1. Audience research on first draft of the video
Marcus’s response:
Mise-en-scene, how well constructed has it been? Is it correctly lit etc?
The backing paper added a set to the video and allowed the colours of the dust come. The overall
Mise-en-scene was well put together allowing me to see the fundamental functions of each shot
broken down. The black use of all the costumes allowed each person to blend into the background
and when the dust was thrown allowed me to see the colours come out, the lighting of the shot
fitted in well with the varying camera shots.
Is the Camera controlled and is there a variety of shot types?
The camera we steady throughout and worked with the Mise-en- scene to give an overall brilliant
effect.
Is the Editing to the beat, have good effects been added well?
Some of the lip syncing was out of time by a fraction this could be changed, and a couple of the
drum shots are out of time and off beat, the balloon stabs should be on the beat as well and some of
the camera shot could be trimmed. The effects during the slow-motion work well and overall it is a
good start with some minor tweaks to be made.
Does the whole video work as a music piece?
Overall I think the concept has been well thought out and put into practice very well, the deeper
hidden meaning allows the audience (me) to think about what it means and be involved in the
narrative.
Favourite shots?
Personally I like the mid shot at 2.35. It was a very well composed shot allowing me to get involved
with it more.
What would you change?
Add more of the sub, and more lens flares effects like at 2.15.

2. Edwards response:
Mise-en-scene, how well constructed has it been? Is it correctly lit etc?
I like many of the many aspects of the it matching the song and its lyrics. I found the lighting worked
well with the mise-en-scene and the back drop.
Is the Camera controlled and is there a variety of shot types?
The use of camera allows me to keep up with the speed of and pace of the song. The variety of
camera shots allows for a different view of the song and I liked this aspect.
Is the Editing to the beat, have good effects been added well?
The editing is to the beat and allows us to see the drum beat by beat. However some of the shots
are slightly out of sink
Does the whole video work as a music piece?
Overall the whole video looks aesthetically pleasing to my eyes.
Favourite shots?
My favourite shot is of the dust coming back into the actors mouth.
What would you change?
The flag shot

3. Tom’s Response:
Mise-en-scene, how well constructed has it been? Is it correctly lit etc?
The set was well set out allowing me to see what was happening in the foreground. The same
lighting witch was consistence throughout the whole video and adapted to the shot, with the
camera.
Is the Camera controlled and is there a variety of shot types?
There was a good variety of shot types. The camera was well controlled and adapted to the shot
type.
Is the Editing to the beat, have good effects been added well?
The editing was good, but when you hit the drum it is out of time.
Does the whole video work as a music piece?
I think that it is a bit disjointed looking at the first draft, but overall I really like the video.
Favourite shots?
The introduction shot was really good and an amazing idea.
What would you change?
The drum beats in theses shot.

4. Ollie’s Response:
Mise-en-scene, how well constructed has it been? Is it correctly lit etc?
Instantly apparent that that the lighting and costume worked together to create an effect. Wellconstructed, well lit and I would like some animation.
Is the Camera controlled and is there a variety of shot types?
Steady camera and good shots nice variety
Is the Editing to the beat, have good effects been added well?
Editing is to the beat and looks good drum scene slightly out.
Does the whole video work as a music piece?
Yes and allows the true art form to come through.
Favourite shots?
Paint shots and the balloons.
What would you change?
Flag shot make it normal size.

5. Jonny’s response:
Mise-en-scene, how well constructed has it been? Is it correctly lit etc?
well lit allowing me to see the back drop, and the paint and dust fights worked well.
Is the Camera controlled and is there a variety of shot types?
The use of different shots allows a totally different perspective to look at. Worked well.
Is the Editing to the beat, have good effects been added well?
Out of sync need to be edited better
Does the whole video work as a music piece?
Works with the radioactive in paint and worked well with the bright dust.
Favourite shots?
The light behind gus’s face and pitch black lip syncing.
What would you change?
The drum sences

6. Audience research on the Digipack
Marcus’s response:
Are the images used appropriate to the genre and the promotional package as a whole?
Front cover works well, the range of fonts and edited images is abstract but keeps the tone from the
video .
Are the fonts used effective?
I would like to see the neon pitelated smoke effect stretched to the back cover.
Comment on the use of space. Would you move or change anything?
Tidy up the gas mask and make each song title the same size
Comment on the use of the image editing softwareused. Are there any other techniques you
would like to use ?
Inside panels work well and have demonstrated a good range of skills
Comment on one element you really like and one element that you would change?
The inside panel where the disk sits and the font sizes on the back cover

7. Edwards response:
Are the images used appropriate to the genre and the promotional package as a whole?
The images of the Radioactive it itself is colourful and represents the song title.
Are the fonts used effective?
The fonts and colours also work as green is the stereotypical radioactive colour.
Comment on the use of space. Would you move or change anything?
The use of spacing is so good and allows the me the viewer to focus on certain points of the digipack.
Comment on the use of the image editing software used. Are there any other techniques you
would like to use ?
The use of editing has been blended in well, with the actual shots from the video, which I like.
Comment on one element you really like and one element that you would change?
I love the picture of where the CD would go, I would change would be the font on the back.

8. Tom ‘s response:
Are the images used appropriate to the genre and the promotional package as a whole?
The images keep in theme with the video.
Are the fonts used effective?
The texts are good and allow the radioactive to come through them.
Comment on the use of space. Would you move or change anything?
The use of spaces is good the spaces are well spaced out, allowing my eyes to focus on each piece of
text.
Comment on the use of the image editing software used. Are there any other techniques you
would like to use ?
There is no record lable and you’ve chanced the licence holder.
Comment on one element you really like and one element that you would change?
The layout is a total copy of fighting with wire I lover the picture behind the CD

9. Jonny’s response:
Are the images used appropriate to the genre and the promotional package as a whole?
The back cover is quick rock metal and I don’t think that it works
Are the fonts used effective?
Appropriate font types, works well
Comment on the use of space. Would you move or change anything?
Use of space is good
Comment on the use of the image editing software used. Are there any other techniques you
would like to use ?
Colour is eye catching
Comment on one element you really like and one element that you would change?
The back cover as said above and the inside panel

10. Ollie’s response:
Are the images used appropriate to the genre and the promotional package as a whole?
Yes the allow the pictures to come through, and allows me see the video and the CD and relate
between the two.
Are the fonts used effective?
Yes of the fonts allows me to focus on different aspects.
Comment on the use of space. Would you move or change anything?
Change in font type
Comment on one element you really like and one element that you would change?
The inside covers and the font type