errors corrected

1. Audience Feedback
Media Studies
Brontë Vickery

2. Feedback sheet 1:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of credits written on box and envelope.
Camera: over the shoulder shots
Sound:fitting music

3. Feedback sheet 2:
Mise-en-scene:
Girl’s bedroom, moving house.
Some credits written on objects-effective.
Camera: over the shoulder shots, good close ups and
range of angles.
Sound:
music fitted the story and lyrics matches with each
scene.
Editing: good effects, quick cuts between girl packing
box and “ryan” calling her.

4. Feedback sheet 3:
Sound: good music.
Editing: Love where you put the credits, and the scene of
filling up the boxes with different things.

5. Feedback sheet 4:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of props and costume, sets the scene.
Camera: could have added more angles but overall good.
Sound:
music emotional music fits well.
Editing: good use of cut scenes eg. Box filling up.

6. Feedback sheet 5:
Sound: no digetic sound used.
Editing: good use of credits eg writing on the
box/envelope etc.

7. Feedback sheet 6:
Camera: I really liked the shots of the objects going into
the box.
Sound: good choice of sound, song fitted well.
Editing: credits edited really well.

8. Feedback sheet 7:
Mise-en-scene:
Good use of props, appropriate age of girl.
Camera: good shots.
Sound: good music.
Editing: good order of scenes, good cutting scenes eg.
Box filling up.

9. Feedback sheet 8:
Camera: good variety of shots but some shots a bit too
long.
Sound:
music suited the film but sounded bit odd in the middle.
Editing: continuity was good but some bits seemed a little
jumpy.

10. Feedback sheet 9:
Mise-en-scene:
Posters good.
Camera: flashes to phone and stop motion with packing box
really good.
Sound:
Song lyrics fit the scenario, but some more diegetic
sounds would have been nicer.
Editing: really smooth, although the match on action
going out of the door could have been a tiny bit smoother.

11. Feedback sheet 10:
Mise-en-scene:
Good scenery, location was good and made it into a “girly”
room.
Camera: variety of shots was good!.
Sound:nice music and diegetic sound.
Editing: “filling up the box” editing was really good.

12. Feedback sheet 11:
Mise-en-scene:
Love the posters, “zayn styles” good name for production
manager.
Camera: good variety of shots.
Sound:
Good song.
Editing: good appropriate pace.

13. Feedback sheet 12:
Mise-en-scene:
Bare walls added to the sense of “leaving behind”.
Camera: no shaky shots, good framing.
Sound:
music fitted really well with the story.
Editing: nice box-filling shot.

14. Feedback sheet 13:
Mise-en-scene:
Effective use of on-screen text credits.
Camera: good lighting quality.
Sound:
Atmospheric sound track.
Editing: stop-start- animation

15. Feedback sheet 14:
Mise-en-scene:
The bare walls made it seem more like she had a lot to
leave behind.
Camera: really good variety of shots especially when she
came down the stairs.
Sound:The music really matched the genre and what was
going on- made it more emotional, gave a bigger impact on
the audience.
Editing: I liked the way the box gradually filled up.

16. Feedback sheet 15:
Mise-en-scene:
Good props.
Camera: nice choice of shots for genre. Good over-the
shoulder shot.
Sound:Good choice of music, music builds up at correct
time.
Editing: sound loop on menu, nice stop-start animations.