1. PEER FEEDBACK ON TREATMENTS
TREATMENT 1 ARTIST Celldweller TRACK Kill the Sound
What was received well?
My feedback for this was very positive. They thought the idea was very creative with a good narrative.
Idea for the music video suits the song perfectly and creates the right atmosphere.
What could be improved or added?
Problems raised where that it could be quite hard to make this idea on a small budget, and a lot of work
would be required to achieve it.
TREATMENT 2 ARTIST Venice TRACK Satellites
What was received well?
Itʼs a good concept that fits the themes and mood of the song well. The fact that is did something
different and didnʼt just use star images or something like that went down well.
What could be improved or added?
Itʼs very ambitious and so would be very hard to make. A performance aspect should definitely be
added, so the already described action is intercut with a band singing or playing in some way.
TREATMENT 3 ARTIST Protodeth TRACK End Is Here
What was received well?
The idea was thought to be strong, well structured, and well communicated. Itʼs a very good concept
that works in its simplicity. It was also thought that this idea would be fairly easy to do, yet still be a
good payoff. Good structure.
What could be improved or added?
The treatment could go into more detail on certain aspects, for example more information about the two
zombies and what activities they do.