2. Introduction
In academic writing many different genres exist. Depending on
the subject you are studying you could be asked to write:
•an essay
•a lab report
•a case study
•a book review
•a research proposal
•etc.
3. Introduction
All genres can be constructed from these text types.
•Descriptions
•Reports
•Explanations
•Arguments
4. Introduction
Descriptions - this can include defining a topic, describing an
object, system, or a process. It also includes categorizing and
classifying.
Reports - this is a description of a past activity, something you did
or something that happened.
Explanations - this is why or how something happens or
happened. It includes giving reasons and explanations and
writing about cause and effect.
5. Introduction
Arguments - this includes giving opinions or holding positions for
or against an issue or advantages and disadvantages. It involves
evidence to support an argument as well as making decisions or
recommendations and justifying the action.
6. Introduction
Evaluate possible solutions to the problem of
international brand management.
If you were asked to write an essay to answer the above-
mentioned question you could answer it in the following way:
•You could start by defining brand management,saying what it is
and giving an example.
•You might then explain why international brand management is
a problem in business today, and support your explanation by
evidence from your reading.
7. Introduction• After that you would describe some possible solutions to the
problem of brand management, again supporting your
suggestions with evidence from your reading.
• Next you would evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of
each of the possible solutions.
• Finally, you would decide which solution you would prefer
and give reasons.
8. Introduction
So in order to answer the essay question you need to be able to
write texts that do the following:
9. Introduction• define
• give an example
• explain why
• support your explanation with evidence
• describe a solution
• describe advantages and disadvantages
• evaluate
• choose
10. Introduction
Again, for everything you needed to do to be able to answer the
before-mentioned essay question, you used one of these text
types.
•Descriptions
•Reports
•Explanations
•Arguments
11. Defining
In academic writing it is usually necessary to define your terms.
Many words have several different meanings and in your subject
they may be used in very specific ways. It is important to show
that you understand the terms that you are using and exactly the
sense in which you are using them.
12. Defining
In the following text ‘advertising’ is being defined. Notice how the
definition is organized and what language is used.
Advertising is defined as any paid form of non-
personal presentation and promotion of ideas,
goods or services through mass media such as
newspapers, magazines, television or radio by an
identified sponsor.
13. Defining
Here ‘mortgage’ is defined.
A mortgage is a form of loan that is secured on an
asset, typically land. Financial institutions such as
banks, insurance businesses and pension funds are
often prepared to lend to businesses on this basis.
The mortgage may be over a long period.
14. DefiningTwo typical ways of writing definitions that you might like to uses
are:
A mortgage is a form of loan that is secured on an asset.
or
A form of loan that is secured on an asset is called a mortgage.
15. Defining
You will notice that these sentences were written in the form:
X is a Y that ...
AY that ... X.
16. DefiningOther language that you’ll find useful in writing definitions is:
X is ...
X is called ...
X is known as ...
X may be defined as ...
X is a type of Y that/which ...
A type of Y is ... X.
17. DefiningNote:
Make sure that you define rather than just describe or give
examples. For example, in the following text, the writer has failed
to define and is simply giving an example of what a mentor does.
The mentor supports and helps you with any school based
problems.
18. Defining
Sometimes definition sentences are followed by more detail. In
these cases. the short definitions often form topic sentences and
are often followed by more descriptive detail, as in the following
example:
Hire purchase is a form of credit that is used to acquire an asset. Under the
terms of a hire purchase agreement a customer pays for an asset in
installments over an agreed period. Normally, the customer will pay an
initial deposit (downpayment) and then make installment payments at
regular intervals (perhaps monthly) until the balance outstanding has been
paid. The customer will usually take possession of the asset after payment of
the initial deposit, although legal ownership of the asset will not be
transferred until the final installment has been paid.
19. Describing thingsIn your writing , you will often have to describe something: an
object, a system, an organization or a process.
Read a description of the brain from a psychology textbook.
Notice the way the description is organized and the language that
is used. You will see that if you were writing about the brain, you
could describe:
•what a brain looks like
•how much it weighs
•how important it is
•what it consists of
20. Describing things
The brain looks like a lump of porridge and has the
consistency of blancmange. This organ, weighing an
average 1400g in an adult human, is the most
important part of the body. It contains an estimated 10
to 100 billion nerve cells and about as many supporting
cells, which take care of important support and
‘housekeeping functions. The brain contains many
different types of nerve cell which differ in shape, size
and the kind of chemicals they produce.
21. Describing things
The following text continues describing the brain by describing its
function, what it does. You would start by describing the number
of functions it has and then give some detail about each function.
