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I corrected the  spelling of actors name I reduced the size of this text as it attracted too much unnecessary attention I changed the original picture and instead of having a plain and simple white background I decided to keep the mise en scene. This I was told by some feedback looked better than my original choice.
I decided to move the social buttons from the top left hand corner to the bottom right hand corner as I think it looks better and fits in more with the typical conventions  I also changed the style of the social buttons  This is because I think that the style will be more appealing to my target audience of teenage girls, as it is more like a drawing style  Again I decreased the size of the text and moved it further down the page, which fits in with the conventions of a website.
I decided to keep this page the same, plain and simple as I believe it is effective the way it is, I didn’t want to add too much onto the page. From given feedback I believe that this needed no change. However I decided to move “Coming Soon” further down on the page.

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  • 1. I corrected the spelling of actors name I reduced the size of this text as it attracted too much unnecessary attention I changed the original picture and instead of having a plain and simple white background I decided to keep the mise en scene. This I was told by some feedback looked better than my original choice.
  • 2. I decided to move the social buttons from the top left hand corner to the bottom right hand corner as I think it looks better and fits in more with the typical conventions I also changed the style of the social buttons This is because I think that the style will be more appealing to my target audience of teenage girls, as it is more like a drawing style Again I decreased the size of the text and moved it further down the page, which fits in with the conventions of a website.
  • 3. I decided to keep this page the same, plain and simple as I believe it is effective the way it is, I didn’t want to add too much onto the page. From given feedback I believe that this needed no change. However I decided to move “Coming Soon” further down on the page.