7. LIKE FUN
Things I Like Things I Do For Fun
CARE INTEREST
Things I Care About Things I’m Interested In
8. LIKE FUN
Things I Like Things I Do For Fun
• money
• baseball
• take trips
• hip hop
• go to the mall
• clothes
• surf the internet
• pizza
• talk on the phone
• video games
CARE INTEREST
Things I Care About Things I’m Interested In
• my family
• getting a job
• my pets
• computers
• my friends
• cars
• safe neighborhood
• going to college
• people being treated fairly
10. IDEA DETAILS
A sentence that needs more support What your audience needs to know
11. IDEA DETAILS
A sentence that needs more support What your audience needs to know
I was stopped in traffic on
I had a huge car accident. the freeway when a truck came up
behind me.
I heard his engine roar and I knew he
was going too fast.
He didn’t notice I was stopped so he
didn’t slow down until it was too late.
He slammed on his brakes but still hit
me.
Glass and metal went flying
everywhere.
I was scared. I didn’t know if I was
going to get hurt.
12. IDEA DETAILS
A sentence that needs more support What your audience needs to know
My car needed $5000 of The back end on the right side of my
repair work. car was completely flattened.
I couldn’t open the trunk or the right
rear passenger side door.
The car wobbled a lot.
I took the car to my mechanic and
he recommended a guy who does
body work.
He had the car for over a week and
and when it was done it looked
brand new.
He charged $5000 dollars for the
repair but my insurance paid for it.
14. TELL SHOW
Just say it very simply Describe it in detail
My basketball game had a It all came down to the final few
strange and exciting ending. seconds. We were behind my one
point, 57-56. We were going to go
for one shot. I was supposed to pass
it to Robert. He was our best
shooter, but he was blocked by two
players on the other team. If I didn’t
pass or shoot it, the ref would blow
the whistle and the other team
would take possession. O chucked it
as hard as I could toward the basket.
Everyone’s hands reached up for the
ball. No one could get their hands
on it. Then, a miracle happened. The
ball hit one of their players in the
head and bounced in the hoop as
the buzzer when off.
16. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice
that morning
SHOW
17. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning
SHOW
18. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
SHOW
19. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
SHOW
20. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
sun coming up
SHOW
21. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
sun coming up
our boat
SHOW
22. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
sun coming up
our boat
a group of ducks
SHOW
23. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
sun coming up
our boat
a group of ducks
it was cold
SHOW
24. TELL VISUALIZE & LIST
The lake looked really nice water smooth and clear
that morning mist rising up
fish jumping
sun coming up
our boat
a group of ducks
it was cold
SHOW
The water was as smooth as glass and clear enough that we could se almost all
the way to the bottom. Thin wisps of mist rose up all around us as our boat
glided slowly along. Occasionally, a fish would jump but we’d never actually see
it. We’d turn our heads at the sounds of the splash just in time to see the
circles of little waves expanding outward where the fish had come down.
Closer to shore, a group of ducks cut a v-shape in the quiet water as they
swam along. It was cold but he sun was coming up and I know that in a few
minutes int would start to get warm.
39. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love
Courage
40. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage
41. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
42. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
43. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
44. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
45. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
46. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
simply
47. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
simply
completely
48. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
simply
completely
totally
49. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
simply
completely
totally
50. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
unexpectedly
slowly
simply
completely
totally
51. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
slowly
simply
completely
totally
52. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
simply
completely
totally
53. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
completely
totally
54. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
totally
55. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
56. Happiness often
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
57. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
58. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
59. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
60. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
61. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
62. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
63. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
64. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
65. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
66. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply is achieved
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
67. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply is achieved
scars the soul
Honor completely
Hatred totally
Power
68. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply is achieved
scars the soul
Honor completely overpowers people
Hatred totally
Power
69. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply is achieved
scars the soul
Honor completely overpowers people
Hatred totally changes nothing
Power
70. Happiness often just shows up
Friendship occasionally requires effort
Love never is misunderstood
hurts others
Courage usually
helps others
Honesty sometimes makes a difference
Deception rarely sneaks up on you
Talent unexpectedly changes people
Success slowly takes over
Pride simply is achieved
scars the soul
Honor completely overpowers people
Hatred totally changes nothing
Power sort of