The brain has two roles: controlling the movements of the muscles and
regulating the physiological functions of the body. The first role looks
outwards towards the environments and the second looks inwards. The
outward-looking role includes several functions: perceiving events in the
environment, learning about them, making plans, and acting. The
inward-looking role requires the brain to measure and regulate internal
characteristics such as body temperature, blood pressure and nutrient
levels.
22. Describing things
If you are writing a description of an object, you might include for
example:
•physical description
•weight
•size
•color
•structure
•material
•shape
•properties
•functions
23. Describing things
As well as describing simple objects, you may need to describe an
organization or a system. The following description of the
European commission, from a law textbook, gives you an example
of how you could do this. Notice that the paragraph describes:
•how the commission is made up
•what its function is
24. Describing things
The commission is composed of 27 members, called commissioners, who are each
appointed by the member states for five years. The must be nationals of a member
state, and in practice there tend to be two each from the largest states- France,
Germany, Italy, Spain, and the UK - and one each from the rest. However the
commissioners do not represent their own countries: they are independent, and their
role is to represent the interests of the EU overall. The idea is that the commissioner’s
commitment to furthering the EU interests balances the role of the counsel, whose
members represents national interests.
In addition to its part in making EU legislation, the commission is responsible for
ensuring that the member states uphold EU law, and has powers to investigate
breachers by member states and, where necessary, bring them before the Court of
Justice. It also plays an important role in the relationship of the EU with the rest of
the world, negotiating trade agreements and the accession of new members, and
draws up the annual draft budget for the EU. It is assisted in all these functions by an
administrative staff, which has a similar role to that of the civil service in the UK.
25. Describing things
So when you are describing objects, systems or organizations, you
might want to describe physical characteristics, such as:
•position
•structure
•size and weight
•shape
•function
28. Describing things
Size and weight
X
weighs
has a weight of
6 cm long.
high.
wide.
in length.
in height.
X is 6 cm
long.
high.
wide.
in length.
in height.
The voltmeter is 4 cm wide
and 12 cm long.
The adult brain weighs
approximately 1400 grams.
31. Describing processes
It’s often necessary to describe processes: how things are done or
made. These could be products or laws, for example. On the
following slides is a description of the PDCA (Plan Do Check Act)
problem-solving cycle. The PDCA cycle is a problem-solving
technique often used in quality control. Notice that as the text is
about the cycle and how it works, when you write about processes
in this way the passive form of the verb (are solved, is
consolidated) is used. This is because in this type of writing, the
focus is usually on the process rather than on the people doing the
work. In this case, the present tense is used as the procedure is
still commonly made use of.
33. Describing processes
The PDCA cycle model is shown in figure [7.3]. It starts with the P (for plan)
stage, which involves an examination of the current method or the problem
area being studied. This involves collecting and analyzing data so as to
formulate a plan or action which is intended to improve performance. Once
the plan for improvement had been agreed, the next step is the D (for do)
stage. This is the implementation stage during which the plan is tried out in
the operation. This stage may involve a mini-PDCA cycle as the problems of
implementation are resolved. Next comes the C (for check) stage, where the
new implemented solution is evaluated to see whether it has resulted in the
expected performance improvement. Finally, at least for this cycle, comes the
A (for act) stage. During this stage the change is consolidated or standardized
if it has been successful. Alternatively, if the change has not been successful,
the lessons learned from the ‘trial’ are formalized before the trial starts again.
34. Describing processes
The cycle consists of four clear stages, which are explicitly referred to with the
following phrases:
It starts with ...
The next step ...
Next ...
Finally...
35. Describing processes
The stages are also connected with linking words or phrases, which you can
make use of, such as:
Once a plan for improvement has been agreed, ...
This is the implementation stage during which ...
During this stage, ... .
Also, make sure that you make the time sequence clear with words such as:
firstly
next
subsequently
36. Describing processes
Instructions
Make sure you describe how the process works rather than just give
instructions. As a student, you will often need to read and understand
instructions - for example in a laboratory manual or an assignment briefing
sheet - but you will probably not need to write them very often. So make sure
you distinguish between them in your writing. Instructions are telling someone
how to do something and descriptions are describing how something happens
or happened.
Instructions can be given in many ways. A numbered list with the imperative
form of the verb is one common way. Continuous text using the passive form of
the verb with should is also common. Look at the following example of one
method of giving instructions. Notice the highlighted language items:
37. Describing processesCleaning
The following steps should be followed when cleaning objects in a hospital.
1. Rinse the article with cold water to remove organic material. Hot water coagulates the
protein of organic material and tends to make it adhere. Examples of organic material are
blood and pus.
2. Wash the article in hot water and soap. The emulsifying action of soap reduces surface
tension and facilitates the removal of substances. Washing dislodges the emulsified
substances.
