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1 COMMA SPLİCE
    2 RUN-ON SENTENCE
3 NON-PARALLEL SENTENCE
  4 SENTENCE FRAGMENTS
 A comma splice is the use of a comma to join
  two independent clauses. For example:
 It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before
  dark.[1]
 Although acceptable in some languages and
  compulsory in others, comma splices are usually
  considered style errors in English.
 Simply removing the comma does not correct the
  error, but results in a run-on sentence. There are
  several ways to correct a comma splice:
   Change the comma to a semicolon, colon, or dash:
 It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before
  dark.
 We cannot reach town before dark: it is nearly half past
  five.
 It is nearly half past five—we cannot reach town before
  dark.
 Write the two clauses as two separate sentence:
   It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
 Insert a coordinating conjunction following the comma:
   It is nearly half past five, and we cannot reach town before
    dark.
   It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
 Make one clause dependent on the other:
 Because it is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town
 before dark.
 It is nearly half past five, which means we cannot reach
 town before dark.
   Use a semicolon plus a conjunctive adverb:
   It is nearly half past five; hence, we cannot reach town before
    dark.
 A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or
 more independent clauses are joined without
 appropriate punctuation or conjunction. It is generally
 considered a stylistic error, though it is occasionally
 used in literature and may be used as a rhetorical
 device. An example of a run-on is a comma splice, in
 which two independent clauses are joined with a
 comma without an accompanying coordinating
 conjunction.Some prescriptivists exclude comma
 splices from the definition of a run-on sentence,but
 this does not imply that they consider comma splices
 to be acceptable.
 The mere fact that a sentence is long does not make it
 a run-on sentence; sentences are run-ons only when
 they contain more than one independent clause. A
 run-on sentence can be as short as four words—for
 instance: I drive she walks. In this case there are two
 independent clauses: two subjects paired with
 two intransitive verbs. So as long as clauses are
 punctuated appropriately, a writer can assemble
 multiple independent clauses in a single sentence; in
 fact, a properly constructed sentence can be extended
 indefinitely.
 A run-on sentence, without any punctuation or
 conjunction between "gas" and "we":
   My car is out of gas we cannot reach town before dark.
 A comma splice, which is considered a run-on
 sentence in English by some usage experts:
   It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before
    dark.
 Use separate sentences. However, this may disconnect
  related independent clauses and cause some of the
  meaning to be lost:
   It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
 Use a semicolon. This maintains the connection between
  the clauses while ensuring a pause between the two ideas:
   It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.
 Use a coordinating conjunction.
   It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
Understanding Parallel Structure
     Parallel structure (also called parallelism) is the repetition of a
    chosen grammatical form within a sentence.By making each
    compared item or idea in your sentence follow the same
    grammatical pattern, you create a parallel construction.
   Example
   Not Parallel:
   Ellen likes hiking, the rodeo, and to take afternoon naps.
   Parallel:
   Ellen likes hiking, attending the rodeo, and taking afternoon
    naps. OR
   Ellen likes to hike, attend the rodeo, and take afternoon naps
 Using Parallel Structure
  With Coordinating Conjunctions
When you connect two or more clauses or phrases with coordinating
  conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, or so), use parallel structure.
    Example
Not Parallel:
 My best friend took me dancing and to a show.
Parallel:
 My best friend took me to a dance and a show.
 With Correlative Conjunctions
When you connect two clauses or phrases with a correlative conjunction
  (not only…but also, either…or,
neither…nor, if…then, etc.), use parallel structure.
Not Parallel:
 My dog not only likes to play fetch, but also chase cars.
 Parallel:
 My dog not only likes to play fetch, but he also likes to chase cars. OR
 My dog likes not only to play fetch, but also to chase cars.
             With Phrases or Clauses of Comparison
   When you connect two clauses or phrases with a word of comparison,
   such as than or as, use parallel structure.
 Example

Not Parallel:
 I would rather pay for my education than financial aid.
Parallel:
 I would rather pay for my education than receive financial aid
Some helpful hints on how to revise sentences for
  parallel structure:
 1) Figure out what parts of the sentence are being
  compared.
 2) Decide whether they are parallel, i.e. arranged or
  constructed in the same way.
 3) If they are not, make them parallel by making the
  grammatical construction the same in each part.
 Bruce Wayne enjoys donning his Batman costume,
  answering the Commissioner's phone calls, and saving
  Gotham City from cruel villains like the Penguin.
A SENTENCE FRAGMENT fails to be a sentence in
  the sense that it cannot stand by itself. It does not
  contain even one independent clause. There are
  several reasons why a group of words may seem to act
  like a sentence but not have the wherewithal to make it
  as a complete thought.
 It may locate something in time and place with a
  prepositional phrase or a series of such phrases,
  but it's still lacking a proper subject-verb
  relationship within an independent clause:
  EXAMPLE: In Japan, during the last war and just
  before the armistice.
This sentence accomplishes a great deal in terms of placing
  the reader in time and place, but there is no subject, no
  verb.
 It describes something, but there is no subject-verb
  relationship:
 EXAMPLE: Working far into the night in an effort to
  salvage her little boat.
This is a verbal phrase that wants to modify something, the
  real subject of the sentence (about to come up), probably
  the she who was working so hard.
 It may have most of the makings of a sentence but still
  be missing an important part of a verb string:
EXAMPLE: Some of the students working in Professor
  Espinoza's laboratory last semester.
Remember that an -ing verb form without an auxiliary form
  to accompany it can never be a verb.
 It may even have a subject-verb relationship, but it has
  been subordinated to another idea by a dependent
  word and so cannot stand by itself:
EXAMPLE: Even though he had the better arguments and was
  by far the more powerful speaker.
