5 steps to more sales on Amazon - part 3

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In the last section, we looked at product titles and pricing - two of the key variables that
customers see before they click on your listing.
But, what happens when they click on your listing?
Potential buyers are on your page now, just where we want them :)
It’s time to turn visitors into buyers. Get this right, and it’s more money in your pocket.
Your title and price will still be visible, but they’ll be presented with new and more detailed
information to decide if they want to buy your product. That’s what we’ll focus on today.
Let’s look at an example of an Amazon customer who is interested in buying a laptop bag.
As you scroll down, the new information is highlighted in red.
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I highlighted and numbered three areas:
1. A full array of product images;
2. Bullet points / key features; and
3. Product description
Images (#1) will be covered in part 4. Today, we’re focusing on bullet points (#2) and
product description (#3).
Did you notice something what is in between the bullet points and description sections
above? Scroll back up and check if you didn’t.
So, did you see it?
There are many other products (including those of your competitors) being promoted by
Amazon!
Here’s the truth - Amazon really doesn’t care if a customer buys your product or your
competitors. They get commission and fees either way, so they increase the overall
chance of a sale by promoting other products on your page.
The bottom line - your bullet points and description must be well written to avoid visitors
going elsewhere.
Here’s what you need to do:
1. Capture their attention - make it relevant to your target audience and their needs
and problems;
2. Provide the information they need to make a purchasing decision; and
3. Most importantly, close the deal!
Now, I’ll provide you with our best tips on how to do this.
We’ll keep it direct and actionable - you can use these tips as a checklist when writing
copy for your Amazon listings.
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• Identify your target audience and make sure that your sales copy speaks to them
• Address why a customer should buy your product instead of the competition
• Be clear about what you are offering, including extras e.g. an ebook or carry bag
• Detail what the product can do for your customers, but don’t exaggerate or
mislead
• Provide dimensions and technical specifications
• Outline the materials / ingredients used
• Offer care instructions (if applicable)
• State your warranty and return policy (if applicable)
• Answer common questions asked by potential customers
• Be mindful of content that Amazon prohibits
• Get feedback on your sales copy from colleagues, family & friends
• Proofread – text must flow well & be error-free (or it can undermine the credibility
of your offering)
• Check the maximum number of characters allowed per bullet point for your listing
in Seller Central*
• Use all 5 bullet points
• Highlight the top features and / or benefits of your offering
• Include important keywords, where possible
• Check Amazon’s tips on writing bullets for your category
• Check the maximum number. of characters allowed for your description in Seller
Central*
• Using html improves appearance - it’s technically forbidden, but is widely used by
sellers. Use at your own risk!
• Include important keywords, where possible - don’t just add keywords for the sake
of it. We want the sales copy to flow fell and encourage customers to buy your
product
If you go over the amount permitted, your listing may be suppressed by Amazon.

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What does this mean?
In simple terms, this is when Amazon decreases your ranking / limits the visibility of your
listing. The result is a reduction in traffic and sales.
How to check if your listing is being suppressed:
• Login to seller central
• Under the “Inventory” menu, click, “Manage Inventory”:
• If you have suppressed listings, you will see “Suppressed” in the top navigation
pane
To unsuppress your listing, you’ll usually need to provide some additional information or
make an adjustment to your listing e.g. reduce the number of characters.
Ok, so that’s how to write great bullets and product descriptions that convert more of
your visitors into buyers!
Want to hire an expert to help with this? We can help :)
Our Listing Optimization Service for Amazon US & UK includes:
• Copywriting from scratch - product title, bullets and description; AND
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The process is simple:
1. Order here - https://www.amzeurope.com/order/amazon-listing-service
2. We’ll then send a short form with a few questions to learn about your product(s)
3. 5-7 working days later, you'll receive your new sales asset(s)!