1. What have you learnt from your audience feedback? Rose Newbury

2. A feedback method I carried out to receive audience feedback was I posted my video, poster advert and digi-pack on the social networking site Facebook where my friends could comment and give suggestions for any improvements that could be made to my main product and ancillary tasks. I chose this method of receiving feedback because Facebook is currently one of the popular social networking site and means that most of my target audience will have Facebook and therefore I will gain useful feedback.

3. Video

5. More scene transitionsWith these suggestions it means that I can turn my rough cut video into a finished product that my target audience will enjoy watching.

6. Advert Feedback......

7. Feed back.... Angela Maria DiPonio Looks really good rose! There are only a few things I would change. The black lines I would put behind poor picasso, unless you're going for a prison feel. And I would put a little bit of white around the red text. But for the most part it looks awesome! Chrissie Owens I really like the blend of colours, though perhaps brighter more angry colours could have been used to match the idea of rising up or rebelling. I also like the way the two figures are standing on her face (you get what I mean) :D Haley-special Knowles It appears very eye catching and professional. Well done :) You just need to make alterations on those lines. Apart from that, really well done! xx

9. Use brighter coloursI am happy with these comments and because these are members of my target audience I will take into account these improvements and make the changes where possible so that the advert will appeal more to them.

10. Digi-pack Feedback

11. Feedback.... Lucia Puricelli I really love the pattern you've used on the front cover and it really stands out. I think the colours you've used are really good too, especially with the top panels where you've repeated the image of luke and rhyc :) maybe on the cover you could try and make the 'poor picasso' bit stand out more cause you've used similar colours to the rest of the cover, but that's only a little thing :P this is really good! :D xx Chrissie Owens I love the effect on the play list and the tiled background thing babe well done xx Luke Smith I really like the overall design that you've done on the front cover all of it goes well together, I like the effects on the guitarist and the drummer quite retro in a way, I also like how it kinda of mirrors the song a line about the reflection and then there's the silhouettes. I think you should just make the poor picasso logo stand out more on the back and then its perfect, great job newbury! :D

13. To make the band name stand out more on the cover.To make sure that my digi-pack meets the needs of my target audience I will make sure that these improvements are made to as to make my digi-pack better.