This sentence fragment has a subject, he, and two
  verbs, had and was, but it cannot stand by itself because of
  the dependent word (subordinating conjunction) even
  though.

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  • 1. 1 COMMA SPLİCE 2 RUN-ON SENTENCE 3 NON-PARALLEL SENTENCE 4 SENTENCE FRAGMENTS
  • 2.  A comma splice is the use of a comma to join two independent clauses. For example:  It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before dark.[1]  Although acceptable in some languages and compulsory in others, comma splices are usually considered style errors in English.
  • 3.  Simply removing the comma does not correct the error, but results in a run-on sentence. There are several ways to correct a comma splice: Change the comma to a semicolon, colon, or dash:  It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.  We cannot reach town before dark: it is nearly half past five.  It is nearly half past five—we cannot reach town before dark.
  • 4.  Write the two clauses as two separate sentence:  It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.  Insert a coordinating conjunction following the comma:  It is nearly half past five, and we cannot reach town before dark.  It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.  Make one clause dependent on the other:  Because it is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before dark.  It is nearly half past five, which means we cannot reach town before dark.  Use a semicolon plus a conjunctive adverb:  It is nearly half past five; hence, we cannot reach town before dark.
  • 5.  A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction. It is generally considered a stylistic error, though it is occasionally used in literature and may be used as a rhetorical device. An example of a run-on is a comma splice, in which two independent clauses are joined with a comma without an accompanying coordinating conjunction.Some prescriptivists exclude comma splices from the definition of a run-on sentence,but this does not imply that they consider comma splices to be acceptable.
  • 6.  The mere fact that a sentence is long does not make it a run-on sentence; sentences are run-ons only when they contain more than one independent clause. A run-on sentence can be as short as four words—for instance: I drive she walks. In this case there are two independent clauses: two subjects paired with two intransitive verbs. So as long as clauses are punctuated appropriately, a writer can assemble multiple independent clauses in a single sentence; in fact, a properly constructed sentence can be extended indefinitely.
  • 7.  A run-on sentence, without any punctuation or conjunction between "gas" and "we":  My car is out of gas we cannot reach town before dark.  A comma splice, which is considered a run-on sentence in English by some usage experts:  It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before dark.
  • 8.  Use separate sentences. However, this may disconnect related independent clauses and cause some of the meaning to be lost:  It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.  Use a semicolon. This maintains the connection between the clauses while ensuring a pause between the two ideas:  It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.  Use a coordinating conjunction.  It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
  • 9. Understanding Parallel Structure Parallel structure (also called parallelism) is the repetition of a chosen grammatical form within a sentence.By making each compared item or idea in your sentence follow the same grammatical pattern, you create a parallel construction.  Example  Not Parallel:  Ellen likes hiking, the rodeo, and to take afternoon naps.  Parallel:  Ellen likes hiking, attending the rodeo, and taking afternoon naps. OR  Ellen likes to hike, attend the rodeo, and take afternoon naps
  • 10.  Using Parallel Structure With Coordinating Conjunctions When you connect two or more clauses or phrases with coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, or so), use parallel structure.  Example Not Parallel:  My best friend took me dancing and to a show. Parallel:  My best friend took me to a dance and a show.  With Correlative Conjunctions When you connect two clauses or phrases with a correlative conjunction (not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, if…then, etc.), use parallel structure.
  • 11. Not Parallel:  My dog not only likes to play fetch, but also chase cars. Parallel:  My dog not only likes to play fetch, but he also likes to chase cars. OR  My dog likes not only to play fetch, but also to chase cars. With Phrases or Clauses of Comparison When you connect two clauses or phrases with a word of comparison, such as than or as, use parallel structure.  Example Not Parallel:  I would rather pay for my education than financial aid. Parallel:  I would rather pay for my education than receive financial aid
  • 12. Some helpful hints on how to revise sentences for parallel structure:  1) Figure out what parts of the sentence are being compared.  2) Decide whether they are parallel, i.e. arranged or constructed in the same way.  3) If they are not, make them parallel by making the grammatical construction the same in each part.  Bruce Wayne enjoys donning his Batman costume, answering the Commissioner's phone calls, and saving Gotham City from cruel villains like the Penguin.
  • 13. A SENTENCE FRAGMENT fails to be a sentence in the sense that it cannot stand by itself. It does not contain even one independent clause. There are several reasons why a group of words may seem to act like a sentence but not have the wherewithal to make it as a complete thought.  It may locate something in time and place with a prepositional phrase or a series of such phrases, but it's still lacking a proper subject-verb relationship within an independent clause: EXAMPLE: In Japan, during the last war and just before the armistice.
  • 14. This sentence accomplishes a great deal in terms of placing the reader in time and place, but there is no subject, no verb.  It describes something, but there is no subject-verb relationship: EXAMPLE: Working far into the night in an effort to salvage her little boat. This is a verbal phrase that wants to modify something, the real subject of the sentence (about to come up), probably the she who was working so hard.  It may have most of the makings of a sentence but still be missing an important part of a verb string:
  • 15. EXAMPLE: Some of the students working in Professor Espinoza's laboratory last semester. Remember that an -ing verb form without an auxiliary form to accompany it can never be a verb.  It may even have a subject-verb relationship, but it has been subordinated to another idea by a dependent word and so cannot stand by itself: EXAMPLE: Even though he had the better arguments and was by far the more powerful speaker. This sentence fragment has a subject, he, and two verbs, had and was, but it cannot stand by itself because of the dependent word (subordinating conjunction) even though.