
Introducing the
characters to the
reader, giving them a
feel of what to
expect
Image that is going to be used
on the first page.
Once upon a time, there was a
troubled young girl, father had
remarried wicked woman with
daughters. Daughters got everything,
Cinderella made to clean the house,
long days, nicknamed her Cinderella.
No, dear. I
am sending
you to the
ball.
More speech,
reader finds out
why the godmother
appears.. Cinderella
deserves to be treat
like a princess.
Cinderella still crying, thinking about the
prince dancing with her ugly step-sisters.
Blue flashing light appears, godmother,
tells Cinders she is going to the ball.
Image used for
this part of the
story, shows
mice cheering
Cinderella up.
Part talks
about the
ugly stepsisters being
clumsy and
fat.
Cinderella spent free time talking to the
animals, mice always tell Cinderella
how beautiful she is. Sisters dressed in
elegant dresses. Cinders only in rags,
cat tries to cheer her up.
Cinderella
shocked at
what the fairy
godmother can
do. Beautiful
carriage.
Image used,
to show the
fairy
godmother
transforming
the pumpkin.
No speech, in
this part just
emotion e.g.
shock.
Fairy godmother smiles and asks
cinders to fetch a pumpkin and seven
mice, transforms into a horse and
carriage.
I’m so
unhappy
!
Gradually
building up
the amount
of speech,
readers know
the
background
of the story
now.
Image shows Cinderella upsetemotions, readers want to find out
why she is crying.
Stormy morning, three dresses arrive
at the house for the ball. Prince
holding a ball to try and find a wife.
Cinderella not asking if she had got
an invite, knew she would be made to
stay at home anyway. Girls go to the
ball, Cinderella starts crying.
What
about
my
dress?
Cinderella goes
from rags to
riches, the real
magic starts to
happen here,
reader should feel
excited and
anticipating what
happens next.
Cinderella asks about her dress, godmother
chants, rags turn into a flowing dress,
Cinderella feeling excited and astonished.
3. May I
have this
dance
with
you?
Readers get to
understand that
the prince is
amazed that he
has never seen
this woman
before.
Only one bit of
speech at this
part, minimum
speech in the
book, children
imagine what
the prince
could be
saying..
Cinderella gets in carriage, arrives at
ball, no one recognises her, prince
asks her to dance.
No, you
may try on
the shoe.
No speech in this part of the story,
readers visualise the emotions.
Panic strikes Cinderella as she
realises she must get home before
the magic stops.
Cinderella dances with the prince
all night, forgets the time and
rushes off.
Rotoscoped
image
Happy ever
after, Cinders
gets the life
she deserves.
Next day, prince goes to every woman
in the village to find the woman who
fit the shoe, stepsisters feet too big
Cinderella fit perfectly, prince and
cinders get married
4. Once upon a time, there was a
troubled young girl. Her father had
remarried a wicked woman, who
had two revolting daughters. The
wicked stepmother showered her
two daughters in gold and
diamonds, but as for the poor
young girl, she had nothing. The
five of them lived on a council
estate and the young girl was made
to clean the house all day, every
day. They nicknamed her
Cinderella.
Picture always
on the right
hand side.
5. Cinderella spent
her free time
talking to the
animals, her
favourite pet mice.
Cinderella’s mice
always tell
Cinderella how
beautiful she is,
even though she
only has rags to
wear and her
stepsisters were
dressed in elegant
dresses. However
they would always
be more clumsy
and potbellied than
Cinderella would
ever be.
6. One stormy morning,
three pleasant dresses
arrived at the house.
The Prince was
holding a ball at the
palace that evening, to
find a suitable bride.
Cinderella daren’t ask
if she had got an
invite because her
stepsisters and step
mother would force
her to scrub the floors
again and make sure
everything was perfect
for when the wicked
trio arrived home.
After the ugly
stepsisters and
mother had gone to
the ball, Cinderella sat
and sobbed “I’m so
unhappy!”
7. Cinderella wept still, as she
thought about her stepsisters dancing with the
prince, the only man she ever
dreamed about. As
Cinderella went to wipe a
tear, a blue flashing
appeared and in the light
was a fairy godmother.
Cinderella whispered quietly
“Have I done something
wrong?” The fairy godmother
replied, “No dear, I am
sending you to the ball.”
8. The fairy godmother
smiled gently and asked
Cinderella to fetch her a
pumpkin and seven
mice.
In a flash, Cinderella
appeared with the
pumpkin and seven
mice, Cinderella placed
the items in front of the
fairy godmother.
The fairy godmother
then, waved her wand
and the pumpkin and
the mice turned into a
glorious horse and
carriage. Cinderella
gasped.
9. Cinderella then
asked “what about
my dress?”. Once
again, the fairy
godmother waved
her wand and
chanted “bibbity
bobbity boo” and
Cinderella’s rags
were turned into a
blue, sparkling,
flowing dress.
Cinderella felt so
excited and
surprised.
10. However, there was
one rule for
Cinderella, “You
must be home by
midnight” spoke
the fairy
godmother “after
midnight the magic
will fade and you
will return to your
rags.”
Cinderella
promised the fairy
godmother that
she would be home
by midnight and
climbed into the
carriage.
The fairy
godmother
watched as the
horses rode away,
pleased that
Cinderella’s dream
had come true.
11. As Cinderella walked into
the ball, the whole room
stopped to look at
Cinderella and the
beautiful dress she was
wearing. The Prince took
her hand and asked “May I
have this dance with you?”.
Cinderella danced with the
Prince all night and the
Prince replied “no” to
anyone who wanted to
dance.
Even Cinderella’s
stepsisters and wicked step
mother did not realise
Cinderella dancing with the
Prince.
However Cinderella did not
realise the time, and had to
rush away from the Prince.
12. In Cinderella’s rush, she
fled down the stairs and
left one of her glass
slippers behind.
Cinderella did manage to
get home in time and
went back to the
fireplace. The next day,
the prince and his father
went to every woman in
the village, asking if their
foot fitted the slipper.
Finally the Prince and his
father arrived at
Cinderella’s house. The
ugly stepsister
immediately ran to try
and fit into the shoe,
unfortunately for them
the shoe did not fit.
13. The Prince then called out
“Is there anybody else
living here?” Cinderella
tiptoed into the room, but
her stepmother tried to
shoo her away.
“No” shouted the Prince,
“Let her try on the shoe”.
The shoe slipped onto
Cinderella’s foot perfectly
and the Prince had found
his new bride.
Cinderella and the Prince
rode back, together in the
carriage and lived happily
ever after in the palace.