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Note: I apologize for my awkward English here, but these notes were more personal; so, I did not edit carefully my ideas here.

        Questions/criteria                                                          Answers                                                          Comments/gloss
Size                                  A letter page
Texture                               It seems to be old, and probably it is a stored document
Color                                 The paper is white, most of the font is black and the two first lines were written in blue
Relationships among elements          There is a central sentence in the top of the document
                                      The second sentence is written within quotation marks
                                      After lines of white spaces, some information (student and instructor name, student ID, and
                                      date) is presented aligned on the right and left extremes.
                                      After, a box includes information that is a reference and is written in bold and kept the formal
                                      style for citations



                                                                                                                                          This box could indicate that for this
                                                                                                                                          writer starts with the reference is
                                                                                                                                          important. Additionally, I realized in
                                                                                                                                          this moment of the analysis that the
                                                                                                                                          author used the original title of the
                                                                                                                                          text she read as part of the headline of
                                                                                                                                          this assignment. It seems that using
                                                                                                                                          quotations marks is a strategy to
                                                                                                                                          highlight that the author is taking
                                                                                                                                          words from others.
                                      The rest of the text is comprised by 5 blocks of information and with the same size of margins in   In this point of the analysis I decided
                                      both extremes. The 5 blocks are comprised by the following amount of lines, respectively : 4, 12,   to start reading the content within the
                                      9, 7, and 2. The latter seems to contain just 2 lines because there was not more space to write     paragraphs in order to explore the
                                                                                                                                          differences in the amount of lines that
                                                                                                                                          every block of information comprised.
                                                                                                                                          At this point of the analysis, I would
                                                                                                                                          like to called “paragraphs” every block
                                                                                                                                          of information I saw. Therefore, I
                                                                                                                                          guess I should be explicit upon what
                                                                                                                                          counts as paragraph to me:
                                                                                                                                          It is a block of content organized in
                                                                                                                                          order to make sense as part of the
                                                                                                                                          communicative intent pursued by
                                                                                                                                          someone while writing.
However, I am unsure if it is possible
                                                                                                                                     that there are “paragraphs” that do
                                                                                                                                     not make any sense???
Contextualizing the elements                                                                                                         According to the description made so
                                                                                                                                     far, and the context (?) I knew about
                                                                                                                                     the text, this document addresses a
                                                                                                                                     teacher as a first audience…however,
                                                                                                                                     after analyzing the content from a
                                                                                                                                     rhetoric point of view could show
                                                                                                                                     other audiences build by the author
                                                                                                                                     efforts.
                               First paragraph: A sentence is written within quotation marks. The same sentence written in the       It seems that the writer used the
                               second line of the headline of the text, which is the title of the chapter read by the student.       quotation marks and the ellipsis to
                               After the sentence, there is an ellipsis (…). At the end of the utterance in the second line of the   start her dialogue with the chapter
                               first block of information there is another punctuation mark (:), a colon.                            read. In doing so, the writer stated her
                                                                                                                                     stance, since in this first paragraph she
                                                                                                                                     introduced a critical point from which,
                                                                                                                                     probably, she will develop her
                                                                                                                                     argumentative perspective in the rest
                                                                                                                                     of the text.

                                                                                                                                     Since I knew the context of this writing
                                                                                                                                     sample, I think that I was able to make
                                                                                                                                     the prior inferences.

                                                                                                                                     I think that at this point of the analysis
                                                                                                                                     I started doing a content analysis
                                                                                                                                     rather than a visual one? So, I decided
                                                                                                                                     to stop at this point.
Personal notes analysis

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Personal notes analysis

  • 1. Note: I apologize for my awkward English here, but these notes were more personal; so, I did not edit carefully my ideas here. Questions/criteria Answers Comments/gloss Size A letter page Texture It seems to be old, and probably it is a stored document Color The paper is white, most of the font is black and the two first lines were written in blue Relationships among elements There is a central sentence in the top of the document The second sentence is written within quotation marks After lines of white spaces, some information (student and instructor name, student ID, and date) is presented aligned on the right and left extremes. After, a box includes information that is a reference and is written in bold and kept the formal style for citations This box could indicate that for this writer starts with the reference is important. Additionally, I realized in this moment of the analysis that the author used the original title of the text she read as part of the headline of this assignment. It seems that using quotations marks is a strategy to highlight that the author is taking words from others. The rest of the text is comprised by 5 blocks of information and with the same size of margins in In this point of the analysis I decided both extremes. The 5 blocks are comprised by the following amount of lines, respectively : 4, 12, to start reading the content within the 9, 7, and 2. The latter seems to contain just 2 lines because there was not more space to write paragraphs in order to explore the differences in the amount of lines that every block of information comprised. At this point of the analysis, I would like to called “paragraphs” every block of information I saw. Therefore, I guess I should be explicit upon what counts as paragraph to me: It is a block of content organized in order to make sense as part of the communicative intent pursued by someone while writing.
  • 2. However, I am unsure if it is possible that there are “paragraphs” that do not make any sense??? Contextualizing the elements According to the description made so far, and the context (?) I knew about the text, this document addresses a teacher as a first audience…however, after analyzing the content from a rhetoric point of view could show other audiences build by the author efforts. First paragraph: A sentence is written within quotation marks. The same sentence written in the It seems that the writer used the second line of the headline of the text, which is the title of the chapter read by the student. quotation marks and the ellipsis to After the sentence, there is an ellipsis (…). At the end of the utterance in the second line of the start her dialogue with the chapter first block of information there is another punctuation mark (:), a colon. read. In doing so, the writer stated her stance, since in this first paragraph she introduced a critical point from which, probably, she will develop her argumentative perspective in the rest of the text. Since I knew the context of this writing sample, I think that I was able to make the prior inferences. I think that at this point of the analysis I started doing a content analysis rather than a visual one? So, I decided to stop at this point.