3. Use an abrasive, such as a stiff-bristled brush, to clean equipment with grooves and
corners. Friction helps dislodge foreign material.
4. Rinse the article well with warm or hot water.
5. Dry the article; it is now considered clean.
6. Clean the brush and sink. These are considered soiled until they are cleaned appropriately,
usually with a disinfectant.
39. Describing processes
Sequence
Sequence, or order, is important in describing processes. The following table
shows some common expressions that you can use to indicate sequences.
40. Describing processes
First, The first step is ...
To begin with, .. begins with ...
Initially, ... commences with ...
Beforehand, Before this,
At the same time, During...
Secondly, Thirdly, etc. After this,
Next, The next step is to ...
Subsequently, In the following stage,
Later, Following this,
Lastly, ... finishes with ...
Finally, ... concludes with ...
In the last stage The last step is to ...
41. Describing processes
For example:
The company first gains a full understanding of the marketplace. It
subsequently designs a customer-driven marketing strategy.
42. Describing processes
You may also want to explain how something is done:
... slowly/carefully
... with care/precision
... in a careful way/manner
... by researching ...
For example:
The company first gains full understanding of the marketplace by
researching customer needs and managing marketing information.
44. Including charts and diagrams
It is often useful when you are describing objects, systems or processes to
include reference to tables and charts.
Look at the following text. Notice how Figure 7.5 is explicitly referred to in the
written text and also notice the language that is used there. For example,
Figure 7.5 shows ...
46. Including charts and diagrams
Fig 7.5 shows sales of notebook computers per month. As can be seen, it
covers the years between 1998 and 2008 and shows that the sales of notebook
computers increased steadily in the first two years, then remained steady
from 2000 until 2004. The sales then rose steeply, throughout 2005 and
2006, with a rapid increase at the end of 2007, and reached a peak of 8000 in
January 2007. A Sharp fall followed in the first half of 2007 but sales leveled
off at about 7000 per month in the middle of the year. Sales fluctuated slightly
through the second half of 2007 and are now increasing again. The figures
strongly indicate that we have recovered from the problems in early 2007
and are on target to improve on our 2007 peak by the end 0f 2008.
47. Including charts and diagrams
In such cases, you do not simply add the visual to the text: you usually include
some kind of comment or analyses as shown in the text.
Typically, when you are referring to charts and diagrams, you will:
•make an explicit reference to the diagram or chart
•draw the readers attention to important features and describe them
•add some kind of comment which will depend on your purpose in including
the diagram in your writing.
48. Including charts and diagrams
Here is some language that you might find useful when you are referring to
charts and diagrams.
As can be seen from figure 7.5, the sales of notebook computers increased
steadily in the first two years.
As can be seen
from
in
table 1,
Figure 2,
Graph 3,
...It can be seen
We can see
49. Including charts and diagrams
From Figure 7.5, it can be seen that the sales of notebook computers increased
steadily in the first two years.
From
Table 1
Figure 2
it
can
may
be
seen
concluded
shown
estimated
calculated
inferred
...
the
figures
chart
diagram
50. Including charts and diagrams
Figure 7.5 shows sales of notebook computers per month.
The graph
Figure 1
shows ...
51. Including charts and diagrams
If you want to comment on trends and developments shown in graphs, the
following phrases may also be of use
There was a (very)
slight
steady
dramatic
steep
rise.
increase.
fluctuation.
decline.
reduction.
drop.
52. Including charts and diagrams
Sales
Price
Exports
etc.
increased
grew
rose slightly.
gradually.
steadily.
markedly.
dramatically.
sharply.
suddenly.
declined
dropped
fell
54. Classifying/categorizing
When you classify, you arrange things into groups according to certain criteria.
For example, if you take the following list:
Physics Chemistry Biology English History Art
It is quite clear that all the words are school subjects but some are science
subjects and some are arts subjects. As there are only arts subjects and science
subjects it is simple to divide the list into two:
When you are classifying, you need to explain what you are classifying and on
what basis you are making your classification - your criterion or criteria. In this
case the school subjects according to whether or not they are science subjects
or arts subjects.
Physics, Chemistry, Biology AND English, History, Art
55. Classifying/categorizing
The following text is classifying the different powers in governments. Notice
how the powers are classified into three types, depending on who holds the
power. The different powers are then described.
The separation of powers
One of the fundamental principles underlying our constitution is that of the
separation of powers. According to this principle, developed by the
eighteenth-century French philosopher Montesquieu, all state power can be
divided into three types: executive, legislative and judicial. The executive
represents what we would call the Government and its servants, such as the
police and civil servants; legislative power is Parliament; and judicial
authority is exercised by the judges.
