2. Reflection Time
1. Re-read your creative writing (and my stars!)
2. Locate 3 or more of my
3. Annotate – what have you done well?
4. Choose your BIG target….
3. Choose Your BIG Target
1
accuracy of basic punctuation
2
variety of punctuation - using more than basic
3
paragraphing accuracy
4
linking paragraphs
5
paragraph length variety - power-graphs
6
tense accuracy (past/present)
7
accuracy of grammar (capitals, sentence building…)
8
use of senses
9
use of imagery (similes, metaphors
10 building tension + climax
4. Closing the Gap
Punctuation
a) Basic: Speech – revision/activity sheet
b) Basic: Commas
c) Ext: Apostrophes
d) Ext: Semi-colons & Colons
Paragraphs:
a) Basic – TIP TOP revision; James Bond activity
c) Extension - Power-graphs & Linking
Imagery: matching exercise & practise writing
5. Creative Writing Activity
Show off your new knowledge by
demonstrating your writing skills!
1. Watch the film clip.
2. Use the narrative bullet points to
guide you (rough plan)
3. Focus on your BIG TARGETS
and spend 20 minutes crafting.
6. Source Code
Plot Overview
• You wake up confused on a moving train
• A girl opposite you chats – clearly a friend – but you
don’t recognise her
• Train stops at station – you leave your seat – check
the platform – someone strange?
• Return to seat – unusual reflection in window – flee
to lavatory
• Revelation: it is not you! – girl returns – argument –
fire
