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MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Magazine Title: Beats
Summary Comment: Overall this isa very poorly made magazine whichis poorly representedasa
music magazine.Images and Text look tacky and unprofessional.
Magazine Title: Touched
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
23 – Shots consist
of basicframing.
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
32 – two mid shots,
1 wideshot.
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
17 – poor choiceof
props
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
17 – miseen scene
is poor –looks
dressed likea
school teacher
rather than a music
artist.
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
10 – presentation is
poor.
accurately using
languageand register
15 – too generic
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
23 – can’tread
sometext,
awkward image
placing,too many
differentfonts.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
23 – poor layoutin
someareas
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
24 – understands
the needs butpoor
execution.
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
35 – basic skills
used to meet
needs.
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt to replicate the professional lookmany
magazineshave, but this ispoorly executeddue to lack of care and detail.
Magazine Title: RNB
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
35 – clear
understandingof
howthey want
shots to beframed.
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
24 – variety not
truly met
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
20- doesn’ttruly
conformto music
magazinestyle.
Looks morelikea
beauty/fashion
magazinefor
women.
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
20 – styled liketeen
students rather
than a musicartist.
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
23- croppingdone
well,butresizing
has madesome
images look
stretched.
accurately using
languageand register
24 – language
discusses music but
too generic and
seems very scripted
and un-natural
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
23- Text and images
used,however
someimages and
text seem
unnecessary.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
24- attempts to
followlayout,
however not
extremely clear and
preciseandseems
morelikeputting
element where
suits.
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
26 – understands
the needs butbasic
execution.
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
35 – basic skills
used to meet
needs.
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt shows a clear understandingof how to create
a effective andprofessional magazine,however,theirlackof knowledge and skill makes the
magazine look unprofessional.
Magazine Title: FUSE
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
35 – clear
understandingof
howthey want
shots to beframed.
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
35 – A Variety of
shots used to
includea Two Shot.
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
35 – clear shooting
material thatshows
genre easily.
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
25 – Miseen scene
makes genreclear
however lighting
on contents and
DPS images are
poor
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
23- croppingdone
well,butresizing
has madesome
images look
stretched.
accurately using
languageand register
35 – language
discusses music
well and meet
genre register well
with someflaws
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
36 – this isdone
simplybut
effectively.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
36–clear
understandingof
layoutand page
design however
there area number
of flaws in their
execution.
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
34 – understands
the needs but
knowledgeable
execution.
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
35 – basic skills
used to meet needs
effectively.
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Summary Comment: Overall this magazine is a great attempt and producing a professional looking
magazine.The layout, Mise enscene,colour scheme is presentedwell due to a great knowledge
and skill of Photo-editingsoftware.
Magazine Title: R.A.W.R
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
. 48 – Greatuseof
shots with cleaver
exclusion.
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
38 – a largevariety
in shots.
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
38 – looks and feels
likea music
magazinethat
emphasisesits
genre.
selecting Mise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
50 – a greateffort
has been madeto
ensuremiseen
sceneis effectively
used.
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
38 – donewell –
imageof ‘Eva’on
contents agelooks
slightlyodd.
accurately using
languageand register
47 – language
discusses music
genre well.
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
41 – Positioningof
text and images has
been cleverly
though about.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
49 – Layoutand
pagedesign iswell
executed.
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
50 – great
understandingof
the need for variety
in fonts and text
size
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
50 – great
knowledgeand skill
to useICTwell for
the task.
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
60 – Greatuseof
shots onlyusingthe
aspects of shots
needed
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
57 – A variety of
shots used to
providea
professional look.
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
55- All shotsused
areappropriateand
supportgenre
perfectly,making
the magazinelook
professionally.
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
60 – miseen scene
is perfectly
executed to support
genre and the
magazine’sstyle.
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
55- the cropping
and resizingof
images isdoneto a
professional
standard and
providesa well
presented look.
accurately using
languageand register
55 – language
relates to themusic
genre well and
discusses artistlike
a real magazine.
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
60- The images
used for the
magazinefitthe
purposeand genres
very well.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
49 – Layoutand
pagedesign iswell
executed.
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
55 – great
understandingof
the need for variety
in fonts and text
size
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
50 – great
knowledgeand skill
to useICTwell for
the task and the
skillsareused to
makea very
professional
magazine.
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt to replicate the professional lookmany
magazineshave and it has hit it withperfection. The designimplementsastyle that you would
mistake for a real magazine and therefore hashit the highestmarks.