56. Classifying/categorizing
In the next example, financial assets are divided into two groups, depending on
whether they are short term or long term.
The classification of assets
Assets may be categorized as being either current or non-current.
...
Current assets are basically assets that are held for the short term.
...
Non-current assets (also called fixed assets) are simply assets that do not
meet the definition of current assets. Generally speaking, they are held for
long term operations.
58. Classifying/categorizing
The table below show some of the most common language that you can use in
text which have classification as their purpose.
You can then follow this sentence with a description of the different groups.
There are
two
types
kinds
classes
categories
sorts
varieties
of assets
:current and non-current.
. These are current and non-current.
The are current and non-current.
59. Reporting
In any writing you do, you might also have to report on how something came
into being or how something was done. Read the following text, from a law
textbook, and notice how the text is organized and the language that is used.
You will notice that the text starts with a one-sentence introduction to put the
narrative in context. It then provides a chronological (time-order) history of the
formation of the European Union. It finishes with a prediction about the future.
Before discussing the role of the EU in European law, the text provides a short
history of the EU.
60. Reporting
The European Union (EU) currently comprises 27 western European
countries. The original members - France, Germany, Belgium, Luxembourg,
Italy and the Netherlands - laid the foundations in 1951, when they created the
European Coal and Steel Community (ECSC). Six years later, they signed the
treaty of Rome, creating the European Economic Community (EEC) and the
European Atomic Energy Community (Euratom). The original six were joined
by the UK, Ireland and Denmark in 1973, Greece in 1981 and Spain and
Portugal in 1986 and, in the same year, the member countries signed the
Single European Act, which developed the free movement of goods and people
within the community (the single market), and greater political unity.
Finland, Austria and Sweden joined in 1995. Following the Nice summit in
2004, the EU increased its membership from 15 to 27 in 3004 with most of the
new members coming from eastern Europe.
61. Reporting
In 1993 the Maastricht Treaty renamed the European Economic Community
the European community and the European Economic Treaty was renamed
the European Treaty. It also created the European Union (EU), which is likely
to become the most important body in Europe and so will be the label that we
will refer to in this book.
When you write such a report you will normally organize your text
chronologically and use the past tense (laid, created, signed, ...). When you are
writing about past events in this way, it is necessary the be explicit about the
order in which things happened. To make the order clear, you should mention
dates and times, and also use various links and connections.
62. Reporting
Here are some phrases you can use to refer to time:
In 1981, ...
During the 20th century, ...
Yesterday, ...
Twenty five years ago, ...
63. Reporting
Here are some phrases you can use to make your sequence clear:
As with describing processes, make sure you distinguish between giving
instructions - that is, telling someone how to do something - and reporting -
that is describing what you did or how something happened.
Before this, ...
For the previous X years, ...
Prior to this, ...
Previously, ...
X years previously, ...
When ..., ...
As soon as ..., ...
For the following X years, ...
While ..., ...
During this period, ...
Throughout this period ...
X years later, ...
After ...
Following this , ...
Subsequently, ...
Soon/shortly/immediately
afterwards, ...
64. Reporting
The methods section of an experimental report typically uses the passive voice
(were taught, were selected, were excluded) as in the example below.
Method
Two groups of students in Higher Education on a one-year Pre-Masters
English for Academic Purposes course, each comprising 50 students, were
taught academic writing by different methods and compared. In each group
there were 50 students from 5 different academic departments - computer
science, business, engineering, life science and law - and four different
countries - China, Japan, Korea and Thailand. The subjects were selected from
the second semester of the University of Herfordshire Pre-Masters Program in
the 2007-2008 academic year.
65. Reporting
The subjects were selected from the 250 students on the Pre-Masters Program
on the basis of performance at a satisfactory level in the Semester A
examination. Students who had performed below the minimum level on the
Semester A examination were excluded. This criterion was employed to ensure
competent understanding of the tasks and adequate motivation.
One group - Group A - studied English writing in the traditional way in class
with a teacher. This class met 2 hours each week in a classroom for 12 weeks
and was supplemented with written homework assignments given by the
teacher each week. The second group - Group B - met together in a class with a
teacher for one hour per week for 12 weeks and were assigned a homework
task of spending one hour per week doing exercises from a website.
66. ReportingBoth groups A and B were given the same written examination at the end of
the semester. The students took the examination under standard university
examination conditions as part of their end of semester examination. The tests
were marked using the following categories: task achievement,
communicative quality, organization, ideas, content and relevance and
grammar and vocabulary, by two experienced writing examiners and
moderated in the standard way to ensure reliability. In this way it was
possible to see the relationship between students’ main academic subjects, and
the improvement in their writing ability depending on the teaching method.