4. SHORT & SWEET
‣ 1-3 short paragraphs
‣ Under 250 words (150 is better)
‣ 1 sentence paragraphs rule
‣ 2-3 sentence paragraphs max
‣ Use bulleted lists
‣ Give paragraphs titles
5. SHORT AND SWEET
Cathy,
Great to meet another sushi fan!
Wow, you’re facing some real challenges right now.
Here are three big ones you mentioned:
– You’re short staffed
– You’re not in a position to hire
– Your technology is outdated
During our converstion, you triggered an idea that
could solve all three issues. It gelled on the way home.
Are you free for a call tomorrow morning? – Roger
6. CALL TO
ACTION
‣ Put it on1 line
‣ Be straight forward
‣ Use natural links (not “click here”)
‣ Only 1 or 2 options
‣ Make the link bold
‣ Show in 2 places
7. CALL TO ACTION
Don’t miss next month’s seminar titled, “Enforcing
Ever-Changing Compliance Rules” Click here to
register for the event to be held on June 28, 2010.
Don’t miss next month’s seminar titled, “Enforcing
Ever-Changing Compliance Rules” on June 28, 2010.
Register now for the event!
8. TONE MATTERS
‣ Friendly, casual, personal
‣ Avoid sales-y speak
‣ Use “you” language
‣ Say “I” not “we”
‣ Be concrete, not abstract
‣ Single focus
9.
10. YOUR CLOSE
What’s the best email closer?
Yours, Sincerely, Best wishes,
At your service, Regards,
Thanks,