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Peer Reviewing Helps Us All!
Peer Review is Fun!
• Working with your classmates to help
  improve their writing can be lots of fun.
• What does it means to “peer review?”
• How do you do it?
What is Peer
                      Reviewing?
What is a peer?
•A peer is someone your own age.

What is Reviewing?
•Reviewing means making suggestions, comments, compliments,
and changes to writing.

Peer Reviewing
•Working with someone your own age – usually someone in your
class
•Help improve, revise, and edit his or her writing.
3 Steps to Peer
                 Reviewing
 There are three important steps to remember
 when you are peer reviewing another student’s
 writing.
• Step 1 – Compliments

• Step 2 – Suggestions

• Step 3 - Corrections
STEP 1

                Compliments
The first rule of peer reviewing is to STAY
POSITIVE!



•Remember, you’re helping to change
someone else’s work.
•Think how you would feel if someone were
telling you what needed to be improved in
your own writing…
STEP 1

                  Compliments
• Always start your peer reviewing with
  compliments!

• Tell what you think was done well:
  –   I really loved your topic
  –   I think you used a lot of good details
  –   I liked when you used the word ______
  –   My favorite part was ________ because…
  –   This was really fun to read because…
  –   I liked the way you_________…
STEP 1

             Compliments
• Read the paragraph on the next
  slide.
• Record three compliments about the
  paragraph that you would tell the
  author if you were peer reviewing
  this paper.
STEP 1

               Compliments
    We where all over my aunts house
when my dog Riley was running around like
crazy. He was chasing me around in circles.
all of a suden I look and riley he was in the
pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t
believe my eyes that the dog was in the
pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in
and swan over to Riley and pulled him to
the steps. He got out and shook all over us
like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad
riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
STEP 2

                Suggestions
• Making suggestions means giving the
  author some specific ideas about how to
  make his or her writing better.
• Remember – stay positive and be specific!
  – Instead of, “It didn’t make sense,”
  – Say, “If you add more details after this
    sentence, it would be more clear.”
  – Instead of, “Your word choice was boring,”
  – Say, “Instead of using the word good, maybe
    you can use the word exceptional.”
STEP 2

                    Suggestions
• Here are some areas that you
  may want to make suggestions
  about:
  – Word choice – Did the author choose interesting
    words?
  – Using details (for example, seeing, hearing, touching,
    tasting, and smelling)
  – Organization – Can you understand what the author is
    trying to say? Is it in the correct sequence?
  – Sentences – Are the sentences too long or too
    short?
  – Topic – Does the author stick to the
    topic or talk about other things
    that don’t really fit?
STEP 2

              Suggestions
• Read the paragraph on the next slide
  again.
• Record three suggestions about the
  paragraph that you would tell the
  author if you were peer reviewing
  this paper.
STEP 2

                Suggestions
    We where all over my aunts house
when my dog Riley was running around like
crazy. He was chasing me around in circles.
all of a suden I look and riley he was in the
pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t
believe my eyes that the dog was in the
pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in
and swan over to Riley and pulled him to
the steps. He got out and shook all over us
like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad
riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
STEP 3

                        Corrections
• The third step in the peer reviewing process is
  making corrections.
• Corrections means checking your peer’s paper
  for:
   –   Spelling mistakes
   –   Grammar mistakes
   –   Missing punctuation
   –   Incomplete or run-on sentences
STEP 3

             Corrections
Read through the paragraph again on
your worksheet. Circle, underline, or
use editing marks to correct errors
in spelling, punctuation, or grammar.
Things to Remember…
• Stay positive – Try to make
  suggestions and corrections in a
  positive way.
• Be specific – Give the author
  specific ideas on how to improve his
  or her writing.
• Complete all 3 steps – compliments,
  suggestions, and corrections.

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Peer Review

  • 2. Peer Review is Fun! • Working with your classmates to help improve their writing can be lots of fun. • What does it means to “peer review?” • How do you do it?
  • 3. What is Peer Reviewing? What is a peer? •A peer is someone your own age. What is Reviewing? •Reviewing means making suggestions, comments, compliments, and changes to writing. Peer Reviewing •Working with someone your own age – usually someone in your class •Help improve, revise, and edit his or her writing.
  • 4. 3 Steps to Peer Reviewing There are three important steps to remember when you are peer reviewing another student’s writing. • Step 1 – Compliments • Step 2 – Suggestions • Step 3 - Corrections
  • 5. STEP 1 Compliments The first rule of peer reviewing is to STAY POSITIVE! •Remember, you’re helping to change someone else’s work. •Think how you would feel if someone were telling you what needed to be improved in your own writing…
  • 6. STEP 1 Compliments • Always start your peer reviewing with compliments! • Tell what you think was done well: – I really loved your topic – I think you used a lot of good details – I liked when you used the word ______ – My favorite part was ________ because… – This was really fun to read because… – I liked the way you_________…
  • 7. STEP 1 Compliments • Read the paragraph on the next slide. • Record three compliments about the paragraph that you would tell the author if you were peer reviewing this paper.
  • 8. STEP 1 Compliments We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
  • 9. STEP 2 Suggestions • Making suggestions means giving the author some specific ideas about how to make his or her writing better. • Remember – stay positive and be specific! – Instead of, “It didn’t make sense,” – Say, “If you add more details after this sentence, it would be more clear.” – Instead of, “Your word choice was boring,” – Say, “Instead of using the word good, maybe you can use the word exceptional.”
  • 10. STEP 2 Suggestions • Here are some areas that you may want to make suggestions about: – Word choice – Did the author choose interesting words? – Using details (for example, seeing, hearing, touching, tasting, and smelling) – Organization – Can you understand what the author is trying to say? Is it in the correct sequence? – Sentences – Are the sentences too long or too short? – Topic – Does the author stick to the topic or talk about other things that don’t really fit?
  • 11. STEP 2 Suggestions • Read the paragraph on the next slide again. • Record three suggestions about the paragraph that you would tell the author if you were peer reviewing this paper.
  • 12. STEP 2 Suggestions We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
  • 13. STEP 3 Corrections • The third step in the peer reviewing process is making corrections. • Corrections means checking your peer’s paper for: – Spelling mistakes – Grammar mistakes – Missing punctuation – Incomplete or run-on sentences
  • 14. STEP 3 Corrections Read through the paragraph again on your worksheet. Circle, underline, or use editing marks to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, or grammar.
  • 15. Things to Remember… • Stay positive – Try to make suggestions and corrections in a positive way. • Be specific – Give the author specific ideas on how to improve his or her writing. • Complete all 3 steps – compliments, suggestions, and corrections. Copyright 2004 IRA/NCTE. All rights reserved. ReadWriteThink materials may be reproduced for educational purposes. Images copyright Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.