1. Coursework analysis
By Debbie Marques

2. Alexa’s opening sequence
Alexa got an A grade overall.

3. What went well
• Slow motion
was used to
show the
impact of the
hitting • very realistic
violence
• The way she used • Close ups were very
the colour black effective to show
and what to show panic.
flashbacks.

4. Even better if
• Clearer image
• Using something
better either than
plasters to show the
bruises (makeup)
• Express feelings
better using body
language

5. Dafne’s opening sequence
• Dafne got a grade A overall.

6. What went well
Very sexy and
promiscuous
way of
putting
lipstick.
Close ups to
The wedding ring at highlight the
the beginning important
suggesting marriage angles
is involved.
The idea of
showing the
husband’s phone
call.

7. Even better if...
Pictures were clearer
and not as blurry
Spoke louder as in some Used some colour
bits towards the end was specially to make the
difficult to hear. lipstick stand out
more.

8. My opinion
I personally like both these sequences although
very different from each other but both have a
very interesting story behind it. However if
this was a trailer for a film at the cinema I
would definitely go to watch it.