For use of evaluating speech; Edited by me

1. Sung-Jin’s Note on Evaluation for David’s Speech
1. Speech Title:
2. Date:
3. Time Taken: (outof 5-to-7minutes)
4. Objectives of Speech:
Use stance,movement,gestures,facial expressionsandeye contactto expressyourmessage and
achieve yourspeech’spurpose,“YourBodySpeaks”;Make your bodylanguage smoothandnatural.
5. Evaluation Criteria
POSTURE:
nervous/uneasy  poised
uncertain  confident
uncomfortable  comfortable
slouching  erect
stiff  relaxed
GESTURES:
artificial /wooden  natural / spontaneous
random  meaningful
passive  lively
furtive (=seemingtokeepsomethingsecretorhidden)  expansive
vague  precise
detractedfromverbal message enhancedverbal message
BODY MOVEMENTS
lifeless/dull  fluid/animated
awkward  graceful
random  purposeful
drewattentionawayfromspeech enhancedattentivenesstospeech
FACIAL EXPRESSIONS
deadpan(= appearingtobe seriousandhidingthe factthat you’re joking) animated
unfriendly  friendly
artificial  natural / genuine
incongruent(=not fittogetherwell)  appropriate tospeechcontent
EYE CONTACT
forced / artificial  natural / smooth
followedsetpattern  no setpattern
didnot establishvisual bonds establishedbondswithlisteners

2. Sung-Jin’s Note on Evaluation for David’s Speech
6. Noteson Evaluation
1) It’sa pleasure toevaluate David’sspeechabout_________________________________________.
2) I rememberhis opening because:(immediate engaging/interesting)
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The body structure was:(easyto follow andunderstand,andwell-constructed)
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3) From myseat he:(approach,position,personal appearance,facial expression,gestures,detracting
mannerisms)
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4) He ended strongly by:(reinforcing,climactic)
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5) I have two recommendations thatDavidmightthinkaboutthatwouldmake hisfuturespeeches
even better.
 Recommendation1
- What?
- Alternativeexample!
- Why?
 Recommendation2
- What?
- Alternativeexample!
- Why?
6) In summary,here isa speechthatDavid commended well:
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7) It couldhave beenimprovedby recommendations:
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8) However,it worked becauseDavid
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