1. Edit Decision List – Camera 2
Clip Name Duration What it Shows Comment Will it be
Used
00035.MTS 0.11 Mid shot of three
girls about to
sleep.
Bad camera
position –
needs to be
more central on
them.
No
00036.MTS 0.13 Mid Long shot of
three girls about
to sleep.
Better
positioning –
can see girls
more fully.
Yes
00037.MTS 0.02 Mid Long shot of
three girls about
to sleep.
To short. No
00038.MTS 0.12 Close up of May
about to sleep –
scared.
Camera moves
across the
other two at
the end –
shaky.
No
00039.MTS 0.13 Close up of May
about to sleep –
scared.
Better acting
and still
camera.
Yes
00040.MTS 0.50 Long/establishing
shot of girls
entering motel
grounds.
Dark and
panning not
smooth.
No
00041.MTS 0.19 Long/establishing
shot of girls
entering motel
grounds.
Car drives
past/headlights.
No
00042.MTS 0.37 Long/establishing
shot of girls
entering motel
grounds.
Smoother
panning.
Yes
00043.MTS 0.11 Close up/ over
the
shoulder/point of
view of
antagonist
watching girls
enter room.
Good lighting
on antagonist
Good
composition.
Yes
00044.MTS 0.08 Long shot of
Sophie being
taken.
Too slow
Actress
becomes out of
No

2. character.
00045.MTS 0.08 Long shot of
Sophie being
taken.
Faster, better
acting.
Yes
00046.MTS 0.08 Long shot of Jade
getting taken.
Good acting,
fast.
Yes
00047.MTS 0.10 Long shot of
antagonist
running
after/catching
May.
Trial shot. No
00048.MTS 0.11 Long shot of
antagonist
running
after/catching
May.
Good acting,
fast pace and
good lighting.
Yes
00049.MTS 0.11 Mid-long shot of
May unzipping
body bag.
Still camera,
good
expression on
May’s face.
Yes
00050.MTS 0.03 Extreme close up
of Sophie’s face –
dead and beaten
up.
Actress and
camera still.
Yes
00051.MTS 0.08 Mid shot of Mays
reaction.
Bad camera
angle/position.
Too slow.
No
00052.MTS 0.10 Close up of Mays
reaction.
Can see more
emotion and
fits the
composition
better.
Yes
00053.MTS 0.02 Birds eye view of
Sophie dead.
Bad angle,
shaky camera.
No
00054.MTS 0.02 Extreme close up
of Sophie’s face –
dead and beaten
up.
Shaky camera. No
00055.MTS 0.06 Birds eye view of
Sophie’s face –
dead and beaten
up.
Bad positioning
and angle.
No