1. ENGLISH ADVANCED I
ESSAY III
PROF. JOSADAC FLORES PÉREZ
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2. Topic:
Write your third essay about the
same topic you wrote your first
essay of the semester.
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3. You MUST turn in the following:
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4. 1.Brainstorming -(I piece of paper)
2. Outline –(1 piece of paper )
3.Draft/Peer review
(Rough draft with GRADING CRITERIA)
4.Final draft (APA format)
*see WRITING PROCESS/ JANE SCHAFFER WRITING PROGRAM(REVISED)
POWER POINT PRESENTATION.
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5. Specific directions:
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6. 1. Cover Page
2. Double space
3. ARIAL
4. Font 12
5. Margins set to APA standards
6. 4 paragraphs
7. 20 sentences
8. 1 printed resource
9. 1 electronic resource
5. Reference page (APA format)
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7. Grading Criteria:
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8. Coherence (1 point each)
Yes or NO
1. Does student have a clear Thesis statement?
2. Does Topic Sentence 1 relate to the Thesis Statement?
3. Does Topic Sentence 2 relate to the Thesis Statement?
4. Does Concrete Detail Sentence 1 support Topic Sentence 1?
5. Does Concrete Detail Sentence 2 support Topic Sentence 2?
6. Do Opinion Sentences support Topic Sentences 1 and 2
accordingly?
7. Does the Student come to a conclusion in the Closing
Sentence of each Paragraph?
8. Does the final paragraph come to a conclusion about the
Thesis Statement?

9. Grammar (1 point each)
Yes or NO
1. Does Student use Third Person?
2. Does Student avoid run on sentences?
3. Does Student use academic vocabulary?
4. Does Student use punctuation correctly most of the
time?
5. Does student capitalize correctly all of the time?

10. Format ( 1 point each)
Yes or No
1. Does student use Arial, font 12?
2. Does student have double space?
3. Did student indent the 1st line of each paragraph?
4. Does student have APA format margins
5. Does student have a header and pager number?
6. Does student have APA format in text citations?
7. Does student have a APA format References page?

11. *USE this GRADING CRITERIA to
give feed back you your
classmate (peer review)
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