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Past
the
RFP!
Persuasive
Writing
That
Sells
Presented
by
Jody
Sutter,
The
Sutter
Company
October
9,
2015
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4. “We also launched targeted
CPA-driven display buys across
endemic and behaviorally
targeted ad networks.”
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5. “We also launched targeted
CPA-driven display buys across
endemic and behaviorally
targeted ad networks.”
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What??
10. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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2
3
4
5
Pause. What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
Edit
to
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
11. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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1
2
3
4
Pause. What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
5 Editto
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
13. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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1
2
3
4
Pause.
What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
5 Editto
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
15. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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1
2
3
4
Pause.
What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
5 Editto
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
17. Stasis
Trigger Quest Critical
choice
Surprise
Resolution
Climax
Reversal
Triumph
Struggle
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A
classic
story
arc
Time
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19. Situation
Challenge Research Creative
Development
Insight
Results
Campaign
Launch
Measurement
and
Adjustment
Triumph
Struggle
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How
you
can
do
it
with
a
case
study
Time
Execution
BIG
IDEA
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20. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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1
2
3
4
Pause.
What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use
the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
5 Editto
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
21. The
writer’s
checklist
Active
versus
passive
Simplify
words
Eliminate
unnecessary
words
Avoid
weakling
verbs
Use
adjectives
carefully
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26. The
writer’s
checklist
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In an effort to
Is of the opinion that
At this point in time
Due to the fact that
With the exception of
For the purpose of
Until such time as
Referred to as
Simplify
phrases
27. The
writer’s
checklist
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In an effort to
Is of the opinion that
At this point in time
Due to the fact that
With the exception of
For the purpose of
Until such time as
Referred to as
Simplify
phrases
To
Believes
Now
Because
Except
For
Until
Called
29. The
writer’s
checklist
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Our integrated strategy group is
responsible for insights that are fueled
by consumer data.
Eliminate
unnecessary
words
Our
strategy
team
uses
data
to
uncover
consumer
insights.
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steps to
persuasive
writing
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1
2
3
4
Pause.
What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use
the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
5 Edit
to
simplifyand
clarify
6 Proofread!!
41. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Understanding that there are numerous goals for this
relationship, this proposal reflects our recommendation for
the first three months in an effort to address these
initial objectives within the provided timeframe. Please
note that hard costs associated with photography,
production, etc., have not been accounted for at this time.
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42. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Understanding that there are numerous goals for this
relationship, this proposal reflects our recommendation for
the first three months in an effort to address these
initial objectives within the provided timeframe. Please
note that hard costs associated with photography,
production, etc., have not been accounted for at this time.
Who’s
doing
the
understanding?
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43. Putting
all
this
into
practice
www.thesuttercompany.com
Before:
Understanding that there are numerous goals for this
relationship, this proposal reflects our recommendation for
the first three months in an effort to address these
initial objectives within the provided timeframe. Please
note that hard costs associated with photography,
production, etc., have not been accounted for at this time.
Overly
complicated
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44. Putting
all
this
into
practice
www.thesuttercompany.com
Before:
Understanding that there are numerous goals for this
relationship, this proposal reflects our recommendation for
the first three months in an effort to address these
initial objectives within the provided timeframe. Please
note that hard costs associated with photography,
production, etc., have not been accounted for at this time.
Buzz-‐kill
43
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45. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Understanding that there are numerous goals for this
relationship, this proposal reflects our recommendation for
the first three months in an effort to address these
initial objectives within the provided timeframe. Please
note that hard costs associated with photography,
production, etc. have not been accounted for at this time.
After:
There's
a
lot
to
accomplish
and
we
can't
wait
to
get
started.
Since
many
of
the
goals
have
yet
to
be
defined,
we
suggest
spending
the
next
three
months
focused
on
figuring
out
how
your
brand
looks,
feels
and
acts.
This
is
going
to
give
us
a
strong
foundation
that
will
support
-‐ and
even
inform
-‐ future
marketing
activities.
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46. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to [CLIENT] and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
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47. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to [CLIENT] and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
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Like
some
kind
of
superpower?
48. Putting
all
this
into
practice
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Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to [CLIENT] and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
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I
think I
know
what
you’re
trying
to
say,
but
it’s
awkward.
49. Putting
all
this
into
practice
www.thesuttercompany.com
Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to [CLIENT] and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
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Overly
complicated.
50. Putting
all
this
into
practice
www.thesuttercompany.com
Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to [CLIENT] and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
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Show
me,
don’t
tell
me.
51. Putting
all
this
into
practice
www.thesuttercompany.com
Before:
Focusing on the power of social media, we were able to
combine local targeting and campaign optimization to close
the loop between brand likeability and sales. The different
market insights in terms of sentiment proved to be
invaluable to CLIENT and are now being used in product
development and future worldwide marketing efforts.
After:
We
combined
local
targeting,
campaign
optimization
and
the
power
of
social
media
to
close
the
loop
between
brand
affinity
and
sales.
Through
our
research,
we
identified
four
archetypal
customers
that
[CLIENT]
continues
to
use
in
its
product
development
and
worldwide
marketing
efforts.
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52. Six
steps to
persuasive
writing
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© 2015 The Sutter Company.
1
2
3
4
5
Pause.
What
do
you
want
to
say?
Who
are
you
saying
it
to?
Word
dump
Tell
a
story.
Use the
writer’s
checklist
to
break
bad
habits.
Edit
to
simplify
and
clarify
6 Proofread!!
54. 1.Step
away
for
a
while
2.Look
for
something
different
every
time
3.Check
accuracy
of
names
4.Look
at
a
hard
copy
5.Read
the
text
out
loud
6.Use
spellcheck
(carefully!)
and
a
dictionary
7.Read
the
text
backwards
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57. What
creativity
can’t
fix:
Typos
An
unanswered
brief
Dense
copy
that’s
impossible
to
read
Obsequious
use
of
the
client’s
brand
Formats
that
are
difficult
to
distribute,
read
and
store
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58. Smart
ways
to
be
creative
Be
strategic,
not
gratuitous
Give
something
of
value
Formats
that
enhance
your
submission
Get
the
right
people
involved
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