An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

1. In my ideal
world...

2. ... There are people
who change the way
you think...

3. ... There are people who change the
world...

4. ... There are people who make you
feel good...

5. ... But there will not be peace in our
world if we do not start acting with
a humble heart.

6. THE END
Author: Moises Santigo Cardoso da S.
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Zuzol
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Period: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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