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1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.
this document is explaining about how to install sound driver for our computers.
at beginning, this talk about sound driver's work and Feature for people who doesn't know about sound
drivers.
Furthermore, this document divide into five steps how to install sound drivers for beginners.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.


I don't think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Because this document is not detailed.
For example, In step 2, If your PCI expansion card slots already be filled by other hardwares,
what do you to install sound driver hardware? This document don't explain about it. And so on.
Because of this, I can't think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the
idea that was communicated.


3. What details are included in the document?
Procedure for opening computer that need for installing sound driver hardware.
And, this document simply explain structure of computer.
For example, computer has a mother board in middle of case.
That has some PCI expansion card slots for used to install new hardware on the computer.
Sound driver hardware are needed to put in PCI expansion card slots.


4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
I think this document is not detailed.
In my experience, like this document usually have some pictures for help us understand the contents.
But, this document have no picture!
It is too difficult that I understand this document's contents.
I want some pictures in this document, at least one in each sections.



5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I think this document is very simple.
For example, other document that is not simple, too heavy to open our PC.
And document will be hard to see, and to understand.
This document is very simple, it is very visible.
I think this document is easy to see, and to understand.



6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
This document don't explain about exception.
If your sound driver hardware can't connect your motherboard's PCI expansion card slots,
do you know what to do to installing your sound driver hardware?
If your computer doesn't install your sound driver hardware, do you know what to do to installing your
sound driver hardware?
I think this is errors of this document.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
First, I suggest to put some pictures to more easier to understand this document's contents.
Second, I suggest to insert some another page for exception.
For example, If your sound driver hardware can't connect your mother board, buy another one!
Third, I suggest to translate to show many people.
This document is talked in English only.
But, this document translate in the much languages ,the more people will show this page.

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Peer Review Exercise#1

  • 1. 1.Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. this document is explaining about how to install sound driver for our computers. at beginning, this talk about sound driver's work and Feature for people who doesn't know about sound drivers. Furthermore, this document divide into five steps how to install sound drivers for beginners. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I don't think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Because this document is not detailed. For example, In step 2, If your PCI expansion card slots already be filled by other hardwares, what do you to install sound driver hardware? This document don't explain about it. And so on. Because of this, I can't think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. 3. What details are included in the document? Procedure for opening computer that need for installing sound driver hardware. And, this document simply explain structure of computer. For example, computer has a mother board in middle of case. That has some PCI expansion card slots for used to install new hardware on the computer. Sound driver hardware are needed to put in PCI expansion card slots. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? I think this document is not detailed. In my experience, like this document usually have some pictures for help us understand the contents. But, this document have no picture! It is too difficult that I understand this document's contents. I want some pictures in this document, at least one in each sections. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think this document is very simple. For example, other document that is not simple, too heavy to open our PC. And document will be hard to see, and to understand. This document is very simple, it is very visible. I think this document is easy to see, and to understand. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? This document don't explain about exception. If your sound driver hardware can't connect your motherboard's PCI expansion card slots, do you know what to do to installing your sound driver hardware? If your computer doesn't install your sound driver hardware, do you know what to do to installing your sound driver hardware? I think this is errors of this document.
  • 2. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? First, I suggest to put some pictures to more easier to understand this document's contents. Second, I suggest to insert some another page for exception. For example, If your sound driver hardware can't connect your mother board, buy another one! Third, I suggest to translate to show many people. This document is talked in English only. But, this document translate in the much languages ,the more people will show this page.