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Terms Test
Writers' Workshop: Poetry
You will have 25 minutes to
take your test. We will
reconvene at 12:00. Feel
free to turn over your test
and leave the room if you
finish early.
WRITERS' WORKSHOP: POETRY
POETRY WORKSHOP
 Get into your groups
 Pass out your poems so that everyone in your group has a copy
 Take turns reading them aloud; Note obvious errors (typos,
  spelling) by marking on the text as the reader reads.
 Read everyone’s poetry before making comments about content,
  style, and conventions.
 Use the handout as a guide for your comments. Ask yourself the
  11 questions about each poem. Where should the writer focus his
  or her efforts in revision?
 Write on the page of poetry. Use the margins or the back for your
  comments.
 DO NOT write on the poetry revision workshop handout
STEPS TO REVISION: AT HOME

1.      Carefully and thoughtfully review the suggestions your
     readers have given you.
2.      Make the changes that will improve your poem
3.        Put aside the poem for several hours or longer. This kind of
     literal space/time distance will allow you to gain some
     objectivity.
4.      Revisit your poem and the revision suggestions.
5.      Make further changes
6.      Read your revised poem aloud
7.      Revise again
HOMEWORK
Post # 6: Project #1
Reminder about Writing Submissions:
All out of class assignments are to be submitted to me electronically before the class
     period in which they are due. They must be submitted as an attachment in
     Microsoft word. No other saved forms are acceptable. If you do not have
     Microsoft word software available, leave yourself time to save and send your work
     from a library computer. Work must also be in MLA format. I will read and return
     work in the order it is received, with comments both in the text and in the
     margins. To see comments and suggestions, go to “view” and click on “mark-up.”
     You may revise from this electronic document. Remember to accept or discard
     comments and remarks as appropriate.

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  • 3. You will have 25 minutes to take your test. We will reconvene at 12:00. Feel free to turn over your test and leave the room if you finish early.
  • 5. POETRY WORKSHOP  Get into your groups  Pass out your poems so that everyone in your group has a copy  Take turns reading them aloud; Note obvious errors (typos, spelling) by marking on the text as the reader reads.  Read everyone’s poetry before making comments about content, style, and conventions.  Use the handout as a guide for your comments. Ask yourself the 11 questions about each poem. Where should the writer focus his or her efforts in revision?  Write on the page of poetry. Use the margins or the back for your comments.  DO NOT write on the poetry revision workshop handout
  • 6. STEPS TO REVISION: AT HOME 1. Carefully and thoughtfully review the suggestions your readers have given you. 2. Make the changes that will improve your poem 3. Put aside the poem for several hours or longer. This kind of literal space/time distance will allow you to gain some objectivity. 4. Revisit your poem and the revision suggestions. 5. Make further changes 6. Read your revised poem aloud 7. Revise again
  • 7. HOMEWORK Post # 6: Project #1 Reminder about Writing Submissions: All out of class assignments are to be submitted to me electronically before the class period in which they are due. They must be submitted as an attachment in Microsoft word. No other saved forms are acceptable. If you do not have Microsoft word software available, leave yourself time to save and send your work from a library computer. Work must also be in MLA format. I will read and return work in the order it is received, with comments both in the text and in the margins. To see comments and suggestions, go to “view” and click on “mark-up.” You may revise from this electronic document. Remember to accept or discard comments and remarks as appropriate.