12. Marcin Welner Przemyslaw KocznurPrzemysław Telążka Krzysztof Duralek Tomasz Tybon
Raghu Chakravartula Grzegorz Bar Łukasz Śliwa Taras Bazyshyn Aleksandra Staszewska
最高技術責任者 フルスタック開発者シニアソフトウェア
エンジニア
フルスタック開発者 営業部長
セキュリティーリード iOS開発者バックエンド開発者 Android開発者 製品オーナー
チーム
13. パートナー・アドバイザー
Douglas Pike
Lee Murphy Mateusz MachLee Hills
VeriCoin共同設立者
Corporate Options Opus財団トークンパートナー
Jamie McCormick
ビットコイン
マーケティングチーム
Dr. Jay Best
戦略顧問
Troutman Sanders
US 法律顧問
Yagub Rahimov
戦略アドバイザー
DONE Why doesn’t this cover slide utilise the visual branding seen at repux.io?
DONE What’s the focus here, the element to push forwards? And what can be neutral or in the background?
DONE This layout doesn’t present the name/branding clearly/strongly.
DONE What visual component can be added to make this cover slide more memorable?
DONE No emotive language or suggestion of “problem solved”. The only suggestion of an offer is the 50% discount (weak – which of course doesn’t matter if everyone seeing this presentation have already ‘bought in’ – but then why bother with this deck?).
DONE Suggest adding a strapline to help convey the essence of the offering.
DONE Font difference when compared with other slides. Changed to Saira font (may need embedding or changing to pixel image).
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
DONE - DAVID - ADD IN PAIN POINT, PLEASE WRITE.
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
Uses very efficient in terms of word count, but perhaps it will not emotionally engage the reader. LIVE WITH IT? YES – LIVE WITH IT.
Lacks story-telling qualities. LIVE WITH IT? YES – LIVE WITH IT.
DONE First slide that is dense with text and the text is small and all in one centre-aligned block. Can this be adjusted so it’s easier for the reader/viewer?
DONE No text style difference between slide heading and body text means it’s harder to scan for the heading.
DONE Here’s the solution described – but how will it impact (benefit) the lives of the people/groups it effects? – IMPACT NOW DISPLAYED IN QUOTE AT THE TOP OF SLIDE.
DONE The text collides with the diagram. Spacing needs attention.
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
DONE Small text, narrow columns and justified lines make it harder to read.
DONE Use some bolding / different colouring to highlight key phrases and figures.
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
DAVID: What is the intended meaning of these words?... “…or participants on the network managed using Oracles“
Why the triangular form for the diagram? What does it imply? - DAVID: “can remove , maybe we need a better way to explain the process”
NICK: I decided I would leave it as it is for now even though, possibly, we might be able to find a more descriptive form for the diagram. If it was removed, the idea it described might be missed by someone.
DONE - DAVID – Please add some essential points about distribution here. Then I will form the slide around the points.
DONE The info table collides with the diagram. The table collides with the information points below in a white font. Better spacing needed.
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
DAVID - “This consists of features that …” What does the word “this” refer to? Answer: Ecosystem. I changed the wording (NICK).
DONE Some re-wording and word-order adjustments.
DONE Line continues on bottom row – arrow to make it clearer?
DONE Font difference when compared with other slides.
DONE Spacing.
DONE Font difference when comp
DONE Spacing when compared with other slides.
DONE Formatting needs attention.
DONE - DAVID – please draft some concluding points and a call to action. Then I will form the slide around that content.
DONE Formatting needs attention.
Is this disclaimer text the best way to end the slideshow? – EMPHASIS NOW ON CONTACT INFO INSTEAD
DONE “Telegram” – what does this word mean? Is it an error? Also, that URL does not seem to work.