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Factual Writing Copy 
Task 1- Analysis of Factual Writing. 
Jonah Adshead
Leaflet- Be a Star Breastfeeding 
The choice of using pink for 
headings and separating 
lines works for the target 
audience of breastfeeding 
mothers. 
Breastfeeding is the best 
option for the baby and the 
mother. Because of this the 
leaflet is biased and pro-breastfeeding. 
Although it is largely biased, the 
leaflet does contain some 
evidence against breastfeeding, 
here the woman admits 
breastfeeding is hard. 
Bolding here highlights the 
words “You” and “your” 
expressing the importance 
of the mother and the baby 
reinforcing the fact that 
whether they breastfeed or 
not is their decision. 
Use of images showing the ladies as 
very glamorous and womanly could be 
used to anchor the point that the NHS 
believe breastfeeding is something that 
women should be doing. 
Headings in bold reinforcing 
that these women are 
normal- but the fact that 
they breastfeed makes them 
a “Star”. 
The way the information is 
presented in bullet points 
makes it clear and concise. 
The leaflet has grammatical 
contractions throughout 
using a more informal 
register for the piece to 
make it seem like it is a 
normal women speaking. 
It is essential that a leaflet 
from a health organisation is 
accurate with its 
information and advice, so 
all the points in this piece 
will have been carefully 
checked.
Here the leaflet miss out evidence of 
argument by failing to mention the 
possibility that the mothers parents 
breast fed and that they should choose 
not to do the same as them in that 
instance. This shows more evidence for 
bias. 
The use of star graphics rather 
than the usual dot bullet point 
makes the leaflet more 
decorative but also adds to the 
womanly theme to the piece 
and links in with the repeated 
line; “she's a star”. 
The font used in this leaflet is easy to 
read although it is relatively small, this 
is good as it allows the information to 
be clear. 
Quotes from the women build the 
argument and form a relatable 
viewpoint for the mothers reading that 
can be very persuasive. 
Leaflet- Be a Star Breastfeeding
How to- Digital Camera’s Shoot Dynamic Kid’s Portraits. 
Grammatical 
contractions and the fact 
they have not used very 
hard to read words 
throughout the piece 
sets an informal register 
allowing the reader to 
understand the piece 
easily. Use of bullet points 
here lays the 
information out well 
making it easy to 
All through the piece read and concise. 
the writer isn't only 
giving instructions 
on what to do but 
also gives little tips 
and bits of advice 
that instructions 
would not bother to 
include
How to- Digital Camera’s Shoot Dynamic Kid’s Portraits. 
Lots of photographs used in this to 
demonstrate what the how to article is 
telling the reader what to do. 
Rather than bolding, this piece has just 
used a larger font size to draw 
attention to the headings of the 
different sections. This is still effective 
and is just a less harsh and heavy way 
to draw attention to a specific part of 
writing. 
To feature photographs of 
people, especially ones of 
children, correct permission 
must be sought and 
attained. In order for the 
magazine to publish this 
article they will have gotten 
all of this permission.
Instructions- Origami 
Uses the register of instructions, 
this isn't usual grammatically 
correct sentences but sentences 
structured in the best way to 
clearly and concisely present 
instructions. 
Numbers are used to show the order of 
instructions clearly so they can be easily 
followed. The Numbers are in bold so that 
they can be easily seen by the reader. 
The use of images in this 
set of instructions supports 
each step by showing a 
visual representation of 
what that instruction is 
telling the reader to do. 
The font is simple and easy to 
read, and the use of only the black 
text on the white background 
makes the text even easier to 
read. 
With all publications, an 
illustrator must have given 
permission for his work to 
be used. If someone else’s 
work is used without their 
permission this infringes 
copyright and legal action 
can be taken. Because of 
this permission will have 
been sought for the use of 
the illustrations.
Factual Journalism- Vice 
Use of bolding here draws 
attention to the piece heading, 
and the name of the journalist. 
Another tool that has 
been used to draw 
attention to specific parts 
of the article is a drop 
capital. Here it has been 
used to draw attention to 
the beginning of the 
article. 
Use of large image draws 
attention to the article, 
especially with the image 
being of a gun; a very 
visually striking object. 
The fact that the gun has been photographed lined 
up next to rulers and has serial numbers clearly 
presented makes it look as though it has been 
photographed for police evidence. This image could 
have been used to anchor the fact that guns are a 
bad thing and to support the journalists opinion. 
As the article goes on to explain, this gun is in fact a gun that had been used to 
commit a murder and is police evidence. Because of this special permission 
will have been sought to attain and use this image in order to not break any 
laws. 
The article is set out in columns. This 
is the standard way for most 
journalistic pieces to be set out and 
this is probably due to the way it 
presents the information very clearly 
and makes it easy to read and 
understand. 
Referencing a recent, well 
known murder involving an 
innocent bystander works to 
support the journalists opinion 
that guns are bad as it is 
something that many readers 
of this article will have heard of 
and have been appalled by.
Factual Journalism- Vice 
Use of a quote from a former 
murder squad detective adds 
weight to the journalists 
argument by validating his 
point. 
This article is definitely 
biased against gun crime and 
shows it in a very dark light. 
their is mention of murders, 
crime rates and the journalist 
has got statements from 
police but no gangsters, this 
doesn’t show both sides of 
the argument. 
