Nicola Theunissen presented Khulisa’s second brownbag lunch session about the rise of visual communication and social media to craft effective messages. Her presentation also touched on the basics of business writing.
5. Experimenting with:
• Data from November 2013 online
survey by
NonprofitMarketingGuide.com –
amongst 2135 non-profits
• Infographic design by Stone Soup
Creative
9. IMAGES
THE POWER OF IMAGE
VS.WORDS
More emotive
Faster
recollection,
lacks context
More open to
misinterpretation
and cultural
sensitivity
More rational
More time to
process and
evaluate detailed
message
Less subjective, reduced
risk of conveying ‘wrong’
message
Quicker
grasp
of big picture
message
Takes longer to
remember, but deeper
insight into subject
12. 7 Habits of Highly Effective
Photographers
1. Compose in Thirds 2. Avoid Camera shake 3. Apply the Sunny 16 rule
5. Consider resolution
4. Capture
emotion
7. Identify a subject6. Tell a story
13. VISUAL SOCIOLOGY & DATA COLLECTION
Data collection using cameras:
• Field notes vs. Dictaphone vs. video recorder
• Small group interactions, classroom studies, ethnography,
participant observation, oral history
• Video cameras replacing researcher – dangerous situations,
where researcher is not welcome or to remove observer effect
• Photo elicitation – asking research subjects to respond to photos
or film
14. THE BASICS OF BUSINESS
WRITING
1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of
speech which you are used to seeing in print.
2. Never use a long word where a short one will do
[for the production of = produce; at this time =
now; first and foremost = first]; it should be noted
that [OMIT!]
3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
4. Never use the passive where you can use the
active.
5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or
a jargon word if you can think of an everydayGeorge Orwell
15. THE BASICS OF BUSINESS
WRITING
Writing successfully in business occurs when:
• You write in the active voice
• You write in the simple past tense
• You avoid long sentences
• Your writing is focussed, and intense
• You don’t over explain
• You’re Your grammar is correct
• The story flows with clear linkages
• You remove similes and metaphors
• You don’t use pretentions or elaborate words
• You write in English (foreign words are pretentious)
• You don’t overwrite – you will bore and alert your reader to your inexperience
Source: Amanda Patterson; Writers Write – Plain Language
16. In the words of others
• “Substitute ‘damn’ every time you're inclined to write ‘very;’ your editor will
delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.” – Mark Twain
• “After nourishment, shelter and companionship, stories are the thing we
need most in the world.” – Philip Pullman
• “The road to hell is paved with adverbs.” – Stephen King
• “Any word you have to hunt for in a thesaurus is the wrong word. There
are no exceptions to this rule.” – Stephen King
• “Cut out all these exclamation points. An exclamation point is like
laughing at your own joke.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald
• “Easy reading is damn hard writing.” – Nathaniel Hawthorne
• “The most valuable of all talents is that of never using two words when
one will do.” – Thomas Jefferson
• “You can fix anything but a blank page.” – Nora Roberts
17. PRACTICAL TIPS
1. Familiarise yourself with style guides:
http://www.economist.com/styleguide/introduction
Which informs, that defines. This is the house that Jack built.
But This house, which Jack built, is now falling down.
3. Word processing and
readability statistics
4. Subscribe for
online writing
webinars or
courses
http://www.writer
sdigest.com/free
-book-webinars
2. Use grammar improvement apps: www.writingforward.com,
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/app/english-grammar-in-use-
tests/id345571518
21. WRITING NEWS
• TIMING: Is it new?
• SIGNIFICANCE: Will it have a major impact?
• PROXIMITY: Did it happen close to us?
• PROMINENCE: Did it happen to someone
prominent?
• HUMAN INTEREST: Does it appeal to one’s
emotions?