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MEDIA AFL2016 Magazine Reviews

  • 1. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Magazine Title: Beats Summary Comment: Overall this isa very poorly made magazine whichis poorly representedasa music magazine.Images and Text look tacky and unprofessional. Magazine Title: Touched Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 23 – Shots consist of basicframing. usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 32 – two mid shots, 1 wideshot. shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 17 – poor choiceof props selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 17 – miseen scene is poor –looks dressed likea school teacher rather than a music artist. manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 10 – presentation is poor. accurately using languageand register 15 – too generic appropriately integratingillustration and text 23 – can’tread sometext, awkward image placing,too many differentfonts. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 23 – poor layoutin someareas showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 24 – understands the needs butpoor execution. usingICTappropriately for the task set 35 – basic skills used to meet needs.
  • 2. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt to replicate the professional lookmany magazineshave, but this ispoorly executeddue to lack of care and detail. Magazine Title: RNB Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 35 – clear understandingof howthey want shots to beframed. usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 24 – variety not truly met shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 20- doesn’ttruly conformto music magazinestyle. Looks morelikea beauty/fashion magazinefor women. selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 20 – styled liketeen students rather than a musicartist. manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 23- croppingdone well,butresizing has madesome images look stretched. accurately using languageand register 24 – language discusses music but too generic and seems very scripted and un-natural appropriately integratingillustration and text 23- Text and images used,however someimages and text seem unnecessary. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 24- attempts to followlayout, however not extremely clear and preciseandseems morelikeputting element where suits. showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 26 – understands the needs butbasic execution. usingICTappropriately for the task set 35 – basic skills used to meet needs.
  • 3. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt shows a clear understandingof how to create a effective andprofessional magazine,however,theirlackof knowledge and skill makes the magazine look unprofessional. Magazine Title: FUSE Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 35 – clear understandingof howthey want shots to beframed. usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 35 – A Variety of shots used to includea Two Shot. shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 35 – clear shooting material thatshows genre easily. selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 25 – Miseen scene makes genreclear however lighting on contents and DPS images are poor manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 23- croppingdone well,butresizing has madesome images look stretched. accurately using languageand register 35 – language discusses music well and meet genre register well with someflaws appropriately integratingillustration and text 36 – this isdone simplybut effectively. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 36–clear understandingof layoutand page design however there area number of flaws in their execution. showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 34 – understands the needs but knowledgeable execution. usingICTappropriately for the task set 35 – basic skills used to meet needs effectively.
  • 4. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Summary Comment: Overall this magazine is a great attempt and producing a professional looking magazine.The layout, Mise enscene,colour scheme is presentedwell due to a great knowledge and skill of Photo-editingsoftware. Magazine Title: R.A.W.R Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate . 48 – Greatuseof shots with cleaver exclusion. usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 38 – a largevariety in shots. shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 38 – looks and feels likea music magazinethat emphasisesits genre. selecting Mise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 50 – a greateffort has been madeto ensuremiseen sceneis effectively used. manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 38 – donewell – imageof ‘Eva’on contents agelooks slightlyodd. accurately using languageand register 47 – language discusses music genre well. appropriately integratingillustration and text 41 – Positioningof text and images has been cleverly though about. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 49 – Layoutand pagedesign iswell executed. showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 50 – great understandingof the need for variety in fonts and text size usingICTappropriately for the task set 50 – great knowledgeand skill to useICTwell for the task.
  • 5. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 60 – Greatuseof shots onlyusingthe aspects of shots needed usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 57 – A variety of shots used to providea professional look. shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 55- All shotsused areappropriateand supportgenre perfectly,making the magazinelook professionally. selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 60 – miseen scene is perfectly executed to support genre and the magazine’sstyle. manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 55- the cropping and resizingof images isdoneto a professional standard and providesa well presented look. accurately using languageand register 55 – language relates to themusic genre well and discusses artistlike a real magazine. appropriately integratingillustration and text 60- The images used for the magazinefitthe purposeand genres very well. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 49 – Layoutand pagedesign iswell executed. showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 55 – great understandingof the need for variety in fonts and text size usingICTappropriately for the task set 50 – great knowledgeand skill to useICTwell for the task and the skillsareused to makea very professional magazine.
  • 6. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Summary Comment: Overall this magazine attempt to replicate the professional lookmany magazineshave and it has hit it withperfection. The designimplementsastyle that you would mistake for a real magazine and therefore hashit the highestmarks.