3. Even better if:
• Have 2 folders
• Have close-up shots of him writing.
• Distinct way of real life and flashback.
• Improve on character representation.
• Not being dead, but missing.
• Change editing.
• Change ending.
• Have her with a voice over.
4. Even better if :
• Put titles in a different place.
• Have a background song for the whole opening
sequence
• Put pictures of crime scene.
• More match on action
• Usa camera pan and zoom to concentrate on
specific words.
• Panning from bottom
• Last shot her face.
• Variety of shots of her sitting down.