Start like a Breaking News Headline (Story telling).
Write and Write Again (About 150-250 words).
Tone of Voice (Skip Jargon).
Hook in First Seven Seconds (To pitch like a PRO).
Speak what is most Relevant (No longer than 60
Be Yourself and simply show your Expertise.
“Great to meet you, I’m
Kelly with Apollo
Enterprises. We’ve been
able to improve
collaboration for teams all
over the world. If you ever
need help with project
management, just reach
out. I think we could make
a huge impact on your
company. I’ll make sure to
keep your contact
information handy as well.”
My name is John Doe, CEO of XYZ Inc. Our company
deals in outsourcing software for small business
owners who need help with mundane and repetitive
office support tasks.
Unlike competing software, our outsourcing tool
identifies your pain points and delivers a report with
valuable recommendations to help you know the
exact tasks to outsource.
Would you like a free trial to learn how it works?