1. The Zack Files in
Failed the Test! But Passed!
Logo and Story by Nick Haul
Edited by Michael Broad
Chapter 1:
It was my school day. Not an ordinary private school like last time. Its
my Elementary School. It‟s the best school ever. Ho! And I have to
complete my task, I mean, ur…. Oh, my Science Test today. So, I
woke up in the morning sunrise. I done everything I have in morning. I
was ready to go to school. The bus stopped and I went in. After I
reached, I went inside my hall then to my locker. My locker was shiny
with sprinkling lights blinking. I like my school. “All right class, its time
for your test!” Miss Grandson announced. I was so nervous that if I fail
my test, my dad will punish me to run around and get headache.
What a crazy punishment? Its only the run around punishment. Oh, I
need to go to my test. “Ok class testers, you got 5 minutes to answer
30 science questions. Class, u may begin.” My teacher, Mrs Emily
said.
Chapter 2:
After I finished, it was recess time. We only got 30 minutes for
intermission. Then it will show the test marks. After 30 minutes, I and
my mates went back to class. The teacher gave the papers with a
one word called: „F‟ means FAILED!!!!!! “Class, you have failed your
science test! So, we are going to do a retest. Take your papers home
and show it to your parents. And they will make you revise again for

2. next retest on TOMORROW, understand?” Mrs Emily said. “Yes
teacher.” What! I failed!! Oh no, dad is going to make me do that
run around 199 times!
Then it was the next bad weirdly lesson I ever heard, “The P.E.” I hate
one of that lessons! Because its driving me crazy.
“!@#$%^&*()_+_)$$^#&#@!!” And after PE lesson, it was dismissal
time. I went back home to show the paper I failed. Then I MUST
revise! Normally then, My dad came back home. When I showed
him,……. He was so angry and asked me to run around 199 times.
Oh man! I gotta revise again for the test. After ran 210 times that I
didn‟t know, my dad angrily said why did you run 210 times? I only
asked you to run 199 times you **** boy!
Editor: The symbols **** shows (deaf) Because Zack ran 210 times but dad asked him only 199
times. Means he did not listen. Please take note that.
Dad, can I go and revise my retest. “Yes, but what did u just said?” I
said retest. “Retest (x6)!” Oh okay. I mean go quickly!” Dad accused
me.
Chapter 3
At 7pm, Zack went to revise his retest. At 9pm, he finished revising.
After 1 day, he went to school and was so wicked, nervous and
„laziness‟. While then, it was retest time. I and my mates sat down
and got ready for the test. Before that, I nervously was the only last
one ready for the test. The teacher was looking sharp at me! So do
my mates! Then I was embarrassed like last time that I got a girlfriend.
Then my friends started making me embarrassed. Ready for the
retest everybody? Mrs Emily told. Yes. I and my mates replied
nervously. The teacher started to give the retest to me and my
classmates.

3. Chapter 4
After the test, the bell rang. And it was recess time. I went to tell my
friends how the test was it. Then my friends added “boring!” The
teachers don‟t give us retest. What happened? I told. What
happened was that some of their teachers didn‟t see! That‟s why,
okay! My friend Susan told with her gang. After recess, the teacher
started giving back the test. I was still nervous that if I fail again, Im
going to be put in the hot soup. When Mrs Emily was going to give
me back the retest, she said, “Pass!” Then I looked up to my paper.
Mrs Emily gave me a „red P chop‟. I was happy! Yay! Class, there are
2 pupils who passed, our dearest pupils who passed is… Zack and
Susan! Mrs Emily gave 2 chocolates to me and Susan. I was happy
now. When it was dismissal, I ran to my house. I called dad, there‟s a
surprise for you…. What is it son? Dad asked. I‟ve passed my retest. I
told him. “Well done son, you have deserved it this time Zack, and I
bought you something. Dad told. What is it, I wonder what it could
be now… I said. I give you… your favorite rock guitar! Dad told.
Thanks dad! I said. Then I enjoyed my guitar as well.
The End
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