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The idea was not clearly communicated and 66.7% of people in the class thought this whilst 33.3% of the
  class thought it was. For improvement my group could communicate between each other more clearly so
  we know what we are saying and can make tell our idea more clearly.




On this survey our group was not very enthusiastic as the highest we go on the scale was 3 by one people. To
improve this we need to be more excited about our project and think of something interesting that makes us
stand out from other groups.
From these results most people were not very excited about our short film idea with almost half the class
answering 1 (not very excited) to improve this we could make our idea clearer to everyone and tell them more
about the story.




Half of the class thought they were directly addressed and half didn’t so to improve this we could address
the people more by giving more clear eye contact and moving forward from time to time instead of
standing still.
Most people thought the idea was poor with half the class voting 1(poor idea). To improve this we could
     make changes to the script and make improvements to make the films more exciting to everyone and
     improve our scores.




Our 3 key strengths were clear eye contact scoring the highest, second was our originality of the idea and also
body language was the third highest scored. We need to improve how clear and concise we our too people
and also confident at answering questions at the end.
We need to improve on all areas with over half the class voting for each option. To do this we could think
about how we present our pitch so we know what we are going to do and so we are more confident when
presenting our short film idea.




 Conclusion

 From these results our group needs to drastically improve our pitch and the way we present our film
 idea to everyone. Things like the way we answer questions needs massively improving with 100% of
 people saying it was the most negative thing about the presentation.

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Jrj productions practice film pitch feedback

  • 1. The idea was not clearly communicated and 66.7% of people in the class thought this whilst 33.3% of the class thought it was. For improvement my group could communicate between each other more clearly so we know what we are saying and can make tell our idea more clearly. On this survey our group was not very enthusiastic as the highest we go on the scale was 3 by one people. To improve this we need to be more excited about our project and think of something interesting that makes us stand out from other groups.
  • 2. From these results most people were not very excited about our short film idea with almost half the class answering 1 (not very excited) to improve this we could make our idea clearer to everyone and tell them more about the story. Half of the class thought they were directly addressed and half didn’t so to improve this we could address the people more by giving more clear eye contact and moving forward from time to time instead of standing still.
  • 3. Most people thought the idea was poor with half the class voting 1(poor idea). To improve this we could make changes to the script and make improvements to make the films more exciting to everyone and improve our scores. Our 3 key strengths were clear eye contact scoring the highest, second was our originality of the idea and also body language was the third highest scored. We need to improve how clear and concise we our too people and also confident at answering questions at the end.
  • 4. We need to improve on all areas with over half the class voting for each option. To do this we could think about how we present our pitch so we know what we are going to do and so we are more confident when presenting our short film idea. Conclusion From these results our group needs to drastically improve our pitch and the way we present our film idea to everyone. Things like the way we answer questions needs massively improving with 100% of people saying it was the most negative thing about the presentation.