Python Notes for mca i year students osmania university.docx
Illustration Essay Peer Review
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2. Have your partner also stop you at any point they HEAR a problem in order to ask a question, clarify a point, or make a suggestion. Write down their questions or suggestions in a different color ink or a pencil on the paper.
8. Does the introduction include an effective hook? If not, offer suggestions on a possible way to interest the readers or how to improve his/her existing hook to make it more effective.
9. Ask the author of the paper to identify his/her thesis statement.
17. Do the body paragraphs include specific examples from the advertisement? (List the specific examples for each paragraph.) Are they weighted evenly?
21. Offer any suggestions for a better way to organize the paper. Say, for instance, would it be more effective to change the order of the examples? Why or why not?
23. Does it do more than just summarize or restate what’s already been said?
24. Offer any suggestions on how it could be made more interesting and/or more effective at answering the “so what” question.
25. Do you see any major grammatical or spelling errors? Point out one example of each type that you see and offer a suggestion of how he/she might could fix the problem. (Look for errors with commas, spelling, apostrophes, hyphens, semi-colons, subject/verb agreement, pronoun/antecedent agreement, vague pronoun usage, and especially run-on sentences and sentence fragments.)