1. WWW on draft #3
Close up of the phone. Focus of this shot.
Bath scene. Close up of her giving her number, in the
flashback.

2. Ebi on draft #3
Better title More close-ups to show her thinking.
Better props Have a more variety of shots.

3. Things to do for draft 4
• Have a variety of shots
• More close up shots and extreme close ups.
• Improve on props.
• Change effect for the flashbacks.
• Make the titles and credits better, have them in a
better location.
• Have music throughout the whole opening
sequence.
• Improve on files papers.