7. Organize by rhetorical points (VAPID) rather than in the order of essay Avoid summary, but use specific examples Start to construct TEA paragraphs Organize your points
8. Establish the framework for your essay Now, you are ready to write the first draft Don’t forget your thesis and that your intro should be more than one sentence! Construct Thesis
9. According to Ellen Ullman, we are “Dining With Robots.” The general idea is that with our long hours at work, well organized lives and automated lifestyles we lose human qualities and are becoming robots. She questions the idea of building robots versus becoming the robots. Our “appetites” for making life easier with robots becomes a reality check. When looking in the mirror, we no longer see ourselves but the robots we have become
10. Don’t forget to revise If possible, leave some time between revisions. Write and Revise