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ASSIGNMENT 9 :
GROUP PRESENTATION
             By
    Karolina Fryckowska
      Donnielle Carino
    Michelle Asafuadjaue
    Jayde-Marie Jackson
Part B – Draft 1
                 WWW
Teacher            - Good range of images
assessment         - Good research
                   - Slides clear and easy to understand
                   - Good research

                 EBI
                       - More research on channels and Ofcom
                       - Speak louder

                 To improve
                      -   More research on target audience
Part C - Changes


Research - Statistics
Documentary Structure – more detailed
Target audience – more research
Time and TV channel – more research
Ancillaries – more examples
Part D - Documentary inspirations
The Story of film: An Odyssey




                              Try to recreate the shots in their
                              way
 - Compares with other text
 and explains with examples
 - Text to know where its
 from
Inspirational Documentaries
Large Hadron Collider – The six billion dollar experiment




            Included clips relating to the film at the
            beginning (exposition)




                                                            Jamie’s American
                                                            Food Revolution
Hunting Britain's Most Wanted




                 Exposition     Used simple
                 and props      titles
Part D - Documentary inspirations

     Film documentary - Secret Life of Chaos
        What inspired me was the use of β€œmontage” in
        the documentary.
                                                  For example – these two
Showing a quick ideational montage, whilst the    screenshots – as the narration
presenter is narrating the purpose of the         was going – there was a montage
documentary at the start. This little animation   over it – showing from the light
at the first minute of the documentary was my     changing to the sea – and it was in
favourite, as it symbolises our mind.             synched with the narration.
Part D - Documentary inspirations


         In the β€œSlanguage”
         documentary last year
         they used graphs and
         charts to show statistics
         and trends which is
         something that could be
         useful in our
         documentary.

                                 The voice of God narration in March of the
                                 Penguins was very effective and is something
                                 that might/could be used in our documentary.
Inspirational Documentaries
My Big Fat Gypsy Christmas
This is a documentary about
the Irish traveller community
and their celebrations and
traditions at Christmas. The
documentary also features
extravagant weddings and
first holy communions by the
Irish traveller community.
Montage of Christmas
    images establishes that
    this programme is set
    around the Christmas
    period.


At the beginning of the
documentary a montage of
clips are shown which shows
some of the things that will be
shown in the documentary.


 Montage also shows
 images of people in
 wedding dresses and
 holy communion
 dresses which also
 tells us what the
 documentary is going
 to be about.
The fonts and titles used
are very creative and fit
in with the topic of the
documentary.



                                The title of the
                                documentary is
                                written with
                                Christmas decorations



                            The other fonts
                            and titles within
                            the documentary
                            are also decorated
                            with Christmas
                            themed borders

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assignment 9 draft two

  • 1.
  • 2. ASSIGNMENT 9 : GROUP PRESENTATION By Karolina Fryckowska Donnielle Carino Michelle Asafuadjaue Jayde-Marie Jackson
  • 3. Part B – Draft 1 WWW Teacher - Good range of images assessment - Good research - Slides clear and easy to understand - Good research EBI - More research on channels and Ofcom - Speak louder To improve - More research on target audience
  • 4. Part C - Changes Research - Statistics Documentary Structure – more detailed Target audience – more research Time and TV channel – more research Ancillaries – more examples
  • 5. Part D - Documentary inspirations The Story of film: An Odyssey Try to recreate the shots in their way - Compares with other text and explains with examples - Text to know where its from
  • 6. Inspirational Documentaries Large Hadron Collider – The six billion dollar experiment Included clips relating to the film at the beginning (exposition) Jamie’s American Food Revolution
  • 7. Hunting Britain's Most Wanted Exposition Used simple and props titles
  • 8. Part D - Documentary inspirations Film documentary - Secret Life of Chaos What inspired me was the use of β€œmontage” in the documentary. For example – these two Showing a quick ideational montage, whilst the screenshots – as the narration presenter is narrating the purpose of the was going – there was a montage documentary at the start. This little animation over it – showing from the light at the first minute of the documentary was my changing to the sea – and it was in favourite, as it symbolises our mind. synched with the narration.
  • 9. Part D - Documentary inspirations In the β€œSlanguage” documentary last year they used graphs and charts to show statistics and trends which is something that could be useful in our documentary. The voice of God narration in March of the Penguins was very effective and is something that might/could be used in our documentary.
  • 10. Inspirational Documentaries My Big Fat Gypsy Christmas This is a documentary about the Irish traveller community and their celebrations and traditions at Christmas. The documentary also features extravagant weddings and first holy communions by the Irish traveller community.
  • 11. Montage of Christmas images establishes that this programme is set around the Christmas period. At the beginning of the documentary a montage of clips are shown which shows some of the things that will be shown in the documentary. Montage also shows images of people in wedding dresses and holy communion dresses which also tells us what the documentary is going to be about.
  • 12. The fonts and titles used are very creative and fit in with the topic of the documentary. The title of the documentary is written with Christmas decorations The other fonts and titles within the documentary are also decorated with Christmas themed borders