1. English Writing Session
01
Mridha Saiful
Question:
Generation gap has become a crucial issue in some societies these days.
Many people are not even aware of the importance of decreasing the gap
within societies. What do you think? How the generation gap can be reduced
for a better society building?
2. Overview
Total Participants 28
Answers on focus 15
Special Mention *
â Ramin Afroz
â Sabrina Mahmood
â Afrina Aurin
(* not a quality based sequence)
3. Ahasan
I think generation gap have created gradually...People are not aware of about this...Interpersonal
communication and social networks is the another reason behind this ...So I think personal
communication must be increased and try to be extrovert ..People must be aware about this
generation gap.....
Using âŠ.after every sentences, it has become a bad habit this days. Please, try to avoid this for bringing
smartness in writing. Good try indeed. If you start reading short and simple articles with proper
understanding, you can do much better soon.
Good Luck!
â Subject verb agreement should be followed while writing.
â You need to use plural verb (are) when you have more than one subjects.
â Sentence pattern should follow a parallel flow.
â In English, âaware aboutâ something is not usable, rather use âaware of somethingâ.
4. Saleh Ahmmed
Such a crucial issue we have to work more with great effort to minimize the gap between two
generation. Generation gap occurs for industrialization, civilization, technology development etc,
because earlier our grandfather''s is not know about proper communication, is not think about
internet. They just used to lead their life by earning and eating them. Our father''s are just upgraded.
Most of them have Computer knowledge, But they became surprised to see how we can do all work
by smart phone as like computer .Our generation also have not proper knowledge about Upgraded
World. Who we are wanted to know the world, trying to gather some knowledge from the vast world
are know something. you can ask me that statistics show that around 70% of our population used
mobile internet, so how you can say that they are not ahed. I just answered you that 50% of 70% just
use mobile internet to use social network & rest are using internet for pornography.
If we want to reduce the generation gap we have to ensure that all technology of running world
would be used by all generation of people. After that generation may be reduce little.
You tried, but from now on you should read besides trying. You have lack of âTenseâ sense, so you need to
learn how to use tense facts properly. And, you have gone far away from the real answer. You need
someoneâs close supervision regarding your progress, I guess. Thank you!
5. Md. Ferdaus Amin
Well, generation gap can't be reduced at all. Rather we can try several things to mingle them. Let's
take a look-
1. Ask questions to know before making any personal opinion.
2. We should be curious to learn the unknown things.
3. We should be open-minded.
4. We should accept different individual's way of thinking.
5. We should provide both child and adult with direction and purpose.
6. We should encourage children and elders to share or take an interest in each otherâs hobbies or
interests.
Starting was pessimistic, and this is really negative. A paragraph should not be written like this way.
Youâve got appreciable Grammar and vocabulary sense.
Good Luck!
6. Md. Adnan Sikder
Generation gap is an inevitable phase in the society. In every society there are generation gap &
people from one generation is different from another in aspect of ethics, thinking, living etc. One
generation which gets much priority is not so important for the other generation. But this gap should
be mitigated to some extent because huge difference in thinking & doing in different generation may
affect the society. So the older should be more open minded to keep up with the change & the
younger should adopt the positive things from the older generation.
Your writing was great. Subject verb agreement combination should be handled carefully to write error-free.
âAspectâ follows after a determiner, especially as the way youâve used (in the aspect of).
Thank you!
7. Mostafa Sameer
Well, Today's generation consists of people of different ages and different aspects. The people who
are superior by their age used to think deeply and they usually have high thoughts. On the other
hand, the inferior aged people used to have high ambitions and their aim is usually high enough but
they require certain amount of guidelines by their superior. So, in understanding each another and
helping others, communications helps in decreasing the gap in between the generation. Today's
society composed of certain people's who wants to live only by their own which means they do not
want others to enter in to their life. So communication skills plays a vital role in this aspects in order
to reduce the generation gap in between the elder and older.
You have the capacity to focus, but you should be careful about these grammatical facts- number, subject-
verb agreement, use of conjunction, use of âs, use of helping verbs etc.
Another suggestion is - just avoid using the words you actually do not know how to use them properly.
Simple words may carry higher mark if they are composed perfectly- believe it. Good Luck!
8. Akhter-E-Tamanna
Generation gap is now a common topic in today's world. It has become a serious issue now-a-days.
First of all we have to know what is generation gap. It's not about age difference rather it's about
thought difference among two age people. For example, the person who is suppose 50 or 60 years
old prefers to read newspaper in hard copy form in the morning but today's generation like to read
newspaper at internet. This is called generation gap. Earlier people loved to stay with family, spent
some time with them but now people do not have any time for family. They think joint family means
chaos everywhere that's why they prefer to live in a single family. Ethical values, norms and behavior
are also different from each other. This generation gap should be minimized by spending time
together or sharing each other problem.
