3. Three P’s of a great web headline
Parsability
-Is it easy to understand?
-Do you understand the story without additional context?
Promise
-What the reader will get?
Proper Nouns
-Words that the reader seeks.
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Steve Martin
18. 5 Steps to a great web headline
1. Identify relevant words and information (proper nouns)
2. Identify what’s interesting about the story
3. Write, then rewrite
4. Find better verbs
5. Check with a colleague
o Bonus: Is it Tweetable?
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20. Relevant words: Relevant information:
Budget Deficit Women should make up half of the committee
Super Committee
Women
Debt Ceiling
Congress
$1.5 trillion
What’s interesting about the story?
- Women, who represent half the population,
should make up half of the super committee.
- A committee that decides our tax obligations
should represent the population by gender.
21. Women missing from Super Committee on deficit deal
Women absent from Super Committee on deficit deal
Call to action: Super Committee Must be Half Women
Super Committee Must be Half Women
Super Committee Should be Half Women
Budget Deficit Best Solved by Women
Budget Deficit Best Solved with Women
Why the budget deficit should be solved with women*
Is the budget deficit gender biased?*
Women: Deficit in the Super Committee
Female Deficit in the Budget Super Committee
Deficit: Women in Budget
Budget crisis needs a league of extraordinary ladies*
Secret weapon for the budget crisis: women
The case for a half-woman Super Committee
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water -Drop in precipitation by 4 - 5 %
peril -Will be 5 - 6 degrees warmer in the Central Valley
rain -Existing infrastructure can't keep up with
drought changes to climate
global warming
climate change
infrastructure
Central Valley
California
What’s interesting about the story?
-Something has to change in order to break even
-Existing infrastructure can't keep up with changes to climate
24. Report: Less rain, more pain this century for California water supplies
Rivers and dams can't keep up with California climate
Rivers and dams fall behind California's warming climate*
6 degrees of separation between…
6 degrees in Central California: The difference
6 degrees of heat in Central California may pinch water supplies
6 degrees of heat in Central California: the state is not ready
6 degrees of heat in Central California: state water supply not ready
Central California temps to rise by 6 degrees...
California still has no water
California still has water issues
California yet to overcome water crisis
For California water crisis, glass still half empty*
Why California rivers need more rain
26. How does Google work?
Crawls text, imitating user behavior
-Google crawls from left to right
-Google crawls from top to bottom
Headlines rule
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27. What does Google like?
Fresh content – news rules
Text, Text, Text
Relevant proper nouns
Linking out to quality pages
Being a credible established source of news
Quality sites linking to you
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