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Rachael Lau 12.3

3. From the feedback I was given, I was told
that the model did not have enough make
up thus she didn’t look professional. In
addition, she did not give off a exciting
mood to the audience.
To improve on my photo shoot I should
make my model wear red lipstick and eye
make up to resemble K pop magazine
models that I have researched. She would
also need to have a fun atmosphere to
relate to K pop music style, this can be
improved by making her strike a pose
and have a bright smile. In addition her
hair should be stylised, using bright hair
dye or wearing a hat.
Lastly, I should use a close up to focus on
my model so that it would make a bigger
impact on my target audience when they
look at my music magazine at first glance.
This would be an effective way of
appealing to my target audience and
make them buy my music magazine.
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