You can write better than many. Using of phrases perfectly is your major problem.
Generation gap definition was not asked at all, and you did a faulty try here as well.
The word âonlineâ can take place of âat internetâ - to be more usual.
I hope you can understand the red marks.
Good Luck!
9. Rumaiya Afreen
Generation gap is indeed a burning question which also goes unnoticed throughout our daily lives. It
can be advantageous and disadvantageous at the same time. As days go by people are becoming
more modernized overall, but the elders still tends to cling on to their as usual old monotonous ways.
So, when it comes to the point of social interaction or normal behavior, newer generations find a big
gap between them and the elders. Not only the elders should maintain caring & forgiving, but also the
people on the receiving end of it must be of understanding and pure-minded to solve this issue in a
strategic manner.
You have told that the elder generationâs ways are monotonous, but they will disagree with the
statement, right? You are to focus the possible scenario, not to judge the variations at all.
The last sentence has not got a happy finishing. The finishing should be very simple but appreciably
composed. But yes, you are very good at free hand writing!
10. Ramin Afroz
The main reason behind the generation gap is that everyone is busy boasting about their own
generation and don't want to think out of the boxes. To reduce the generation gap at first we should
be ready to accept and to detect the follies of our own generation. When we will be able to accept our
own faults, we will be able to appreciate other generation's positive sides. The generation gap
increases when we start debating with one another. I think the parents should take the first step to
reduce the generation gaps as they are more experienced, wise and patient than their kids. Itâs as
simple as that, spend more time with your child, give them a perfect picture of your generation and
be interested towards new things, your effort will eventually give positive feedback as your child will
start considering you as a friend and will no longer try to defend his generation.
Nice writing. Out of box - is correct in usual English. I didnât find the use of plural anywhere.
I got your writing as one of the best writings, but what Iâve missed are a good start, and a brilliant finishing.
I hope you can be the best!
11. Rasel - Part 1
When we are talking about a society, we must know what a society really means. A society is a group of many families
as far as I know, where a collaborative culture grows by sharing and caring. This culture can be varied from society to
society, even from countries to countries. A society is very important for us - human being.
We start our journey from any single family. Our origin is family where there is father, a mother, one or more than one
sons and or daughters. One day, a son becomes a husband, then he becomes another father and so is true for a
daughter who become a mother as well at a time in her life.
A generation gap is a gap which can be easily identified observing the nature, interests, characteristics etc of both a
father and a son. A father may like to read newspaper in the morning and the son likes to listen to music loudly at the
same time. Here we see a gap of interests, a gap between two people - simply conflict of interests.
For the sake of increasing rate of generation gap, we often see in our society that, a son does not care about his family
and so is true for a daughter. They like to hang out with friends, wastes their valuable time and money, spoils their
energy for no reason at all. There are many problems arising from such gap. A son becomes a criminal in front of that
father. Undisciplined life style and carefree mentality take them away from the bonding of the family. New generation
likes to communicate via internet. They spend much for foods, hanging out with friends, movies, internet and traveling
whilst their fathers try to save penny to take care of the family. A society cannot produce a good output from such
modern and carefree generation. There are also other internal and external problems that we often see in the
newspapers these days.
12. Rasel - Part 2
Parents should be aware of the fact that their children are growing. Hence, they need more emotional
attachment from their parents. Parents can teach their children the norms and culture of the family and the
empathy and sharing and caring we share in the society becoming them more humble and wise from the very
beginning part of their lives.
Parents can control their grown-up children with extra effort. They should understand first than to be
understood. They will teach their grown-up children with the rules of nature, how life is rewarded by the suit
of honesty, hard-work, passion etc. True motivation and controlling system should be started from the family,
then we will see the effect of all of these in the society, where we share a collaborative culture. No hurdle
rules and regulations can minimize this generation gap.
I know you are good at writing. But, you have missed the instruction of word limit.
I have found some problem, you can see them have been marked red.
But, Iâve read the total, you have elaborated the core idea from different angles perfectly!
Good wishes!!
13. Farhad Abedin
At the outset,there is no way without recognition that we are facing substantial generation gap in our
society.The present age is era of information.Due to rapid technological changes,our culture is also
changing constanly fast than ever.The present generation has many opportunities available to them
for communication & learning,so that there is creating a gap of knowledge between old & young
generation.Many of them avoid to recognise this gap due to opportunities available for this gap are
not willing to lose.
You have missed the question to some extent as it is focused on your anwer script.
âFaster than everâ is the correct phrase. âEraâ needs a determiner (the era), grammatically.
But, your writing capacity is just fine. Good luck!
14. Sabrina Mahmood
It is so natural that every generation faces a gap with the other one. I beg to differ that, generation
gap would cause any harm to the societies. But yes, recently we are experiencing not only a
generation gap, but also communication gap among people of the same generation.
