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“They Say I
Say”
Writing Workshop
Quickwrite
     Are good people good because they
  choose to be, or are they good because
 they don’t want to get caught doing bad
   things? In other words, are good people
(like you) good because they have to be or
  are they good because they want to be?
Reading Task
1.   Read from The Republic by Plato.

2.   Number each paragraph.

3.   Underline claims—the sentences where
     Plato states his position on good and
     evil.
Purposeful Rereading
What is Plato doing in paragraphs 2 and 3?
Starting with a verb, write a brief statement
in the right-hand margin that explains what
Plato is doing in these paragraphs.

Begin with a verb like…
      explaining…   using…
      describing…   illustrating…
      showing…                 arguing…
Argument Statement Exercise
               Template

In the text_______________, (title of text)
 ___________________(author’s name)
__________(claims, argues, states, or some
  other verb) that______________
_________________________________.
Add Evidence Analysis
In the text__________________, (title of text)
 ______________(author’s name)________
(claims, argues, states, or some other verb)
that_________________________________.
He (shares, illustrates, describes, or
some other verb) ______________________
in order to __________________. Plato’s
decision to use _______________________
is / (is not) effective because ______________.
Academic Performances
 At your tables, retrace the activities and
 exercises that we did while reading
 Plato’s The Republic. What did we do
 first, second, third, etc. How often did we
 engage in academic performances?
Reading Task
 Independently
              read On Moral Education
 by Horace Mann.

 Read  the text once without marking or
 highlighting . Readers do this to gain some
 idea of what the text is about before
 analyzing it.
Pair-share


   What did you notice in the text?
Purposeful Rereading:
Marking the Text
Reread On Moral Education. While you reread:

  • number the paragraphs;
  • circle key terms;
  • and underline author’s claims.

(Use a pencil: sometimes you change
your mind and want to erase.)
Pair-Share
 What   did you circle as key terms?

 Whatdid you underline as the author’s
 claims?
Table Talk
What is the problem Mann is posing?

What does he say should be done to solve
the problem?
Table Talk


 What questions did you want to ask while
       you were reading the text?
Argument Statement Exercise
               Template

In the text_______________, (title of text)
 ___________________(author’s name)
__________(claims, argues, states, or some
  other verb) that______________
_________________________________.
Table Discussion
    Are people naturally
       competitive or
        cooperative?
  It is important when responding to a
        question like this to speak to be
   understood and to speak with good
                    purpose.
Reading Task
 Independently   read Leviathan by Thomas
 Hobbes.

 As
   you mark the text, refer back to the
 “Marking the Text: Non-Fiction”
Pause, Connect, Quickwrite, a
nd the Share
Where in the text does Hobbes use terms like
   “nature,” “power” and “equality”?

    How do these terms connect to the
   surrounding text? How are they used?
Writing Exercise:
Identifying an Author’s Central
Claim
Identify one claim in the text that could be
understood as Hobbes’ central claim. Write
 a brief explanation as to why you think the
   claim you have selected is indeed the
               central claim.

Starter sentences:
In “Leviathan,” Hobbes claims that…
I believe this is his central claim because
Pair-Share


 What is Hobbes doing in paragraph 5?
Does he make a claim? What is he doing
                here?
Think-Pair-Share


   Hobbes and Plato appear to agree on
  man’s basic nature. Discuss their shared
view. How does each author suggest man’s
       nature should be controlled?
Synthesizing Ideas from Two (or
more) Sources
   In academic writing, writers will use one text
    to extend, clarify, illustrate, or complicate the
    ideas found in another text.
   Although secondary students are taught to
    compare and contrast, they are not
    encouraged to use this schema (conceptual
    pattern in the mind) in college.
   Synthesis requires writers to accurately
    account for information and to show how this
    information works with other source material.
    Are students ready for this type of work?
Table Talk

Based on the prompt, how might we have
 our students write about these two texts?
 How can we support our students as they
learn how to synthesize ideas from two (or
              more) sources?

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They say i say

  • 2. Quickwrite Are good people good because they choose to be, or are they good because they don’t want to get caught doing bad things? In other words, are good people (like you) good because they have to be or are they good because they want to be?
  • 3. Reading Task 1. Read from The Republic by Plato. 2. Number each paragraph. 3. Underline claims—the sentences where Plato states his position on good and evil.
  • 4. Purposeful Rereading What is Plato doing in paragraphs 2 and 3? Starting with a verb, write a brief statement in the right-hand margin that explains what Plato is doing in these paragraphs. Begin with a verb like… explaining… using… describing… illustrating… showing… arguing…
  • 5. Argument Statement Exercise Template In the text_______________, (title of text) ___________________(author’s name) __________(claims, argues, states, or some other verb) that______________ _________________________________.
  • 6. Add Evidence Analysis In the text__________________, (title of text) ______________(author’s name)________ (claims, argues, states, or some other verb) that_________________________________. He (shares, illustrates, describes, or some other verb) ______________________ in order to __________________. Plato’s decision to use _______________________ is / (is not) effective because ______________.
  • 7. Academic Performances  At your tables, retrace the activities and exercises that we did while reading Plato’s The Republic. What did we do first, second, third, etc. How often did we engage in academic performances?
  • 8. Reading Task  Independently read On Moral Education by Horace Mann.  Read the text once without marking or highlighting . Readers do this to gain some idea of what the text is about before analyzing it.
  • 9. Pair-share What did you notice in the text?
  • 10. Purposeful Rereading: Marking the Text Reread On Moral Education. While you reread: • number the paragraphs; • circle key terms; • and underline author’s claims. (Use a pencil: sometimes you change your mind and want to erase.)
  • 11. Pair-Share  What did you circle as key terms?  Whatdid you underline as the author’s claims?
  • 12. Table Talk What is the problem Mann is posing? What does he say should be done to solve the problem?
  • 13. Table Talk What questions did you want to ask while you were reading the text?
  • 14. Argument Statement Exercise Template In the text_______________, (title of text) ___________________(author’s name) __________(claims, argues, states, or some other verb) that______________ _________________________________.
  • 15. Table Discussion Are people naturally competitive or cooperative? It is important when responding to a question like this to speak to be understood and to speak with good purpose.
  • 16. Reading Task  Independently read Leviathan by Thomas Hobbes.  As you mark the text, refer back to the “Marking the Text: Non-Fiction”
  • 17. Pause, Connect, Quickwrite, a nd the Share Where in the text does Hobbes use terms like “nature,” “power” and “equality”? How do these terms connect to the surrounding text? How are they used?
  • 18. Writing Exercise: Identifying an Author’s Central Claim Identify one claim in the text that could be understood as Hobbes’ central claim. Write a brief explanation as to why you think the claim you have selected is indeed the central claim. Starter sentences: In “Leviathan,” Hobbes claims that… I believe this is his central claim because
  • 19. Pair-Share What is Hobbes doing in paragraph 5? Does he make a claim? What is he doing here?
  • 20. Think-Pair-Share Hobbes and Plato appear to agree on man’s basic nature. Discuss their shared view. How does each author suggest man’s nature should be controlled?
  • 21. Synthesizing Ideas from Two (or more) Sources  In academic writing, writers will use one text to extend, clarify, illustrate, or complicate the ideas found in another text.  Although secondary students are taught to compare and contrast, they are not encouraged to use this schema (conceptual pattern in the mind) in college.  Synthesis requires writers to accurately account for information and to show how this information works with other source material. Are students ready for this type of work?
  • 22. Table Talk Based on the prompt, how might we have our students write about these two texts? How can we support our students as they learn how to synthesize ideas from two (or more) sources?