5. Improvements which could have been made: Many people, when receiving feedback seem to think the photographs were letters. However I did show the photos going up the scarf and when the single photo climbed up her leg near the beginning. If improving this video, id have to make this clearer so that an overall theme and narrative is identified. What are the most effective features of the music video? The stop motion effect and the combination of song and action proved most popular with the audience.