If you’re presenting or speaking, the words you use matter. They break through the attention deficit and make what you’re saying sticky. In the Make a Powerful Point system, we focus on STRUCTURE, PICTURES and WORDS. All are equally important, and all play a role in building a powerful message, constructing a deck, unlocking your best self as a presenter and engaging with the audience. James T. Kirk had a way with words. We can learn some lessons from him.
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A generation of English teachers shuddered when William Shatner uttered the immortal words..
“To boldly go where no man has gone before.”
Legend has it that Star Trek not only brought us Warp Drive and pointy eared aliens, it also split the infinitive. This was decades after Rutherford split the atom.
“To explore strange new worlds. To seek out new life and new civilizations. To boldly go where no man has gone before”. — It just sounds good.
If you’re presenting or speaking, the words you use matter. They break through the attention deficit and make what you’re saying stick.
In the Make a Powerful Point system, we focus on STRUCTURE, PICTURES and WORDS.
All are equally important, and all play a role in building a powerful message, constructing a deck, unlocking your best self as a presenter, and engaging with the audience.
James T. Kirk had a way with words. We can learn some lessons from him.
Kirk was a great flouter of convention. Whether it was the Kobayashi Maru or splitting the infinitive, Kirk was not one to slavishly follow the rules.
He focused on the outcome. The same applies for your presentation. The outcome, for you, is getting the point across
RULE#1 WHAT EVER IT TAKES TO SOUND BETTERYou have to frame the way people see the world and move them to action. Rules and conventions help because they are a common ground for understanding.
But it doesn’t hurt to wander over the lines occasionally. George W.’s Bushisms did this. Phrases like, “I’m the decider, and I decide what is best…” are not paragons of English grammar, but they clearly got his point across.
RULE#2 MADE UP WORDS ARE OK. IN FACT THEY’RE GREAT.Phaser. Tricorder. Photon Torpedoes. The Star Trek universe is full of made up words. They stand out and make the stories richer. This isn’t new to Star Trek.
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RULE#3 SPEAK SIMPLY AND CLEARLY. ESPECIALLY TO ALIENS AND LOWER LIFE-FORMSThe typical Star Fleet Captain speaks simply and clearly
I am not sure if there’s a special Shakespeare class at the academy, or it’s a coincidence that James T. Kirk and Jean-Luc Picard sound like classically trained actors.
They brokered peace treaties, negotiated on behalf of The federation and made first contact with alien beings.
The people you couldn’t understand never made it out of the engine room, were always muttering about Dilithium crystals or they never spoke anyway. In the Star Trek universe, those people all wore red shirts.
The lesson here is simple. Never utilize gargantuan words when you can use short ones.
Yes, you must have a Return on Investment. Yes, you have to show the data behind your argument. But you’re speaking to humans.
If you want to win over the hearts and minds of your customers do that — don’t acquire them.
What’s next – will you be assimilating them? Resistance might be futile, but the humans in the room will resist.
No one ever explored a strange new civilization without a little work.
This treasure trove of Trekkie memorabilia served up the original memo’s behind the opening narration in Star Trek
The good thing about words (especially on a presentation) is that they are the easiest thing to change. Look how much different — and better, the opening narration is from the 1st draft to the last.
When you’re working on your pitch, or your deck, do the same thing. Get the draft down, and then work on it, make it better. Boldly go…