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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?

The primary idea of the content in the document is to show the way to rip a DVD from the disc onto
your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs, such
as media players and video editor, and to rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight
to disc.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

I think that it is not communicated to every individual section. Although every individual section is
given explanations about the way to rip the DVD to your computer and burn the file straight to disc,
every individual section refers to different the duplicate DVD software and show different way to
duplicate DVD.


3. What details are included in the document?

The details which are described in this document are mainly the way you should do when you rip the
DVD to your computer and burn the file straight to disc. The details are described step by step.

For example, it describes that software which you should download and install into your computer,
where you should insert something into and procedures to duplicate DVD.


4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

Yes, it is. I have some confusing in this content in the document. What kind of DVD-R should I use?
Although it is written that "'DVD Decrypter' listing inside the folder to launch the program.", what is
"listing inside the folder"? I want it to make it clear to easy to understand and to know detail
information.


5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

The points which I think this document good is that this document specifies the thing you need to
duplicate the DVD which is duplicate DVD software, materials that DVD-R etc.. To specify that, the
reader can know what to prepare to duplicate DVD, download and install the software to the computer.
As it is written instruction step by step, the reader can know what to do clearly.


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?

There’s no error that needs to be corrected.



7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?

If I improve this document, I would post something pictures which help the reader understand. Posting
the pictures, the reader would work easily. Because it is difficult that only words make the reader
understand something such as parts of machine. And I would explain details of things which will be
used so that the reader can find the roles of the thing.


8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how
this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

If our group would author a similar document, we would post some pictures, write details of the part of
machines and write contents of tips and warnings. Writing contents of tips and warnings make the
reader take care attentions and who would not fail to duplicate DVD to computers and burn it to disk so
easy.

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Peer review exercise2

  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document? The primary idea of the content in the document is to show the way to rip a DVD from the disc onto your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor, and to rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight to disc. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that it is not communicated to every individual section. Although every individual section is given explanations about the way to rip the DVD to your computer and burn the file straight to disc, every individual section refers to different the duplicate DVD software and show different way to duplicate DVD. 3. What details are included in the document? The details which are described in this document are mainly the way you should do when you rip the DVD to your computer and burn the file straight to disc. The details are described step by step. For example, it describes that software which you should download and install into your computer, where you should insert something into and procedures to duplicate DVD. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? Yes, it is. I have some confusing in this content in the document. What kind of DVD-R should I use? Although it is written that "'DVD Decrypter' listing inside the folder to launch the program.", what is "listing inside the folder"? I want it to make it clear to easy to understand and to know detail information. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? The points which I think this document good is that this document specifies the thing you need to duplicate the DVD which is duplicate DVD software, materials that DVD-R etc.. To specify that, the reader can know what to prepare to duplicate DVD, download and install the software to the computer. As it is written instruction step by step, the reader can know what to do clearly. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There’s no error that needs to be corrected. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? If I improve this document, I would post something pictures which help the reader understand. Posting
  • 2. the pictures, the reader would work easily. Because it is difficult that only words make the reader understand something such as parts of machine. And I would explain details of things which will be used so that the reader can find the roles of the thing. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). If our group would author a similar document, we would post some pictures, write details of the part of machines and write contents of tips and warnings. Writing contents of tips and warnings make the reader take care attentions and who would not fail to duplicate DVD to computers and burn it to disk so easy.