2. A comma splice is the use of a comma to join
two independent clauses. For example:
It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before
dark.[1]
Although acceptable in some languages and
compulsory in others, comma splices are usually
considered style errors in English.
3. Simply removing the comma does not correct the
error, but results in a run-on sentence. There are
several ways to correct a comma splice:
Change the comma to a semicolon, colon, or dash:
It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before
dark.
We cannot reach town before dark: it is nearly half past
five.
It is nearly half past five—we cannot reach town before
dark.
4. Write the two clauses as two separate sentence:
It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
Insert a coordinating conjunction following the comma:
It is nearly half past five, and we cannot reach town before
dark.
It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
Make one clause dependent on the other:
Because it is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town
before dark.
It is nearly half past five, which means we cannot reach
town before dark.
Use a semicolon plus a conjunctive adverb:
It is nearly half past five; hence, we cannot reach town before
dark.
5. A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or
more independent clauses are joined without
appropriate punctuation or conjunction. It is generally
considered a stylistic error, though it is occasionally
used in literature and may be used as a rhetorical
device. An example of a run-on is a comma splice, in
which two independent clauses are joined with a
comma without an accompanying coordinating
conjunction.Some prescriptivists exclude comma
splices from the definition of a run-on sentence,but
this does not imply that they consider comma splices
to be acceptable.
6. The mere fact that a sentence is long does not make it
a run-on sentence; sentences are run-ons only when
they contain more than one independent clause. A
run-on sentence can be as short as four words—for
instance: I drive she walks. In this case there are two
independent clauses: two subjects paired with
two intransitive verbs. So as long as clauses are
punctuated appropriately, a writer can assemble
multiple independent clauses in a single sentence; in
fact, a properly constructed sentence can be extended
indefinitely.
7. A run-on sentence, without any punctuation or
conjunction between "gas" and "we":
My car is out of gas we cannot reach town before dark.
A comma splice, which is considered a run-on
sentence in English by some usage experts:
It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before
dark.
8. Use separate sentences. However, this may disconnect
related independent clauses and cause some of the
meaning to be lost:
It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
Use a semicolon. This maintains the connection between
the clauses while ensuring a pause between the two ideas:
It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.
Use a coordinating conjunction.
It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.
9. Understanding Parallel Structure
Parallel structure (also called parallelism) is the repetition of a
chosen grammatical form within a sentence.By making each
compared item or idea in your sentence follow the same
grammatical pattern, you create a parallel construction.
Example
Not Parallel:
Ellen likes hiking, the rodeo, and to take afternoon naps.
Parallel:
Ellen likes hiking, attending the rodeo, and taking afternoon
naps. OR
Ellen likes to hike, attend the rodeo, and take afternoon naps
10. Using Parallel Structure
With Coordinating Conjunctions
When you connect two or more clauses or phrases with coordinating
conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, or so), use parallel structure.
Example
Not Parallel:
My best friend took me dancing and to a show.
Parallel:
My best friend took me to a dance and a show.
With Correlative Conjunctions
When you connect two clauses or phrases with a correlative conjunction
(not only…but also, either…or,
neither…nor, if…then, etc.), use parallel structure.
11. Not Parallel:
My dog not only likes to play fetch, but also chase cars.
Parallel:
My dog not only likes to play fetch, but he also likes to chase cars. OR
My dog likes not only to play fetch, but also to chase cars.
With Phrases or Clauses of Comparison
When you connect two clauses or phrases with a word of comparison,
such as than or as, use parallel structure.
Example
Not Parallel:
I would rather pay for my education than financial aid.
Parallel:
I would rather pay for my education than receive financial aid
12. Some helpful hints on how to revise sentences for
parallel structure:
1) Figure out what parts of the sentence are being
compared.
2) Decide whether they are parallel, i.e. arranged or
constructed in the same way.
3) If they are not, make them parallel by making the
grammatical construction the same in each part.
Bruce Wayne enjoys donning his Batman costume,
answering the Commissioner's phone calls, and saving
Gotham City from cruel villains like the Penguin.
13. A SENTENCE FRAGMENT fails to be a sentence in
the sense that it cannot stand by itself. It does not
contain even one independent clause. There are
several reasons why a group of words may seem to act
like a sentence but not have the wherewithal to make it
as a complete thought.
It may locate something in time and place with a
prepositional phrase or a series of such phrases,
but it's still lacking a proper subject-verb
relationship within an independent clause:
EXAMPLE: In Japan, during the last war and just
before the armistice.
14. This sentence accomplishes a great deal in terms of placing
the reader in time and place, but there is no subject, no
verb.
It describes something, but there is no subject-verb
relationship:
EXAMPLE: Working far into the night in an effort to
salvage her little boat.
This is a verbal phrase that wants to modify something, the
real subject of the sentence (about to come up), probably
the she who was working so hard.
It may have most of the makings of a sentence but still
be missing an important part of a verb string:
15. EXAMPLE: Some of the students working in Professor
Espinoza's laboratory last semester.
Remember that an -ing verb form without an auxiliary form
to accompany it can never be a verb.
It may even have a subject-verb relationship, but it has
been subordinated to another idea by a dependent
word and so cannot stand by itself:
EXAMPLE: Even though he had the better arguments and was
by far the more powerful speaker.
This sentence fragment has a subject, he, and two
verbs, had and was, but it cannot stand by itself because of
the dependent word (subordinating conjunction) even
though.