The article uses standard 
English with no slang or 
grammatical contractions 
except in quotes. This makes 
the information presented in 
the article clear and easy to 
understand but also gives the 
journalist the appearance of 
being educated. This makes a 
reader more likely to believe 
and side with them on a 
point they are making. 
The typography in this article is 
simple and easy to read serif 
font that looks quite formal and 
makes the text clear and easy to 
read. 
The caption here adds 
information to the photograph 
below explaining what it shows 
and giving the reader some 
extra background information.

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Analysis

  • 1. Factual Writing Copy Task 1- Analysis of Factual Writing. Jonah Adshead
  • 2. Leaflet- Be a Star Breastfeeding The choice of using pink for headings and separating lines works for the target audience of breastfeeding mothers. Breastfeeding is the best option for the baby and the mother. Because of this the leaflet is biased and pro-breastfeeding. Although it is largely biased, the leaflet does contain some evidence against breastfeeding, here the woman admits breastfeeding is hard. Bolding here highlights the words “You” and “your” expressing the importance of the mother and the baby reinforcing the fact that whether they breastfeed or not is their decision. Use of images showing the ladies as very glamorous and womanly could be used to anchor the point that the NHS believe breastfeeding is something that women should be doing. Headings in bold reinforcing that these women are normal- but the fact that they breastfeed makes them a “Star”. The way the information is presented in bullet points makes it clear and concise. The leaflet has grammatical contractions throughout using a more informal register for the piece to make it seem like it is a normal women speaking. It is essential that a leaflet from a health organisation is accurate with its information and advice, so all the points in this piece will have been carefully checked.
  • 3. Here the leaflet miss out evidence of argument by failing to mention the possibility that the mothers parents breast fed and that they should choose not to do the same as them in that instance. This shows more evidence for bias. The use of star graphics rather than the usual dot bullet point makes the leaflet more decorative but also adds to the womanly theme to the piece and links in with the repeated line; “she's a star”. The font used in this leaflet is easy to read although it is relatively small, this is good as it allows the information to be clear. Quotes from the women build the argument and form a relatable viewpoint for the mothers reading that can be very persuasive. Leaflet- Be a Star Breastfeeding
  • 4. How to- Digital Camera’s Shoot Dynamic Kid’s Portraits. Grammatical contractions and the fact they have not used very hard to read words throughout the piece sets an informal register allowing the reader to understand the piece easily. Use of bullet points here lays the information out well making it easy to All through the piece read and concise. the writer isn't only giving instructions on what to do but also gives little tips and bits of advice that instructions would not bother to include
  • 5. How to- Digital Camera’s Shoot Dynamic Kid’s Portraits. Lots of photographs used in this to demonstrate what the how to article is telling the reader what to do. Rather than bolding, this piece has just used a larger font size to draw attention to the headings of the different sections. This is still effective and is just a less harsh and heavy way to draw attention to a specific part of writing. To feature photographs of people, especially ones of children, correct permission must be sought and attained. In order for the magazine to publish this article they will have gotten all of this permission.
  • 6. Instructions- Origami Uses the register of instructions, this isn't usual grammatically correct sentences but sentences structured in the best way to clearly and concisely present instructions. Numbers are used to show the order of instructions clearly so they can be easily followed. The Numbers are in bold so that they can be easily seen by the reader. The use of images in this set of instructions supports each step by showing a visual representation of what that instruction is telling the reader to do. The font is simple and easy to read, and the use of only the black text on the white background makes the text even easier to read. With all publications, an illustrator must have given permission for his work to be used. If someone else’s work is used without their permission this infringes copyright and legal action can be taken. Because of this permission will have been sought for the use of the illustrations.
  • 7. Factual Journalism- Vice Use of bolding here draws attention to the piece heading, and the name of the journalist. Another tool that has been used to draw attention to specific parts of the article is a drop capital. Here it has been used to draw attention to the beginning of the article. Use of large image draws attention to the article, especially with the image being of a gun; a very visually striking object. The fact that the gun has been photographed lined up next to rulers and has serial numbers clearly presented makes it look as though it has been photographed for police evidence. This image could have been used to anchor the fact that guns are a bad thing and to support the journalists opinion. As the article goes on to explain, this gun is in fact a gun that had been used to commit a murder and is police evidence. Because of this special permission will have been sought to attain and use this image in order to not break any laws. The article is set out in columns. This is the standard way for most journalistic pieces to be set out and this is probably due to the way it presents the information very clearly and makes it easy to read and understand. Referencing a recent, well known murder involving an innocent bystander works to support the journalists opinion that guns are bad as it is something that many readers of this article will have heard of and have been appalled by.
  • 8. Factual Journalism- Vice Use of a quote from a former murder squad detective adds weight to the journalists argument by validating his point. This article is definitely biased against gun crime and shows it in a very dark light. their is mention of murders, crime rates and the journalist has got statements from police but no gangsters, this doesn’t show both sides of the argument. The article uses standard English with no slang or grammatical contractions except in quotes. This makes the information presented in the article clear and easy to understand but also gives the journalist the appearance of being educated. This makes a reader more likely to believe and side with them on a point they are making. The typography in this article is simple and easy to read serif font that looks quite formal and makes the text clear and easy to read. The caption here adds information to the photograph below explaining what it shows and giving the reader some extra background information.