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Common Elements

     By Fern




      picture By   aussiegall
Wind
 Whistling past your ears
Telling you something you don’t know
Knocking at your window
Crunching the leaves at your front door
Filling lies before your eyes
Carrying feelings of hate and war
Silent or noisy
Buffets of air
One clan can have two sides to bare

                                          By TopTechWriter.US
Reflection
 Tool: heart
 Why the idea: Because its one of the elements
Was it easy or hard?: It was pretty hard because I was not very
                   interested in the subject
Revision: I think I could have made it rhyme a little more
Fire
 Fire is sharp
 Fire has temper
Try hard if you want a mentor
Fire is fluid
Fire is lasting
Do you even feel the blasting
Fire burns
 Fire hurts
 You never know where it can lurk
Fire is light
Fire is Dark                                    By ViaMoi


 Fire lights heat in the middle of the hearth
Reflection
Tool: heart
 Why this idea?: Because its one of the elements
 Hard or Easy: I think it was not too hard and not too easy
    because it was an easy topic but it was hard to rhyme


               Revision: I think I could have made it a little longer
Earth
Hard and Grieving
A place we call earth
What we step on
We mention to Church
Hard and Grieving
Is also evil
Many believe
You can saw it with a chisel
Reflection
Tool: Heart
 Why this idea?: Because its one of the four elements
  Hard or easy: I think this was the hardest of all the poems
    because there was not very much to write about earth

 Revision: I wanted to make it longer but I didn’t find anything else to fit it
Water
Running wild
And forever free
Is dreamer
To you and me
A clear minded
One of a kind
Maybe heavy
In its own times
Emotional and Empathetic
May follow its own path
Through Success
And Creativity
Reflection
Tool: Heart
 Why this idea: Because its one of the elements
  Hard or easy: It was pretty easy because I already had a source to take from


  Revision: I think I could have made it rhyme a little more
Death
When the body lies flat
When your blood starts to rust
When your beat softens
When your veins creak and crumble
When your eyes close and stay
  You can no longer move
Your breath escapes your grasp
Your hands twitch and shiver
Your body rots and decays
    Waiting and waiting...               By JKönig

 Your time is right
 Your soul leaves
 Your heart dies
  Your brain rots
 In a blink you are no longer there...
Reflection
Tool: Heart
 Why this idea: I just wanted to add it because its one of my favorite subject
 Hard or easy: I think it was easy because I already planned it two years ago

  Revision: I think I could have made it more descriptive
Common Elements Reflection
Why did you choose this theme?: I chose this theme
   because I love to describe things and objects
Thought of myself as a poet: I think I like serious
   rhyming poems than funny and silly poems

       Comments: I think I did a not too bad job on this anthology
The End




  Picture By jsmoral

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Fern's Poetry Anthology

  • 1. Common Elements By Fern picture By aussiegall
  • 2. Wind Whistling past your ears Telling you something you don’t know Knocking at your window Crunching the leaves at your front door Filling lies before your eyes Carrying feelings of hate and war Silent or noisy Buffets of air One clan can have two sides to bare By TopTechWriter.US
  • 3. Reflection Tool: heart Why the idea: Because its one of the elements Was it easy or hard?: It was pretty hard because I was not very interested in the subject Revision: I think I could have made it rhyme a little more
  • 4. Fire Fire is sharp Fire has temper Try hard if you want a mentor Fire is fluid Fire is lasting Do you even feel the blasting Fire burns Fire hurts You never know where it can lurk Fire is light Fire is Dark By ViaMoi Fire lights heat in the middle of the hearth
  • 5. Reflection Tool: heart Why this idea?: Because its one of the elements Hard or Easy: I think it was not too hard and not too easy because it was an easy topic but it was hard to rhyme Revision: I think I could have made it a little longer
  • 6. Earth Hard and Grieving A place we call earth What we step on We mention to Church Hard and Grieving Is also evil Many believe You can saw it with a chisel
  • 7. Reflection Tool: Heart Why this idea?: Because its one of the four elements Hard or easy: I think this was the hardest of all the poems because there was not very much to write about earth Revision: I wanted to make it longer but I didn’t find anything else to fit it
  • 8. Water Running wild And forever free Is dreamer To you and me A clear minded One of a kind Maybe heavy In its own times Emotional and Empathetic May follow its own path Through Success And Creativity
  • 9. Reflection Tool: Heart Why this idea: Because its one of the elements Hard or easy: It was pretty easy because I already had a source to take from Revision: I think I could have made it rhyme a little more
  • 10. Death When the body lies flat When your blood starts to rust When your beat softens When your veins creak and crumble When your eyes close and stay You can no longer move Your breath escapes your grasp Your hands twitch and shiver Your body rots and decays Waiting and waiting... By JKönig Your time is right Your soul leaves Your heart dies Your brain rots In a blink you are no longer there...
  • 11. Reflection Tool: Heart Why this idea: I just wanted to add it because its one of my favorite subject Hard or easy: I think it was easy because I already planned it two years ago Revision: I think I could have made it more descriptive
  • 12. Common Elements Reflection Why did you choose this theme?: I chose this theme because I love to describe things and objects Thought of myself as a poet: I think I like serious rhyming poems than funny and silly poems Comments: I think I did a not too bad job on this anthology
  • 13. The End Picture By jsmoral

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