I think, authority have to take control over the excess use of technology. As for us, We should spent
more time with one another in the real world but not the virtual one. We can share the morning
newspaper what our fathers read. and also share our music collection with them while taking a walk
in the afternoon. We could have our pasta and their soup at the same time, at the same table with a
little chitchat. We can share our music collection to one another. Of course they may not like the
music, but they will certainly like the idea of sharing. All of us has to take step from our place and that
definitely will make a difference towards a better society.
Good writing, may be the best one from my view.
You have started with a different introduction, but didnât say anything about the variation youâve pointed
primarily. Again, you have mentioned about technological usage, but from the negative angle. I think such
issues are to be focused carefully to avoid conflict zone, that will help us to take a safe zone finally.
15. Afrina Aurin
Generation gap is a obvious issue in every society. But nowadays it becomes much noticeable than
before. The main reason of such gap is new technology advancement. Modern technology has given
us speed & flexibility but it takes away our real interaction with older generation people. To build a
better society generation gap should be reduced. We are human being not machine. We have
emotions, feeling, - we need each other. To do that we must try to reduce the generation gap among
us. It is necessary for having a sound mental health. Because today's generation spend most of their
time in internet, phone or other electronic devices which will surely be proved harmful to their mental
& physical health. On the other hand lack of real interaction with older generation people they fail to
acknowledge many things which they should. Lack of morality, honesty & tendency to do crime is
much more significant tendency in today's generation which is also a result of generation gap.
Generation gap should be reduced not only for us but also for betterment of our society.
Your writing is surely one of the best three! But, take time to go through the marked errors.
The way how youâve tried to impress the reader was fantastic. Whatever mistakes youâve made, will be
ignored by the reader I believe. But, Iâm different. I take time to read, I love to take deep dive into
compositions as well. But, finally I want to appreciate you for the script. Cheers !!
16. Sk. Abdullah Al Fahamin
In order to make better society building, it is really necessary to reduce the generation gaps. In our
Country, people are not well informed about the benefits of decreasing generation gap. First of all,
Social program on reducing generation gap should be started in the society and People should be
informed about generation gap. We have to let them know the benefits of decreasing generation gap
by comparing with other countries where they have minimize their generation gap. Old generation
have to give new generation the chance to show their point of views and new generation also have to
give them same chance. By Proper understanding they will allow themselves to build relationship with
others which will help to reduce the generation gap between them.
In the question the generation gap was not plural. Youâve started taking it as a plural, this should not be
happen. But, the rest of the writing is just fine except some capitalization errors.
You have the capacity to write.
While reading, I got myself confused as you have used too much âtheyâ in your lines.
But, overall you have done better than many. Good Luck!
17. Tarik Mohammad Salman
Generation gap is probably not the consequence of technological enhancement but the outcome of
the changing landscapes of society. This age is as competetive as it gets. We are rushing to achieve
more than we can chew. Family is the last item on our checklist. That's why today's children have
found solace in the confined world of virtual reality which has in turn changed their approach to
everything. To change it, the best possible scenario would be for the parents to put their children on
the top of the priority list. If that happens the child growing up will have their parents as their role
models which in turn will install the beliefs and values their parents used to have in their days. If it
happens perhaps this generation gap issue can certainly be lessened by a considerable amount.
Iâve found almost no major problem here but youâve started with a point that was not stated at all in the
question - the issue I can take as a negative one. You gave me the point to go against you, simply.
But still the writing is smarter than many! Great writing man!
18. MUHAMMAD AL AMIN
Since the inception of the world many generations have passed. And for the great contribution of
those generations has brought us here. Now we can't even think without internet. If we look back
twenty or thirty years back, we can see there was not that facility what we have right now. Today
communication system is so rich. To build a better society we need to forget generation gap and to
do work together to reach optimum level of success. If we see the rich countries where everyone
works together and they accept changes and eager to learn new things. They respect and follow
leaders where age doesn't matter. So we need to act fruitfully together to do something good for the
betterment of the society.
Almost half of the total is the starting point - is the main drawback of the writing.
There are good word choice and nice sentence formation as well.
Appreciable!
19. What to think to write smartly
Step 1
Understand deeply what is asked in the question. Try to bring all the elements (head
words) found in the question under sharp consideration.
Step 2
Outline the total script in your mind before a start; take 3-4 minutes to shape the guided
outline. This will help you not to miss any crucial point to elaborate.
Step 3
Write with minimal grammatical errors; ignore the word that you actually do not know
how to use 100%. Allot some time to revise when your writing is completed.
20. Goals for next
test
1. Please keep the writing around
100 words or as specified.
2. Try to write as you are
supposed to write in the exam
papers.
3. Take some time to think and
rearrange the insights into your
mind before the start.