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Introverts Extroverts Definition It ´s a shy person . A person mainly concerned with their
own
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( ___ ) thoughts and feelings rather than with external things .
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It ´s an outgoing ,
socially confident person . A person mainly concerned with external things or objective
considerations .
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Important facts A third to a half of the population are introverts .
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Some
transformative leaders in history have been introverts like Elenor Roosevel
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( Roosevelt ) , Rosa
Parks ,
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( Parks ) Ghandi, mother Teresa, Bill Gates, Hillary Clinton. People could feel these
leaders were at the helm . They were lookin
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( looking, looked, lookin', look, Lookin ) for common
good .
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( good. ) 50-74 percent of the population are extroverts . Extroverts leaders in history are
Bill Clinton ,
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( Clinton ) Margaret Thatcher, Steve Jobs, Muhammad Ali. People could feel that
leaders like Hugo Chavez, Bin Laden, Kim Jong-un and others enjoyed directing others and
not out of the pleasure of being looked at
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.
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Susan Cain´s definition Introversion is more
about how do you respond to stimulation ,
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( stimulation ) including social stimulation.
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Introverts feel at their most alive and their most
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switched on and their most capable when
they are in a quieter environment . To maximizing their talent is to put themselves in the zone of
stimulation that is right for
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them. Teachers think that a
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( an ) introvert student is a problem
case . Introvert students get better grades and more knowledgeable. They like t(...) They tend to
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very careful leaders
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( ) and they are better leaders than extroverts . Extroverts really
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( ___ )
crave large amounts of stimulation including social stimulation .
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( stimulation. ) Extrovers
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( Extroverts, Extrovert, Extroversion, Extraverts, Extravert ) feel at their most alive and their most
switched on and their most capable when they are in a social environment . To maximizing their
talent is to put themselves in the zone of stimulation that is right for
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them. Teachers think an
ideal student is an extrovert . Extrovert students get good grades and some of them not. They like
to work in groups . They are good leaders but not as good as introverts . Special skills When it
comes to creativity and to leadership , we need introverts doing what they do best .
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They
have unique talents . When they are in their own
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( ___ ) world ,
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( world ) it means they will
innovate something for our world . Encourage teachers to help them to develop the faculties so
they can maximize their talents . Encourage teachers to help them to develop the faculties so they
can maximize their talents . General Suggestions Parents and teachers need to better understand
how to love and cultivate the introverted kids . They need to do general teacher training to just
make
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( just to make ) them aware of what makes a student an introvert ,
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Teachers need
to cultivate the talent of those students . teachers should avoid setting social standards for
what is normal .
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It ´s a problematic and should let know to parents if a student have
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( has )
none friends . If a student has one or two or three friends ,
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( ___ ) and prefers to go deep
with their friendships instead of being one of a big gang , there ’s nothing wrong with that
at all .
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Build quiet time into the school day ,
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( day ) where the students just read alone ,
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( alone ) play board games in smalls groups or do other activities thaty
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( that, they, thirty,
throaty, thy ) they like . Teacher should mix it up between individual work ,
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( work ) group work
and pair work . Teacher should rethink what they mean about class participation and think about
classroom statement instead . Teachers should have a reading assignment about the book Quiet
and work on the teacher ´s guide http://www.thepowerofintroverts.com/about-the-book/teachers-
guide/ (...) Teach them how to handle introvert people . Susan Cain´s suggestions 1-We need
to be teaching kids to work together but we also need to be teaching them how to work on
their own . This
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is especially important for extroverted children too . They need to work
on their own because that is where deep thought comes from in part .
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2- We could all
stand to unplug and get inside our own
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( ___ ) heads a little more often .
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3- introverts ,
you being you , you probably have the impulse to guard very carefully what 's inside
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of
you but occasionally , just occasionally , I hope you will open up your suitcases for other
people to see , because the world needs you and it needs the things you carry .
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How
will the curriculum in schools of the future vary from what we see
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now
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?
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( now? ) . The
deliberate practice should be working alone if students really
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( ___ ) want to learn something
What kinds of differences would you imagine in how teachers are trained and evaluated
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Teacher should have freedom to design curricula that they think it would work for their students . .
What kind of social activities are not part of the school day now that could be in the future
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? We should have small tables not just not just giant tables . Introvert people needs to socialize with
1 or 3 people ( restaurants , playgrounds ,
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( playgrounds ) etc. ) Let ’s talk about technology.
How could technology be integrated into the classroom of the future to give more options ,
and be there in positive ways for students who are introverts
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? Teachers will move toward
anything that encourages student participation through an online medium .
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