This is the script that I have written up for my media studies. This is the new version and new idea I decided to use. After having looked back at my old idea and received some constructive criticism, I have decided to go with this idea.

1. AFTER YOU
Thomas Hunt
After You - Adam Linzey
Finearts College
02075860312

2. EXT. STREET.DAY
A pair of legs in trousers with skinny shoes strides down the
street.
EXT. ROAD.DAY
A pair of legs in track suite bottoms and a pair of legs in
suits.
EXT. CONFERENCE BLOCK. DAY.
Both of them standing outside the conference block, offering
each other to enter in the conference block. Both of them
just standing there, not wanting to go in till the other
person goes in.
PERSON 1
Oh, I’m sorry.
PERSON 2
No please, please After You.
PERSON 1
Really it’s my absolute pleasure,
After You.
PERSON 2 shaking his head, as he doesn’t have the patients
and just wants to enter the conference on time
PERSON 2
After You
PERSON 1
(Comically)
Really, I absolutely insist sir
PERSON 2
(Serious)
I’ve got all the time in the world
mate so please After You.
PERSON 1
(Comically/Chuckling)
I’m very, very, very happy for you
to go in first so After You sir.
PERSON 2
Okay, okay, cool, cool, yea you’re
really happy. Well, it seems it’s
sow important to you, why don’t you
go first?

3. PERSON 1
You were clearly, you were clearly
in a rush when you came pounding up
behind me.
PERSON 2
I Was in a rush?!
PERSON1
Yea, you were in a rush.
PERSON 2
I got here the same time as you.
PERSON 1
Only because...
PERSON 2
But I got to the door first.
PERSON 1
You were chasing passed me, you’re
clearly in a rush.
PERSON 2
Chasing.
PERSON 1
Chasing.
PERSON 2
I get it, you’re trying to
influence, your going to a lecture
about influencing people, doesn’t
mean that you have to be the last
one through the door so After You.
PERSON 1
Ladies first how about that?
PERSON 2
You’re clever aren’t you, last time
I heard that I fell off my
dinosaur.
PERSON 1
Oh did you, Oh did you, right, so I
tell you what, why don’t I wait for
your dinosaur to arrive first, then
you and your dinosaur can go in
first, so After You with your
dinosaur.
2.

4. PERSON 2
You think you’re funny don’t you?
PERSON 1
I don’t think I’m funny.
PERSON 2
Does that joke work down at the
comedy club that you work at?
PERSON 1
(annoyed)
I don’t work at the comedy club.
PERSON 2
Do you tell that joke to your mum?
PERSON 1
(annoyed)
I don’t work at the comedy club!
PERSON 2
I mean look at you, why you even
here, you’re not ready for this
type of conference.
PERSON 1
(confused)
You see thats not necessary, I
don’t understand what your doing.
Please I’m asking you, I’ve been
unemployed for four years okay?
PERSON 2
I’m playing the worlds smallest
violin for you. Nobody cares old
timer! Now, After You.
PERSON 1
(sad/annoyed)
I’m asking you, please... I DON’T
EVEN KNOW WHY I’M ASKING YOU! After
You!... AFTER YOU!
PERSON 2
(aggressive)
AFTER YOU!
PERSON 1
Just go in.
They both start pushing one another/both fed-up with each
other just wanting this to end so they can both get to the
lecture in time.
3.

5. PERSON 1 (CONT’D)
After You.
PERSON 2
After You.
PERSON 1
After You.
PERSON 2
Af-ter You.
PERSON 1
After You.
PERSON 1 (CONT’D)
Oh fuck sake, you fucking bastard!
You fucking bastard! Now we’re
locked out! Look at what it says
there “No late comers”, this is
your fault.
PERSON 2
My fault?!
PERSON 1
Yea your fault.
PERSON 2
My... fault?!
PERSON 1
Oh I’m so upset right now
PERSON 2
Fuck you...
PERSON 1
Oh yea, nice.
They continue talking as they both walk into the distance
towards the exit of the building.
PERSON 2
After you.
PERSON 1 fed up with PERSON 2, having had enough of his
attitude and enough of the whole conversation, storming off
back towards the conference area.
PERSON 2 (CONT’D)
Hey where you going? After You!
4.

6. PERSON 1 looking back as he continues walking on towards the
conference area.
PERSON 2 stars walking down toward the conference area
checking where PERSON 1 has wondered off to.
PERSON 1 starts punching his fists into the air trying to
release his anger towards PERSON 2.
PERSON 2 starts hiding behind the wall hoping that PERSON 1
will walk right passed him.
PERSON 1 walks up off the bench, and looks at the exit,
seeing that the coast is clear he starts to walk to the exit
happily assuming that PERSON 2 has walked out of the
conference block.
As PERSON 2 lets out a whistle, he starts laughing whilst
PERSON 1 turns around.
The doors start closing as PERSON 1 smiles and looks at
PERSON 2 trapped behind bars.
PERSON 2 stares at person one as he walks off and suddenly
gets hit by a car. As PERSON 2 is staring at PERSON 1 he
doesn’t notice it but the doors start closing.
PERSON 1 answers with all the strength he can.
PERSON 1
A...A..After Y...Y...You.
PERSON 2
Af-ter You.
PERSON 1
A...A...A..
5.