audience feedback

1. Double page spread
audience feedback
By Amber Gardner

2. • This was my first
draft of my double
page spread of
Bloom which again
was influenced by
existing pop
magazines We Love
Pop and Top Of The
Pops.

3. Audience feedback
• You need some secondary images
to make it more appealing a
young audience
• Move the page numbers to the
end of the page
• Maybe horizontally flip the main
image to the other side of the
page to structure it better
• Move the pull quote in the middle
of the text to break it up more
and reduce block text
• Anchor the main image to provide
clarity

4. Final double page spread
• I have followed my audience
feedback to form a new
effective layout which is more
visually pleasing. Also I have
manipulated the main image by
enhancing her makeup and air
brushing her armpit to make
her look more attractive to
readers. I have also followed the
house style of my front cover
and contents page by using a
similar colour scheme and same
fonts