Across our interfaces, products, apps, and services we send a whole bunch of content types out into the world and all of it is an integral and essential part of the user experience. How do we ensure that our broader design and content strategies reach the more granular level of words we choose? This talk will share strategies for bringing a content lens to your work and approaching content as a touchpoint. Talk for edUi 2017.
1. Giving Words the
Attention They Deserve
Heidi Steiner Burkhardt
User Experience Specialist
University of Michigan Library
@heidi_sb
#edui_words
September 25, 2017
15. Use of the word âtouchpointâ
âA touchpoint is a point of interaction involving a specific
human need in a specific time and place.â
- Chris Risdon
http://adaptivepath.org/ideas/un-sucking-the-touchpoint/
Google NGram Data
1970
1990
2000
#edui_words
17. #edui_words
Find out if the library has a book you want, go get it,
and check it out
Book
Available
Search Results
Hours,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Book
checked
out
Book not
owned
Place hold
Get
notification
Request
through
ILL, etc.
Check out
at desk
Find in the
stacks
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Place an interlibrary loan request for an article that is
not available in full-text
Article is
abstract
only
Search
Results
Link
resolver
page
Access ILL
system
Fill out
form
Get
notification
Access ILL
system
Open,
download
article
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Learn about and attend an event
Arrive at
event
Social
media
Email
newsletter
Flyer
Details,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Website
Blog
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University of Michigan Library
Website. Catalog. Institutional repository. Data repository.
Digital Collections. Research Guides. Online exhibits.
WordPress microsites. Blogs. Twitter. Facebook.
Newsletters. Discovery search interfaces. 100s of licensed
databases. 10,000s subscription based online journals.
Instruction request system. MiVideo. Course reserves.
Document delivery services. Book request services. Study
spaces. Event spaces. Exhibit spaces. Service points. Stacks.
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Pause to check-in. Are we all here?
1) Recognizing that what qualifies as
content is a big, beautiful beast
that goes far beyond web pages
2) At least marginally warming up to
the argument for treating content
as a touchpoint
23. #edui_words
Policies and general info
â About us
â Informational pages
â Hours
â Events
Support
â Help pages
â FAQs
â Self-help knowledge
base entries
â Instructional content
â How-to guides
Basics
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Interface language and microcopy
â System alerts
â Status messages
â Button text
â Form labels
â Email and text notifications
Micro
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Marketing and outreach
â Email newsletters
â Social media
â Press releases
â Case studies
Editorial
â Articles
â Blog posts
Messaging
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A framework for approaching your content...
What type of copy am I writing?
What are the userâs potential goals?
What might their emotions be?
What does my writing need to convey?
32. #edui_words
Find out if the library has a book you want, go get it,
and check it out
Book
Available
Search Results
Hours,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Book
checked
out
Book not
owned
Place hold
Get
notification
Request
through
ILL, etc.
Check out
at desk
Find in the
stacks
34. #edui_words
What time does the library close?
Potential emotions:
Interest, anticipation, trust
When you write, be:
Clear, concise
Strategies:
Make the current dayâs hours obvious.
Present complex hours clearly.
Policies and
general info
Goal: Find
needed info
35. #edui_words
Find out if the library has a book you want, go get it,
and check it out
Book
Available
Search Results
Hours,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Book
checked
out
Book not
owned
Place hold
Get
notification
Request
through
ILL, etc.
Check out
at desk
Find in the
stacks
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Interface
language &
microcopy
Placing a hold request
Potential emotions:
Joy, anticipation, optimism
When you write, be:
Clear, affirmative, friendly
Sample copy:
Success! We got your request and will let you
know when itâs ready.
Goal:
Accomplish
something
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Placing a hold request
Potential emotions:
Annoyance, anger, surprise, confusion
When you write, be:
Gentle, calm, kind, clear, helpful
Sample copy:
Weâre sorry. Something went wrong. Use the
Ask Us link for help.
Interface
language &
microcopy
Goal:
Accomplish
something
39. #edui_words
Place an interlibrary loan request for an article that is
not available in full-text
Article is
abstract
only
Search
Results
Link
resolver
page
Access ILL
system
Fill out
form
Get
notification
Access ILL
system
Open,
download
article
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Consulting support documentation
Potential emotions:
Apprehension, interest, confusion
When you write, be:
Straightforward, useful, encouraging
Strategies:
Be specific. Explain without insulting the
userâs intelligence. Walk through steps and
donât assume knowledge.
Support
Goal: Get
help
42. #edui_words
Place an interlibrary loan request for an article that is
not available in full-text
Article is
abstract
only
Search
Results
Link
resolver
page
Access ILL
system
Fill out
form
Get
notification
Access ILL
system
Open,
download
article
43. #edui_words
Consulting support documentation
Potential emotions:
Joy, anticipation, optimism
When you write, be:
Positive, friendly, clear
Sample copy:
Good news! Your interlibrary loan request is
ready. Sign in to access and download it.
Interface
language &
microcopy
Goal:
Expecting a
message
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Learn about and attend an event
Arrive at
event
Social
media
Email
newsletter
Flyer
Details,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Website
Blog
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Learn about an event via social media
Potential emotions:
Interest, distraction, curiosity
When you write, be:
Enthusiastic, engaging, conversational
Strategies:
Keep it useful and interesting. Prioritize your
content. Pack a lot of punch.
Marketing
and
outreach
Goal: Sphere
of life
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Nicely Said by Nicole Fenton and Kate Kiefer Lee
Microinteractions: Designing with Details by Dan Saffer
Design for Real Life by Eric Meyer & Sara Wachter-Boettcher
The Cruelest Opt-Out Forms: http://cruelestoptouts.tumblr.com/
Little Big Details: http://littlebigdetails.com/
microcopy patterns: https://twitter.com/tinywordsmatter
Other stuff to look at
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Thanks so much.
Heidi Steiner Burkhardt
heidisb@umich.edu
@heidi_sb
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